HP Polar Star Light

The writing is good, the characters are well set, and the plot is great. I love this book! 1. Writing style: The author has said that he particularly likes the translation of Ma Aixin and Ma Ainong. Probably because of this, the writing style is particularly close to the original translation. At the same time, there are also some clever jokes about the Weasley family and other characters from time to time, which are exactly the same as the cold humor of the original work. When reading, you feel like you are reading the original work. 2. Character design: There is no OOC at all. Take Draco, for example, he was a stinky daddy boy in the early stage. Even after he grew up quickly in the sixth grade, he had no ability to "do big things". Therefore, except for the sixth grade, Draco in this article is basically free from the main line of fighting against Voldemort. In addition, even the seventh grade, because his character and ability are indeed not able to do some big actions, such as taking the lead in resistance, etc., So these things are mainly done by Praris. Of course, Draco also discovered the specialty of alchemy under the guidance of Praris, which has grown a lot compared to the original work. In fact, I have also questioned that Praris is already perfect, so why did she fall in love with Draco, who has almost no outstanding abilities except his appearance. The author also told the answer later. What Praris lacks is the ability to love, and Draco, a person who has been pampered by his parents since childhood, can give her unreserved love. This kind of emotion is still very touching. Another thing that impressed me deeply was the handling of the relationship between the snake and the lion. Because the story unfolds from the perspective of Prayris, a Slytherin, it will inevitably make people think that Gryffindors are reckless and biased, but it is not deliberately smeared. After all, the snake and lion students have their own shortcomings [laughs]. Later on, Prayris also saw the courage of Gryffindor and was moved. Moreover, the author did not clear Snape's name. The article mentioned that Praris understood Harry's hatred for Snape, which was determined by Snape's attitude towards Gryffindor towards him. It is really commendable that Snape was not completely cleansed because of his preference for Slytherin. I personally feel that if he was completely cleansed, it would be a denial of Snape, a complex character. 3. Plot: The daily plot in the early stage is very good, making the friendship and love after the war very touching. I personally like the friendship between the four girls in the Slytherin dormitory and the friendship between Praris and Hermione. It is really gratifying to watch them from the unilateral guidance and help of Praris to the spiritual support and companionship of Praris later! I especially like the seventh-grade plot at the end. The school life that was briefly mentioned in the original work allows us to see another side of the story, and the supporting characters in the original work also shine with a different brilliance. I wrote so much without realizing it. I really like it. Thank you to the author for bringing such a good story!

Judging from the current plot, it is pretty good. The students of Slytherin all have their own unique characters, such as Millicent's handling of friends and family conflicts; Pansy's confusion about self-worth; Daphne's "unruly"; Prayris's cleverness and near-demon; everyone in Diagon Alley's love for Pray; Slytherin's silent treatment of children's mistakes; Professor Sprout's motherly love; and Flint and others... They are no longer just passerby NPCs, but have their own personalities. The perspective chosen was that of Slytherin, and he did not interfere too much with the three protagonists. He was more of a silent guesser than a blind licker. I hope that the follow-up can maintain its characteristics, and silently hope that the period of teaching will have a good ending.

Super Invincible is explosive and beautiful, the original characters are three-dimensional, the original characters are not OOC, and the storyline has ups and downs. It is my top HP fan! This is a book that can bring people a lot of thinking and inspiration! I really, really like the character of Pule. She made me get to know Slytherin again. She is a Slytherin but her stance is biased towards the Order of the Phoenix. It is always easy to appear in similar novels, but it does not appear at all in this book! It is obvious that Pule is a Slytherin, but her kindness and her cherishing of love are also obvious. She is smart and talented, but not superior. She is the master of power, not a slave. To be honest, her final action of destroying the potion really surprised me. It was not until I saw the beginning of the second brush that she called her magic "devil" that I finally understood it. At this point, I saw the shadow of Dumbledore in her, which also touched me very much.

