The Water Falls and the Cuckoo Calls, but the Lone Goose Cannot Escape the Mountain Temple

I Wrote a Novel, but I Think It’s Pretty Bad. Can Someone Take a Look?

I'm looking for books like The Water Has Fallen, the Lone Goose Can't Escape the Mountain Temple. It's my first time writing, and I've already written 60,000 words. Lately, I've lost the motivation to keep going.