It's so Cool to Be the Villain in a Cool Article on a Male Channel

The author has written this book very well, but there are too many descriptions of appearance so far. I hope the author can reduce it a bit so that it will be more perfect. Overall, the plot is good, but it can be seen that the author may not be good at writing detailed descriptions. Whenever I see detailed descriptions, I feel an uncomfortable feeling, but I believe that the author can continue to work hard and turn shortcomings into advantages. Also, don't describe anything that is not necessary. This will make people feel that it is superfluous. Well, my review ends here. I also hope that everyone will read more after seeing this book.

Although it is okay to use a lot of metaphors and other rhetorical techniques in novels, it is better to keep them as few as possible. Too many rhetorical techniques should score high in a composition, but in a novel it will appear slow and even a bit verbose. You can write it in vernacular to make it more concise. After all, what's important in a novel is not just literary talent, but also content. Sometimes the good lies not in the quantity, but in the essence

It's quite good, but there are too many descriptions of the appearance and there are a lot of plots about the original heroine, but overall it's good and the flaws do not hide the flaws.

(Thumbs up, excited tone) This book is absolutely amazing! Being the villain in a male pornographic novel is a very novel setting. The plot develops in a very exciting way, with various twists and turns, making it extremely enjoyable to watch. All in all, it's so beautiful that you can't stop watching it! (Claps hands excitedly)

Looks good, I really like Senior Sister Yuling, she is so strong and awesome, Wen Xubai is also pretty good

Looking at the introduction, the male protagonist is Wen Xubai [laughing evilly] The writing of Wen Xubai is better [admiration] otherwise it would be difficult to let go of Ji Yuan [laughing evilly] The writing is good [admiration]

ㅎㄹ... It's really crazy. It's a legend. ㅋㅋIsn't it really a genius at this level? ㅅㅂ... If you can achieve this level, you will be a complete god. ㅠㅠ... Please live happily in the future♡ Today, you showed off your handsome angle. It's so cool that even the ants passing by will be amazed (/ω＼)

Can it be said like ai? There are countless incomprehensible adjectives.

I hope I can take Yun Jin into the harem🌚It doesn't matter whether Yuan Ji takes him in or not. Just don't let him become another woman's man🌚

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh but no junior brother, two people for life [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Don't doubt it, if you like to read about strong women, just jump in! ! ! ! ! And the author should update it soon, I can't get enough of this sweet plot! [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

It's great. There are very few books that I can read to the end. I really like the male and female protagonists.

Is the male protagonist Ji Yuan or Wen? I feel like both are fine

Can the author give Yuan Ji a good ending? I'm a bit confused.

Very good, the heroine has a good personality

The more I look at it, the better it looks. Both the male and female protagonists are in my opinion. They should be both clean. I'm really looking forward to the update.

It's super good-looking. It's really good-looking. I hope Yuan Ji can have a good ending.

I think it looks pretty

I don't know why the rating is so low, I highly recommend it. Boring in the back.

Tell Chengya that I won't go back because she hasn't published a new book for too long🙄💅 Please come back and call me when she publishes a new book🌚Now I will favor this novel🌚🌝

Bai Yueguang of the Cultivation World - Senior Sister of the Hehuan Sect, Yu Ling

Very well written! Nice!

I really like Yuling's character design

Like a composition, come on, the author

Not bad, but the atmosphere of other supporting characters is a bit too much

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so pretty

Very cool! Very nice [Send heartfelt message] Don't let this novel go, I wish you a happy New Year's Eve

Love it😍Hahahaha

Very nice, I like it very much.

Not bad, [shy] looking forward to the next content