I Teased My Fiancée from the Start and Awakened a Rebate System

Harem novels must be 5⭐, we harem novel readers just don't like to scream like some single-female protagonists without female protagonists, don't we think so [smile]. It's really good-looking [laughs evilly]

This book is so good, I give it a five-star rating

This novel shows extremely high literary attainments, from structural layout to character creation, from plot presentation to language expression, all showing the author's profound foundation. Structurally, the entire novel has clear layers, with natural and smooth transitions. It is like a precision-operated mechanical structure, with each component supporting each other and jointly promoting the development of the story. In terms of characterization, both the protagonist and the supporting characters have unique character traits and psychological depth, as if extracted from real life and placed in a fictional situation. In terms of plot, on the basis of following logic, the plot is unpredictable, full of suspense and tension, and always attracts readers' desire for exploration. The language of the novel is precise, beautiful and contagious, the words are rich and appropriate, and the rhetorical techniques are used just right, which greatly enhances the artistic appeal of the work. This novel is undoubtedly a shining pearl in contemporary novel creation. [Think]

The writing is still very good. There is nothing poisonous in it. Some parts may be a little poisonous. However, the author also explained it in the comment area. If you can't accept it, you can't accept it. There's nothing you can do about it, right? Author

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It is a very pure and authentic work of Long Aotian cultivating immortals. If you like it, don't miss it. The author's writing style is very good and the speed is stable. It is different from other immortal cultivators who have no sincerity and no brainy templates. Every time you enter a new world, there are also new challenges and tests. This is a sincere work. There are a lot of female characters, but each has their own charm. The author's map outline can also add a sense of immersion to the readers. The author can add content about wits to this development in the future to add more surprises to the story. Overall, it is highly recommended!

It's so cool, the fantasy return system. It's a fantastic fantasy novel, with many female protagonists and a compact plot. It also has the inside story of selecting time travellers. I look forward to breaking through 5,000 chapters. Such a good work should be published as a comic and then made into an anime. I look forward to the author's follow-up.

This is the first time I have seen such an active author. The novel is quite enjoyable, there is no thunder and lightning, and the author also listens to the readers' opinions. However, it is difficult to agree with others, so there is no need for the author to pay too much attention to some opinions. It's a cool novel, why isn't it popular? After reading it, it is not easy to see QC and basically QS novels in Tomato in the current environment. Therefore I rate this novel 9/10. After all, it is rare. Secondly, it is also excellent as a refreshing novel. Except for a short period of time in the early stage, it is always enjoyable to the end. Of course, there are some flaws. The following are the flaws that I feel are just personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. It involves some spoilers. If it's not a comedy, don't read it. 1. The whole is divided into the lower world, the fairy world, and the divine world. The essence of the three main lines of narrative logic is that someone is blocking the ascension, which can easily make readers feel bored. 2. The plot of Fairyland is too cliche, starting with the recycling of various heroines. On the one hand, it is too cliche and they appear at critical moments. On the other hand, the overall plot is too scattered. There is no clear plot direction at the beginning. The protagonist is running around here and there. It will be better later when the gods come out and there is a clear main line. 3. There are too many female protagonists (this is purely a matter of personal preference). I counted about 25-30 female protagonists with plots. The emotional description is about 20 years old. It seems too much for a novel of over 1.4 Million words. It might be better to have about 15 heroines in a 1.5 Million-word novel, but one in 100,000 words might have more detailed emotional descriptions for each heroine. Of course, as a harem novel, the more the merrier, I don't reject it either, [adoration][adoration] 4. Regarding various small details, I hope the author can learn from this book [sending my heart] I hope the author's next book will be better

To be honest, it's the best among tomatoes. Although it's a little bit toxic, it's not a big deal, and you can read it with your brain. The most important thing is: the author feels very obedient, keep up the good work, and look forward to you writing more exciting content.

Read hundreds of books and read more than 2,000 hours First of all, this book is very good. The main plot is clear and the fighting power is not compromised. It is very good to have multiple female protagonists with a little speed. After all, the fairy tale is more interesting if it has a female protagonist. The male protagonist is romantic and decisive in killing. The characters are set well and the concept is clever. It has been updated to this day. It is one of my favorite books. I look forward to the follow-up content. I hope the author can work hard to provide us readers with wonderful content.