Yandere? Clear It in One Life!

Hello everyone, I am a new author here. I have been obsessed with novels since I went to college. I also dreamed that I could become a real writer one day, so I tried this book. I also read it after I finished writing it, and then I found that many parts were not very well written and the control was not in place. I had rectified most of them before and after the rectification, it was slightly better. Then I started reading it carefully from the first chapter today and found a problem. The writing is so immature that it's a little cute 🥺 🥺 But I am also doing a lot of an action called reading, so as I write later, my writing style may be slightly better, and it will not become a poison that pollutes the readers' eyes. I now regard writing books as a hobby. As the first book I have written seriously, I will insist on finishing it no matter what the data is! If any readers feel that something is not good or that the control is not in place, just say so directly. As long as you say it is not good, I will try my best to modify it to make it read more reasonably! Come on, come on, come on!!!

At first I thought it was another kind of crematorium for chasing wives, but it's not. Moreover, the protagonist in the back is not the kind of weak feeling who can only act cute. She is the kind of weak feeling that only belongs to Jiang Yue. She can hit hard when faced with provocations from outsiders. Woo woo hoo, girls are so good 😳😳😳 Come on, author, please update more, it's not enough to watch [Blow kiss]

So far it seems pretty good, there is no knife, it's a bit of a routine, we fell in love at first sight and we got together, I haven't seen yet how Yue Hui will turn into a dark person, I'll wait for the author to continue updating 🍉 I want to see blood flowing like a river [sneaky laugh]

I just realized that after reading it for so long, I didn't even write a book review. I have also been reading this book for a long time. The author's writing skills are online, and the characters and plots are also quite good. However, I feel that the story of the two falling in love from the moment they realize it is a bit bland (it does not rule out that I am a TikToker and want to read the training and training in the black room). I am looking forward to the next book by a first-hand author.

So good that you can fly!!!

It's good to see, good luck to the author 👍👍👍👍👍👍

Take a good, good, good look

It's really good to read, but I personally feel that the descriptions don't need to be too detailed (I don't mean to say that this book is not good to read) 😄

Nice!!!! Sweet!!! It is too sweet!!!!!!!!! It's really great that there's no part like chasing a wife!!!!!!!

Sweet little article, quite good 🍉