Playing with His Fiancée at the Beginning, Awakening the Return System

Harem novels must be 5⭐, we harem novel readers just don't like to scream like some single-female protagonists without female protagonists, don't we think so [smile]. It's really good-looking [laughs evilly]

This book is so good, I give it a five-star rating

This novel shows extremely high literary attainments, from structural layout to character creation, from plot presentation to language expression, all showing the author's profound foundation. Structurally, the entire novel has clear layers, with natural and smooth transitions. It is like a precision-operated mechanical structure, with each component supporting each other and jointly promoting the development of the story. In terms of characterization, both the protagonist and the supporting characters have unique character traits and psychological depth, as if extracted from real life and placed in a fictional situation. In terms of plot, on the basis of following logic, the plot is unpredictable, full of suspense and tension, and always attracts readers' desire for exploration. The language of the novel is precise, beautiful and contagious, the words are rich and appropriate, and the rhetorical techniques are used just right, which greatly enhances the artistic appeal of the work. This novel is undoubtedly a shining pearl in contemporary novel creation. [Think]

The writing is still very good. There is nothing poisonous in it. Some parts may be a little poisonous. However, the author also explained it in the comment area. If you can't accept it, you can't accept it. There's nothing you can do about it, right? Author

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It is a very pure and authentic work of Long Aotian cultivating immortals. If you like it, don't miss it. The author's writing style is very good and the speed is stable. It is different from other immortal cultivators who have no sincerity and no brainy templates. Every time you enter a new world, there are also new challenges and tests. This is a sincere work. There are a lot of female characters, but each has their own charm. The author's map outline can also add a sense of immersion to the readers. The author can add content about wits to this development in the future to add more surprises to the story. Overall, it is highly recommended!

It's so cool, the fantasy return system. It's a fantastic fantasy novel, with many female protagonists and a compact plot. It also has the inside story of selecting time travellers. I look forward to breaking through 5,000 chapters. Such a good work should be published as a comic and then made into an anime. I look forward to the author's follow-up.

Read hundreds of books and read more than 2,000 hours First of all, this book is very good. The main plot is clear and the fighting power is not compromised. It is very good to have multiple female protagonists with a little speed. After all, the fairy tale is more interesting if it has a female protagonist. The male protagonist is romantic and decisive in killing. The characters are set well and the concept is clever. It has been updated to this day. It is one of my favorite books. I look forward to the follow-up content. I hope the author can work hard to provide us readers with wonderful content.

To be honest, it's the best among tomatoes. Although it's a little bit toxic, it's not a big deal, and you can read it with your brain. The most important thing is: the author feels very obedient, keep up the good work, and look forward to you writing more exciting content.

This is the first time I have seen such an active author. The novel is quite enjoyable, there is no thunder and lightning, and the author also listens to the readers' opinions. However, it is difficult to agree with others, so there is no need for the author to pay too much attention to some opinions. It's a cool novel, why isn't it popular? After reading it, it is not easy to see QC and basically QS novels in Tomato in the current environment. Therefore I rate this novel 9/10. After all, it is rare. Secondly, it is also excellent as a refreshing novel. Except for a short period of time in the early stage, it is always enjoyable to the end. Of course, there are some flaws. The following are the flaws that I feel are just personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. It involves some spoilers. If it's not a comedy, don't read it. 1. The whole is divided into the lower world, the fairy world, and the divine world. The essence of the three main lines of narrative logic is that someone is blocking the ascension, which can easily make readers feel bored. 2. The plot of Fairyland is too cliche, starting with the recycling of various heroines. On the one hand, it is too cliche and they appear at critical moments. On the other hand, the overall plot is too scattered. There is no clear plot direction at the beginning. The protagonist is running around here and there. It will be better later when the gods come out and there is a clear main line. 3. There are too many female protagonists (this is purely a matter of personal preference). I counted about 25-30 female protagonists with plots. The emotional description is about 20 years old. It seems too much for a novel of over 1.4 Million words. It might be better to have about 15 heroines in a 1.5 Million-word novel, but one in 100,000 words might have more detailed emotional descriptions for each heroine. Of course, as a harem novel, the more the merrier, I don't reject it either, [adoration][adoration] 4. Regarding various small details, I hope the author can learn from this book [sending my heart] I hope the author's next book will be better

I've read over a hundred books recently. This is the only one I could finish. It's really good. I don't know why the attention rate is so low. I really hope the author will continue writing and write thousands more chapters.