A wonderful HP fanfic, so good that I thought it was a paid novel. The heroine has a unique design. There is no plug-in such as opening a game system, but she has a brain similar to Sherlock Holmes. Although he had an unfortunate childhood, he was raised very well after entering Hogwarts, and gradually blossomed into a North Star-like brilliance. He established many bonds, both in terms of family ties (some of the older generation people who care about the heroine are not related by blood, but I call them family ties when it comes to love), and in terms of friendship. The protagonist's soul is as shining as a star. Although the world has given her suffering, she treats the world with a warm heart. Who can reject a person who is strong and smart on the surface but is actually kind and warm? I can't. Yes that's right I'm in love with her. The other character creations in the original drama in the article are also very suitable, and Si Jiao is especially outstanding. Every time I see Si Jiao spraying venom, I feel like, wow! It's so cool to scold! But it must be difficult to write, it's a long and difficult sentence to curse people. I read the Goblet of Fire chapter in one sitting, and I really enjoyed it more and more. A perfect fan worthy of daily updates! Please stick to it until the end [love], because your writing is really beautiful.

The writing is very good, unlike most Slytherin heroines who are not malicious towards Gryffindor, and they don't have any powerful background or golden fingers. The protagonist's IQ is online. But I like to collect articles, so, see you when it's finished. It's so good! One of the best HP fanfics I have ever seen! I love it so much, the heroine is amazing! Not the bully Slytherin in traditional fan fiction! Connotative, well-educated, and extremely smart!

To be honest, the quality of this book is really high. The plot is smooth and the protagonist has a three-dimensional and distinct image. He is a qualified Slytherin, but he is not completely addicted to it. He is a very charismatic person.

It's so good. The writing can be ranked in the top three among Tomato HP fans (personal reading history judgment). Although it is currently very short, the content is very exciting. It understands friendship from another angle, not just a simple friendship, but it is indeed the most touching. The male and female protagonists also have a very good cp feeling. The logic of the whole article is also very smooth. At least I did not find any big bugs. The plot is smooth and the characters are also very good. I like it very much. Thank you for your love. I hope you can stick with me. Thank you very much.

It's really super beautiful, [sending heart] [sending heart] [admiration] [admiration] although the content is still a little short. But who knows, every time the heroine speaks. The analysis and thinking, as well as the content of the article, are all like Snape narrating, and there is a sense of ridicule in every paragraph! It makes people laugh and feel comfortable after reading it. There is a kind of satisfying and well-founded feeling of making complaints [full] [full] [full]! It's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]! So I tied it! ! Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The child is hungry and out of food! Much faster and faster [please ask for more explosive updates] [please seek more explosive updates] [please seek more explosive updates]! I hope it ends smoothly and I don't want any eunuchs! Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This is the best HP fanfic I have ever read so far. The author describes each character very carefully, and each character has their own inner monologue. The author also writes that Slytherin is not cold-blooded, Narcissa loves her son eagerly, and is willing to take the blame for Draco. Winnie also loves Pule, and she will even apply to a foreign magic school for Pule. Pansy and Daphne are not as arrogant and rude as in other novels. They will also treat their friends and family sincerely. It is really beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful.

Just looking at the cover, I would never have guessed that it was such a high-quality work! Super well written! ! The logic of Meibao's reasoning process can stand up to scrutiny. I feel that I am a person with particularly strong reasoning ability! Gives people a sense of security! Smart and reassuring! The characters are all well-written, and the relationship between the younger sister and her best friends is also very real! It is one of the few articles I have read that describes Slytherin's daily fights and bickering rather than one-sided portrayal of other Slytherin characters!

