I Planned to Focus on School in High School, but Somehow Fell in Love

Although the author said that this is his Virgo, the writing is very good😍😍The plot is very compact and the execution is smooth. Just a few minor flaws in a few places. The male protagonist has never been given a specific image, and he is a little uncomfortable with imagination. Moreover, when it comes to writing details, the author spends a lot of space writing about actions and language, but he is stingy with words in terms of attitude and psychology. When creating an image, you can use more comparisons. You can not only use people to compare, but you can also use objects such as flowers, wind, and sunshine to express the image. Also, the frequency of large paragraphs in the first few pictures is a bit too high, making it uncomfortable to read. Finally, in terms of plot, we can have more linkages and write some hot topics from novels outside the industry. For example, when writing about military training, we can have game points from Luo Yelaodeng, Shen Qiaoer; Lu Yibei and Qingqian Heroine. Maybe I have said a bit too much, but the author is still very good! You can take a look at these small suggestions😝😝The author is working hard to update😗As an original stock, I hope this novel can produce results😘😘 @

Well written, cheers

I like it very much. Please give it a try, the author.