It feels very good. I haven't read such a refreshing article in a long time. It's really good, but the update is a bit slow. The production team don't dare to take a break. I updated ten chapters in one day. I heard nothing [angry][angry][angry][angry]

This is the best author I have ever seen. Not only does his world view rival those of great authors, but every point he doesn't understand is explained with pictures and detailed analysis. The author also responds to comments when he sees them. I have never seen such a good author. When it comes to reading novels, in terms of writing style, this novel is actually very suitable for someone like me. All I can say is, it's so good!

This novel is like a bright pearl, shining with a unique light in the starry sky of literature. It is like a delicate picture scroll, slowly unfolding, bringing readers into a wonderful world. The characters in the book seem to be smart notes, jumping on the strings of the plot, playing a moving piece of music. The development of the story is like a gurgling stream, sometimes gentle and sometimes rapid, making people immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. That wonderful description is like a magical key, opening the emotional door deep in the reader's heart. Every word is full of magic, weaving an intoxicating dreamland, and people can't help but sigh: This novel is really super beautiful!

No need to explain too much Very nice, highly recommended

Very interesting. The author also likes to communicate with readers.

There is no big bad point in the book, but the harem is a bit too much, but it is quite interesting. I read it all in one day. I hope the author can keep doing it without losing the ability to fight. I recommend everyone to read it👍👍👍I hope the author can read it (*^ω^*)

The overall effect is good, and the story is enjoyable. The first few dozen chapters may be a bit dull, but after that, it is basically pushed all the way. There are many female protagonists, and the protagonist interacts with the protagonist slowly. It is not like some novels that just give it away and then do not follow up. However, in the later period, due to the rapid improvement of the protagonist's cultivation, the heroines basically became foils. There is no final villain in this novel, the plot is somewhat clichéd, and the pace near the ending is a bit faster. The author is very active and listens to advice, hoping to make a side story.

A particularly beautiful fantasy novel. I read it from beginning to end and had a great experience. The author is also very good at updating it two to three times a day, which is very nice. [Laughing]

It's good to watch and the plot is exciting. It would be even better if the male protagonist kept taking the initiative to expose his realm. Otherwise, you will be looked down upon by the clown every time. A major feature of this book is the description of the harem. In the later stage, there are still plots about the female characters in the early stage. At least the hero won't forget

The protagonist's strength in the relatively good Invincible Streaming System increases quickly through returns, almost all the way, and there are no opponents that are too difficult. Many female protagonists have opened large harems, but the system has become the image of a girl. As a result, the protagonist has nothing to do with the system, and in the end he just runs to an unknown place.

It's very interesting. The author also answered everyone's questions. The author is very attentive and I support it.

The plot is very interesting, my favorite type [laughs awkwardly]

It's well written and the author is very attentive. The replies are also very positive

The structure is clear. Very beautiful, the author is very lively I hope the author will be less astringent

Recommended, must recommend, so beautiful [shy]

It's okay for a whole day, and I can keep reading. The author is very active, and it can be seen that the author is very attentive to this book. He also made some tables and maps in the front, but some small parts are not very logical. Compared with the lower realm chapter, the fairy world and the divine world are a bit hasty to end. The latter divine realm chapter feels like it is just to tell the whereabouts of Zhou Lian, but it does not tell why she ended up in the lower realm.

Let me give you a five-star review first. The opening plot is okay. Let's check it out later. Please encourage me with 4 stars, I will withdraw it.

It's worth reading. The poisonous points mentioned by Low Star have been modified or explained. The author is also very active. I didn't see any poisonous points. Some minor flaws are acceptable. It is recommended for 3000+ hours. I've seen the latest one, and it's actually not bad. There are a lot of female protagonists. As long as it doesn't turn into a stud or harem story, it's okay. It's worth watching.

It's great. I love watching this plot. I like it [laughing][laughing]