The description of the heroine's rational and genius character is very natural and in place. In the first few chapters, you may always see a lot of thinking and analysis and rapid thinking in the heroine's mind, but if you continue reading, you will find that these descriptions are actually foreshadowing (the descriptions in subsequent chapters will be more streamlined after something happens) The heroine will become extremely charming after coming into contact with different people and things. Some people may think that Draco is not strong enough so why the heroine likes him, but after seeing the heroine's perception of love, you will gradually realize how valuable Draco's pure love is. (I personally think that the male and female protagonists are actually very complementary) and they are very suitable for each other! In addition, although I feel sorry for Xiaolong's dark and chaotic days, I really enjoyed this plot. After all, men's tears are women's stimulants. [Thinking] The author has a strong literary foundation. In addition, there are many descriptions of political games that are very exciting. Also, the description of family love and friendship in this book is really beautiful! ! !

After looking through all the comments, it seems that everyone has the same taste, except for the one with one star. Really, I think this is the only story where the protagonist is perfectly portrayed and grows up without relying on cheats. Other authors don't know how to reasonably add super powers to the characters. Then they arrange a bunch of golden fingers, or all kinds of children born by all kinds of random CPs, which is simply outrageous. I even saw boys knocking off Dumbledore and Voldemort [laughing awkwardly]. I love our little snake Pupu so much. It would be great if you, the author, could update more. Although, quality comes first! Persistence, come on💪

The Book of Gods is really beautiful. It is different from other Harry Potter fan fictions, which are mostly cool. Although it is a female novel, it has the ambition and desire of Slytherin, and a slight sense of madness, but it can risk its own life for the people close to it. The author's writing style is very good, There is a lot of original content, and the protagonist is brought to life. Most people can never write such delicate emotions. The protagonist Golden Finger is not outrageous, and the growth path is traceable. I have read more than a dozen hp fanfics, but I think this one is the best. The supporting characters in this book are also very good.

This is a very well written fanfic with a very good description of love, life values and marriage relationships. The quoted concluding words are "When you are about to cry for missing the sun, you are also about to miss the stars." When it's time to pursue boldness, don't back down. "Love should be expressed in time. Some things, if you miss them, you will miss them for life." - Recommended to listen to "Love Too Late" Ku Juji and "White Paper Crane" Li Hacken, classic songs, the lyrics are very good, very classic Because of love, people will have responsibilities. Reason often determines what people should do in their own best interest, but the sensibility of responsibility will overturn everything. There is no reason, just because of love.

My first impression of this book is that, especially for literary youths, the author's literary reserve is simply astounding. I have always believed that people who love literature have very deep sentiments, souls and even intelligence. The second feeling is that the characters are very, very close to the original work. The author is really careful and sophisticated. Generally speaking, when writing online articles, the main focus is on how to lay the groundwork for the next climax to arouse the reader's emotions. In order to retain the reader, the climax comes very quickly, one after another. Even if the foreshadowing process is unreasonable, this book is really like telling a story, not just to make the reader happy, but as if it is really recalling what happened in the past. Being immersed in the scene, I felt as if I had gone to Hogwarts with young Prince. The feeling of youth was something I only realized after reading the entire book. Then after watching the extras, when everyone grew up, I suddenly realized, oh, everyone's youth is over, and what followed was a sense of loss. It really doesn't look like a novel, but more like a memoir. (This is a bit like My Little Pony hahahaha, I'm going too far) Third, and most importantly, the heroine is really a very flesh-and-blood person. Her secret pain in childhood, the ambiguity of love, and the care of relatives and friends unfold little by little. Because the first perspective of this book is the heroine, it is easy for us to fall into a kind of relationship with the heroine. The same sense of confusion, that is, the confusion about oneself, cannot truly see the heroine as a whole person, because this is the heroine's perspective, and people themselves cannot see themselves clearly, so in many aspects of the heroine, the reader needs to slowly discover the essence of this person's soul through details. I won't allow anyone to disobey this big cheese! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Especially for those who eat for free the food that the chefs have worked so hard to prepare, and then maliciously give low marks because they don't like a certain pair of CPs. I will always support the author! ! ! ! Zhimen! ! ! ! ! ! (High school seniors don't have time to read this book carefully. I will read this book over and over again after the college entrance examination!!!!) Finally, cheese, I really beg you, write more, just like feeding the chickens, write more, how can I live without you, how can I live without you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Polaris really lives up to her name, guiding people in the way forward. She guided others, whether it was Draco or her friends. Pansy gave up her fate as a love brain to pursue the definition of love. She tells Millicent that she doesn't need to feel sorry for herself, allowing her to shine at Quidditch. Daphne is an extreme pure-blood, but she also has a gentle and delicate side. Draco gave up his obsession with Potter, made unprecedented efforts, and defeated Gryffindor in an honest and fair manner. In this book, I saw the brilliance of too many little people and felt their unique charm. Praris, she is also guiding herself. She struggled desperately to escape the mire. She is a Slytherin, but she is by no means refined and self-interested in the traditional sense. She cherishes every relationship, so when she has a cold war with Millicent, she bows her head first. She will help her classmates as much as possible while protecting herself, even if the other person is a Gryffindor. She also longed for family affection, but she buried this feeling deep in her heart because it was impossible. It's because of this vulnerability, kindness, and longing that this character comes alive. Praris lived too soberly, to the point where sometimes she even wanted to shut herself into a sweet dream, but couldn't.

