My Little Pony: Stone, Mello, and Empty Pockets

Let's evaluate this book. First of all, my first impression of this book was that it was a surprise. It did not follow the plot of the original drama, but created a new perspective by adding its own original characters to the non-protagonist characters in the original drama. Through this perspective, we can feel the lives of other pony residents. Here, they are living individuals. Secondly, there is a bonus point. The author's writing style is considered to be above average among all the fan fictions. It is smooth and does not feel out of touch. At least in my opinion, this kind of writing style is already rare hh In addition, the logic of the story is clear, and it can be seen that the author is really trying to outline a complete story. He does not pursue the perfect dumpling-making story, which I also like. In the description of various daily life, I can feel the emotion of finding beauty in the ordinary, which is also my favorite point. In short, I hope the author will continue to work hard, maintain this creative enthusiasm, and continue to write this story.

The writing is really good, with delicate emotions. It doesn't follow the same plot as the original plot or the magically modified original work. It writes its own story. The protagonist's own setting and his friends trigger dialogue and interactive contact with the protagonist of the plot, which is not too abrupt. The heroine did not choose one of M6 and Princess, or simply accept them all, but chose Marble, who did not appear many times but left an impression (poor me, I couldn't love Marble in the original work 😢). Worth reading more 💕💕💕

In the dead of night, I accidentally read this fanfic How can I describe my surprise? In this struggling world, it is really a rare blessing to encounter such a "just right" novel. The description of Xiao Ma Yuan's plot is only a small incident that affects the characters, leaving aside the long narrative and complicated plot; it has a slight sense of humor in Western literature, and the seriousness and pathos up to the point are strictly separated from the brainless prose; the projected description of reality - the author seems to be just a student with an unhappy childhood - not only satisfies the small need for a "secondary sense", but also makes people feel sour emotions and thoughts about family and responsibility. It's been a long time since I wrote a book review, but I didn't dare to give it a full score: first, I was afraid that my foggy brain in the middle of the night would interfere with my judgment of the text; second, no one is perfect, and of course there are some flaws, big or small, in this book. (Perhaps 4.5 Stars can better reflect the expectations for the author) So I record my thoughts and look forward to discussing it with my readers.

It's really good to read. The early narration is appropriate, humorous, and the story line is very attractive. Moreover, the author does not write it simply as a utopia, but prefers a light human society. However, at the stage of the protagonist's time travel, I am a bit confused. It feels that there are a lot of foreshadowings. The author writes the results first and then writes the narrative style of the process. Maybe readers missed it or read less, so it is difficult to understand. Anyway, I didn't understand some parts. But it's really interesting. The main part is a story that is mainly comedy and supplemented by tragedy. However, the number of words is still too few. Come on, author, and code words˶ˊᜊˋ˶ @Twilight Wushuang the God of Friendship

I have never written any reviews for My Little Pony fanfics before reading this book. This is my first time. Most of the My Little Pony fanfics I have read are either too mature and cruel and forget the background of the My Little Pony fairy tale, or they are too childish and ignorant and ignore the character creation of My Little Pony. This book is about plot rhythm, character creation, and transitions (I I particularly like this part. Although at first glance the transition was a bit confusing, I immediately understood it after reading it again, and then emm... I think surprise is the best way to describe it) and the foreshadowing is very natural. I think if this novel can maintain this level, it will definitely be another one of the few masterpieces in My Little Pony fan fiction.

I deleted the review I just wrote and apologized to the author. But I still think that the author should delete the introduction that is not Heishen. Even if it were changed to a sentence about dead people... Or dead ponies? Because really, the author, you have a lot of your own ideas about the world view of the original drama, and it can no longer be said that it is the same world as the original drama. And it's hard for me to imagine that after knowing that her future friend would kill her sister on this day, the space princess didn't reveal anything at all, nor did she think of other ways to avoid it. Then with her pleading eyes and determined tone, The protagonist gave up (of course, he never thought about it since he knew the method) Exchange someone else's life for the chance of my sister staying alive It's not that the protagonist is wrong, of course he is right And I believe and know that the protagonist will definitely choose this way But the problem is, you, the author, feel the same way, and so does the universe. It seems that this is the only way for the protagonist to accept his dead sister Just... Weird The two of them never thought of finding other ways, especially the protagonist who has the ability to make his wishes come true. There is no foreshadowing before the crisis (referring to the sudden death of the murderer Dark Night) Just a random person can travel through time and space and change history. The protagonist is in a moral dilemma The protagonist's tragic family of origin in his previous life (A part that pony fans must appreciate) (There are really too many settings for this, I also have another book on my bookshelf) (And the author, the protagonist's parents in the previous life spoke like fake people) (If it is written specifically by the author, it must be written in an image) Having said so much, my core point is actually that Why did my sister die so... Suddenly? (I hope it's not the reason in the introduction that caused the protagonist to go to Ponyville) Why does the universe act like a tool to tell the story in this incident? Why does the protagonist have no idea of ​​using his ability to resurrect his sister? What if you even try? It's already confirmed that you can travel through time and space, why don't you try to resurrect? What if we try to attract souls? Especially the author, you have an incident in which the protagonist is reminded by the soul. Just... Weird Because of the protagonist's ability to make everything he wishes come true It conflicts with his love for his sister and his decadence after her death. With such a high ability, I don't think it's more difficult to resurrect someone who has just died than to travel through time and space. This is not about changing history or anything like that. Really The protagonist's extraordinary abilities Protagonist's Morality The protagonist does not use abilities in order not to affect others Protagonist doesn't try other methods The protagonist becomes confused after the death of his sister No problem But... It feels strange In the end, I still gave the novel good reviews. These words are actually my own evaluation. I hope the author will keep writing

The writing is good, give me back my life, and the emotional line is handled very delicately, give me back my life! Another pillar of pony fandom appears, give my Swell life back!!!!

This book has a kind of tranquility that is hard to see in fan fiction, and the joy in the bitter life. Although it is still very young, if the author insists on writing it and keeps updating it, it will definitely be one of the best pony fan fictions.

This book... The author, can you promise me, a strange reader, that you will finish it? I have been looking for Xiao Mawen for so long, and you are in the first echelon, without a doubt... I will look forward to every update from you... If Sora Kabuto, Marble, and all the characters, whether original or self-created, have a perfect and happy ending, I will thank you from the bottom of my heart for the power of your words...

The writing is very good, and it touches people's hearts. The plot in Chapter 22 is particularly touching. The knife comes so unexpectedly, but it makes people feel that it is real for a moment. Personally, it is easier for me to relate to it and my tears really kept flowing when I read it. I hope that I will not do anything I regret in the subsequent plot.