Fate: Sasuke Jinchuuriki Emiya Shirou

It's super good-looking. Although it's a bit overpowering, there is a crisis. The character growth is obvious. Shirou has made great progress. The relationship with the other heroines is progressing very reasonably and quickly. The threesome in the middle period [Adoration]

Does a score of 6.0 Make sense? It is much better than many 9-point fan fiction. Although the plot is not the kind of surprise, the characters are not out of place and even fit the personality, and the character interactions are also very interesting. Some people say that watching Sasuke kill everyone, firstly, Sasuke does not have this ability. Secondly, the character interaction is more interesting. The writing of this book is very appropriate, and many other fans find it embarrassing. This whole thing doesn't feel awkward at all

Very good, very good, very novel subject matter [laughing evilly] makes Brother Kao angry😡😡😡

I read it in one go and it was very interesting. The author's writing skills are good. Nothing felt out of place during the whole novel. I feel that the author has a good control over each character. Not to mention Shirou and Sasuke, even Shinji, I feel that the author has studied the character design.

The author writes beautifully

A rare masterpiece

Super nice fan [like][like]

So far it looks pretty good, worth a look

He's one of my favorite fans

So which line should we take?

It's so prettyＯ(≧口≦)Ｏ! ! !

It's quite interesting, so embarrassing.

Illya, I almost burst into tears when I read the original novel.

No big problem is very good. No big problem is very good. In my eyes, it is better than most books.

Well, it's good [shy] Although the writing style is a bit green, it's pretty good on Tomato

Not bad, probably the best fate fanfic I've seen on Tomato.

Yes, it's a good article, but the author is too slow to update✋😭✋

Although Sasuke's combat power is suppressed, it does look good. The combat power serves the plot, so I don't think there is any problem.

" "What about the double quotation marks? The author, why do you keep using Japanese quotation marks? I feel so used to it.

It was invincible. I didn't expect it to eat Illya and the two sisters directly. Saber and Rider must have been prepared as well. Also, I hope Shirou can use his own sword more often.

It's okay. It's pretty good so far.

Dream linkage belongs to yes.

Let Sakura marry Shirou quickly, Sasuke [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The IQ is online and the narrative is also very good

Interesting fanfics in Tomato

So beautiful, I'm so blessed with the moon.

It's really good, but it's also really good-looking.

It's okay, but Kiritsugu didn't actually go to save Illya in the original work. An UP owner on station B explained it, called Father

It's just so-so, it's just that some characters and the plot seem to be a headache to write.

It's much better than some 9-rated books. If you put it next door, it should be popular.