! ! ! Highly recommended! The author's logic is very rigorous, and the narrative rhythm is well grasped. There is no detailed description of the main plot. Praris is just a bystander's perspective. He does not participate in the protagonist group throughout the whole process, but provides some ideas and help from time to time, so that this fanfic does not appear redundant and is very suitable to my taste. The author has his own understanding of each character, depicts each girl beautifully, and gives them a good ending. The author's book list is also very rich, and the quoted sentences are very appropriate, making the characters three-dimensional. The author is really knowledgeable [I admire], and some English words and common sentences are also thoughtfully given (...), So attentive ❤️ This book is rich in content, with our Polaris as the center, and has a long-lasting warmth. It feels like I am a family member watching Xiaopu grow up, witnessing her changes and growth. Her rationality, calmness, wisdom, kindness and other qualities are what I have always longed for. She deserves the best! Her family lines also moved me. The most profound one is naturally the relationship with Snape. The author is really good at writing! The various concerns and reactions of Snape in the novel are in line with the character and integrated into his own understanding. Ah, Sijiao, he finally opened up his heart to a certain extent. Of course, there are also some of Xiao Pu's mothers [laughing] Draco is also very cute, with his various reactions when facing Xiaopu. The initial arrogance, and later the inner pain, struggle, self-deception, etc. Of becoming a Death Eater are all written out. Praris thinks rationally, but the characters in the book still make emotional decisions. The one who impressed me most was Anna Prince. Her ideals and beliefs defeated the desire to live. It was quite unexpected, because Praris is the protagonist, and she is always so reliable. When I came up with the idea, I naturally thought that Anna would accept her opinion and survive, but she refused. When Draco was injured by Potter's Shadowless Blade, my heart was in a state of trepidation and I really cried [crying][crying][crying] When it comes to the innovation of potions and explaining the theory of the soul to Voldemort, I can't help but sigh that the author is really awesome👍🏻 Extra weddings, descendants, and personal biographies are all very interesting (≧ｗ≦)

Judging from the design of the story itself, it is not the "cool" style that has been popular in recent years, nor is it a "rescue" routine. It provides a more objective understanding of Slytherin as a college, as well as Slytherin's choices and life in the context of war. It is not like a refreshing novel that can make up for our childhood regrets and make us feel happy about the villain's destined ending. Instead, it uses a color of fear to exaggerate the difficulty of the protagonist group's success, which further highlights the dedication and bravery of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. From the perspective of the heroine's character creation, I really love this design of a relative who is not "saving" Snape, but a relative rather than a lover. I have read too many fan works about Snape falling in love, but based on my understanding of the character, Snape has lost the courage to love, even though he never had it. I think his love is just the afterglow of Lily's love that he got in his teenage years. But this article, an extremely smart and perceptive child, gave Snape a kind of family support who was missing in his childhood. I think this is the only reasonably good ending for him. Judging from the emotional line of the heroine, it is rare to acknowledge the despicable nature of some little girls in Draco and Slytherin. But the love and hate between young men and women are complex and distinct, like sour apples with immature sweetness. They can express love and hate easily, and they can also feel relieved because of each other's hugs and eye contact. Her relatives, female alliances and connections are a love nest that warms the heroine and brings stability to her soul. Love is the greatest magic. The author can understand Rowling while creating a fleshed-out character. I think this is a good fanfic. In my mind, this book should be rated 9.5 Or above, because it is only 9.2 Now, so I will give it a perfect score and average it [laughs]

It is a very delicate book. It can be said that this book has a double thread of yin and yang. The protagonists of the original book took a yang thread to defeat Voldemort, while our Slytherin protagonist took a yin thread to defeat Voldemort. Pule's image is well established. She is the kind of person who is very careful and smart, taking the overall situation into consideration and focusing on eternal interests. Not only her, but other characters, large and small, are all three-dimensional and full. You can feel everyone's choices and everyone's growth. Basically no OOC! Pulei truly changed because of love. You can feel that the emotions of the people around her are sincere. Although they are different, they are all touching. It is because of this love that she moves towards the light. In addition, the relationship between her and Draco is very natural and really sweet. The long and detailed description makes it easy for people to accept the emotion between them. Finally, I was amazed at the author's knowledge reserve. There are many references in the book, and most of them are Western legends, classics, etc., Which are not ridiculous and made me feel very deep. The transitions in the book are also very appropriate. When I read it, I felt like I was watching a movie, with a strong visual sense. It's really a rare and good book!

In fact, I haven't finished it yet, but this book deserves a full five points or even better. The plot is logically self-consistent, the narration is detailed, and the descriptions are appropriate. Some modern accents occasionally appear in the early parts. The writing becomes more mature as you go further, and the details and characters are very well portrayed. The other world derived from this has all the details it deserves, as well as all reasonable love and pain. The heroine participates in and affects the plot related to the original work through her own smart and powerful settings. She is not obtrusive or OOC, which is very reassuring. But the cover font design is a bit sloppy... It's completely underestimated by the cover mistake, right? ! And common situations (there are some proper misuses After reading it, Xiaosheng felt so good that I started to wait for the extra episodes and read it again... Oh my, I really have obsessive-compulsive disorder. If this book becomes a reality, I must read it again and fix the typos. Okay, ah ah ah ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

The character is good-looking and has a distinct personality. He has advantages and disadvantages. The protagonist does not have a big golden finger. Victory is inseparable from the protagonist's hard work and hard work and everyone's hard work. It is really hard-won. It is very anxious to watch. The protagonist is capable but does not play with black magic to tease the god of death. He knows how to restrain and respect uncontrollable forces. The characters are grounded and not hanging in the air. Both Si Jiao and Lao Deng are very complex characters. The details are also well created and have a sense of reality. Some parts of the writing are quite philosophical and poetic. When I read that Lao Deng stood at the door of the old house he had never returned to since he was 19 years old, opening the door to reconcile with himself, I also shed tears. This is probably the charm of fan fiction. Through the author's writing, we can glimpse the possible if lines. Those characters who are difficult to reconcile can finally end their pain and gain inner peace.

I personally feel that this book has a very high level of character and emotional portrayal. At least among the books I have read so far, this book has the best portrayal. While reading, I sometimes wanted to give up the book because I felt that some aspects of Praris' emotions did not meet my expectations. However, after reading it, I also figured out that people are inherently complex, especially emotions. Praris does not exist because of my thoughts. Such complexity makes her character more full, rather than the personification of an adjective.

Like. But I don't know how to say it. The inner pull, entanglement, uncertainty and blank space of the characters give readers plenty of room for imagination. When I read novels, I often look at the tags and demining points. I used to think that men and women were okay, but then after doing some things, I just looked at the male-male or no cp, group portraits. When I first started reading this book, I thought it was very good. The only drawback was that it was for both men and women. I just listened to the book before going to bed at night to relax and unwind. I was so stressed during the exam that I felt trapped listening to this book, which was like giving up on the book. After I finished the exam, I clicked on the bookshelf again. When I saw the title of the book, I thought about reading it. Throw away the label. As I read it bit by bit, I forgot the label, and found that this book attracted me more and more. Praris's personality charm always made me forget that she was still young, but when I saw her childish side, I suddenly remembered that she was just a child. This book made me discover that apart from music, art, etc., What best embodies emotions and personal thinking is words. The author's profound understanding of the character he created is not simply white, black, or simple gray, but white and black (not). It is delicate and the most three-dimensional explanation of the character. The most profound analysis, literary, and philosophical words made me feel bright. Finally, I know how the Chinese teacher said that articles written by people who have read a lot of literary books and those who don't read them have different depths:/. I really like it( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ(/^▽^)/

This book portrays the heroine very well. It is rare to see a friendship story about Slytherin, which is really good. The heroine is also very powerful. She is very powerful but also growing. Although the heroine is very strong, she also does not forget to create rich portraits of other women. Many people, such as Ginny, were originally not interested in Ginny in the original book. The author also created an unlikable Ginny at the beginning. Later, her transformation as a DA leader was well written. I don't really like watching love stories, so there are very few love scenes, so it's okay. The one who is dissatisfied is the son the heroine finally gave birth to. Eh. The previous episode was still immersed in the perfect female protagonist's family, and the next episode became the protagonists' sons fighting each other. Ah.

A very, very, very good book. Everyone is a good kid. All the characters' actions are based on their own cognition and experience. Even if they do something wrong sometimes, they will repent or apologize or be punished for it. The characters are portrayed very, very well, and the author must be highly praised. At first glance, the author looks like he has read a lot of books. The emotions and writing style he expresses naturally are one of the few "books written by adults" that I have read in HP fan fiction, rather than something very childish. The three views are upright and respect for everyone (whether it is the professor, School Deng or whoever, respecting teachers is really great), the emotions of the characters are transformed very, very well, and the plot development is also great. There is no whimsical attempt to save everyone in HP, but an effort based on reality. It's so good, it makes it more real when you cry and laugh at the same time. Finally, everyone must read this book. This is a complete world, a beautiful version of Harry Potter! PS. If the author is willing, can you give me a list of recommended books? I really like the many quotes, adaptations, etc. In it. I really enjoy this!

So well written! The author's writing style and literary quality are very good. When quoting Western literature, it is not obtrusive and appropriate. I don't think he has ever used insulting words for women (changed to scolding dad/bei), and the reading experience is comfortable. The plot is logical, the potion research is well-founded, and the descriptions of the interactions and relationships between Slytherin students and others are rare and realistic, without being OOC to the original characters. Pule is particularly powerful and charming (both magically and spiritually), strategic and principled, and will not let himself suffer. There's a lot more I want to say, so I'll add the review after reading it! In the later period, there were still occasional insults to women. It would be perfect if they could be changed (just a personal suggestion) This book actually has no outline, and the plot development, character plots, and character comparison groups are closely linked to each other. He wrote a more vivid and real Slytherin, broke away the college prejudice, and wrote a three-dimensional and complex human nature. It can be seen that Dada has thought deeply about character psychology, the meaning of life, the impact of emotions on choices, etc., So philosophical thinking is often reflected in the dialogue and actions of the characters (such as Pry and Dumbledore) It's not OOC at all (no matter which college it is), and the writing is often very humorous. The complaints between Si Jiao and Pule, Ron's comedy, Dumbledore's playfulness, etc. Are all very interesting. The tacit understanding between Si Jiao and Pule, the development of their master-disciple and "father-daughter" friendship is also very interesting. Thank you so much, many people are still alive/getting better, which fulfills my big wish to read fanfiction. After watching the ending, I feel very happy and warm, and I hope that you and we can be surrounded by love [Love] ps: The development of Pule and Draco's love line is very detailed, but there is only one kiss in the whole book's intimate description. Is this right? [Explore]! It's so pure love, I've been looking forward to some content that's not pure love (

Personally, I think the characterization is very good, but it is too daily for me personally, and the character growth seems to have entered a bottleneck period. There is no clear breakthrough, which makes people anxious. The protagonist himself is not flexible enough. Draco is too reductive and has never experienced any difficulties, so his growth is very slow. It always gives me a feeling that just because he is the chosen male protagonist, Xiao Pu has to drag him, protect him, tolerate him and finish him off. I personally feel a little tired. But this is also the charm of this book. You can read the story from another perspective, that is, Slytherin's perspective, and then use a little manipulation to change the fate of some people. The perspective is very new, and it is very immersive to read. If you like long and daily-oriented stories, you can read it. The writing is very good. Let's add five stars. Almost every girl's portrayal is sparkling, so much so that it's acceptable for a little pendant like Draco, who is favored by the author, to come out occasionally. Although the main plot follows the original plot, it is a picture of life drawn from the perspective of Slytherins. These Slytherins are no longer the background of the protagonist, but people of flesh and blood. They are not NPCs and will not appear only because of the protagonist's line of sight. Beyond the line of sight, they also have difficult choices in their own lives and different subsequent growth, which is equally touching. In addition, the portrayal of Sijiao is too charming. Although it is a family line, the Sijiao written by the author is too charming. It is not because of the shallow preference for the protagonist in other people's writings, but because of his own charm as an authoritative Slytherin dean, as an outstanding potion genius, as a lonely and restrained double agent, as the leader and escort of the protagonist. He is not an adult man who can be summed up simply as "hard-spoken and soft-hearted". Also, I personally like the confusion and awkwardness when being firmly chosen by Xiao Pu, which is really cute (gasp). In addition, this Qingshui novel is this Qingshui, my family, there is no oil or water at all [crying] If you like group portraits, just watch it, it's so good

It's a very good work. I read it for several days before finishing it. I also read several HP fan novels. The quality of this one is beyond doubt. The heroine's wisdom and calmness are deeply rooted in people's hearts. I believe the author must be very smart too! You can write such a character, and the relationship between the heroine and everyone is particularly well described. The character design is very stable, as if this character has always existed here, the writing style is natural and smooth, and even the villain thoughts of Voldemort's Death Eaters are very three-dimensional! ! ! It's great [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] It's so beautiful and I love watching it! ! !

It's very beautiful and blends well with the original plot. I watched it in one sitting and it was so enjoyable! ! ! (I was originally not very interested in this book title and Draco's cp. I forgot that I took Amway because it overlapped with my favorite book list. I really want to thank him) What I like very much is that the character's behavior is related to the influence of the character's past experience on the character, not just to the character's characteristics (poor words, I don't know how to describe it, it seems that the character is a collection of past and present, a movie, rather than a stereotyped presentation of a character, a picture)

Very delicate feelings, makes me cry😭😭😭 Basically everyone who appears has a growth line, which is really amazing. The author is a knowledgeable and gentle person. As for OOC, all fans have OOC. I just came here for the storyline. In fact, I didn't like this couple at first, but their growth later on was fascinating. Even if you don't like them being together, so what? Life is theirs, as long as they live happily. To them, I am a person they don't know at all. I only got a glimpse of part of their lives through the author's broad descriptions. Life is theirs to live. I'm glad that this book was finished when I read it again, so I don't have to worry about their future. Congratulations on the completion and flowers on completion! 🌹🌹🌹 I forgot to mention that the girls get along really well, and I wish the author a happy life every day.