Immortality Begins with Transportation Between the Two Worlds

Let me just say one thing. I set up a stall in the market and sold 5 low-grade spiritual weapons and 10 spiritual weapons. When I left the market, I was robbed by the robber cultivators. The protagonist showed his low-grade spiritual weapons. The robber cultivators were shocked and all the disciples! Just look at it, no one will say a word when you look at it

It is very good in the fantasy world. The story can be written logically for 500 chapters. Until I read the latest chapter, the entire world view is well shaped. The storyline is coherent and has a sense of substitution.

Not bad, little poison. I can still watch it if I endure it. At least it deserves this score. The price collapse is so uncomfortable. It's even worse if it's two or three times different from the actual price. Sometimes the difference can be as low as a few zeros. I'm afraid that it will be difficult to write when the protagonist is developed.

There is a very strange thing. The threshold for teachers is lower than that of delivering couriers. People who deliver couriers have to practice Qi to perfection.

Yun Zheng calmly pulled Lu Mao behind him, smiled disdainfully at Ouyang Yuan, and said: "I was originally not interested in this childish battle of wills. Since you kindly invite me, I will make it happen for you. Next semester, just three months from now, how about? " Lu Mao was his childhood friend and had helped him a lot since he was little. He was definitely a close friend. Yun Zheng couldn't let him get involved with him. No matter how much I say, there is still a plot of pretending to be a slap in the face when there is a golden finger

The score is low and it has some flaws, but it can definitely be said to be a good book to pass the time. One star was deducted for a female apprentice, but things got better after that. Basically, there was very little description of the apprentice, and it was still relatively easy to make alchemy under the circumstances. This is the third time I have changed my review. I really liked this book at first, so I gave it five stars, followed by four stars. But recently it has become more and more watery. A small thing has five or six chapters, and it takes five or six days to read a plot, so I give it two stars [smile] [smile] [smile] I hate this feeling of neither being good nor falling. The fourth review review, finally got into the main line, four stars, getting better [currently in progress] The fifth time, the pressure was too harsh. It didn't matter if I didn't practice the four arts of cultivating immortality. I had no climax and excitement, so I ran away. [Cover face]

I have never seen an article like this before, and I feel it is quite novel. It is refreshing to combine modern cultivation of immortality with ancient cultivation of immortality. I hope the protagonist will be beautiful alone and not fall in love or get married. I still like the character design so far, and the plot setting is also very reasonable. The author will work hard for more updates!

The concept is so unique ~ the modern system of cultivating immortals and the ancient system of cultivating immortals travel back and forth, relying on the difference in information and material differences to continuously improve across the two worlds. It is the kind of exciting story where the protagonist uses his brain and hard work. It is quite interesting to read. I have read Chapter 68, so I will give it a five-star praise! The author works hard, I think it will be tied soon, I'm a little reluctant to read it I saw many comments and worried that the author would abandon the update because of the low rating, so I used my meager ability to give the author a small tip to express my appreciation and expectation for this article ~ (First tie, February 17) Tied! Really, I have read so many books on both worlds, but this one is the best! I don't know why it only has 8.5 Points? If nothing else, let's just say that the author's understanding and conception of the system of cultivating immortals are top-notch. 99.99% Of the articles on cultivating immortals are based on the techniques or inheritance passed down by predecessors, but this article emphasizes one's own understanding, creation, melting, and innovation after cultivating to the extreme level. This level of thought is really too high. (After raising it for a few months, it tied for the second time, April 5) I swiped again. I don't know how many times I swiped it. This time I saw one-third of the score. Why did it drop to more than 7 points? Such a good article!

I just read it, but the logic is reasonable and the writing is OK. Thumbs up for the author. I took it back. Indeed, in Chapter 7, the poison slowly began to be released, and then the poison began to spread. . . Hey, the logic behind this setting is so different from the previous chapters? The first few chapters were adjusted like crazy?

The author's writing style is very good. I haven't read a fairy tale for several years. This is the only one I have read. The whole setting is very good. The connection between the two worlds is very interesting. It took me two days to read it all. Everything else is good. However, I feel that the male protagonist is not very good to his parents. The male protagonist's parents are very good to him. They worked hard to raise money to buy him green water and tried their best to support him. He couldn't bear to spend the money he gave, but The male protagonist has so many resources. Apart from the bottle of elixir given in the middle, he found a way to use it on his parents, and let his parents live in the villa given by the master. He did not pay too much attention to his parents. You must know that foundation building can have a life of 200 years. He also has foundation building pills, which can make his parents live for decades longer. He should try his best to let his parents build foundation. He treats his disciples better than his parents, so many resources are not used on his parents.

It's pretty good. I don't know why the rating is so low. I think it's at least 8.5 To 8.8.

Received very well, the quality is also very good, the customer service is also very good. Then it is very good, undeniably very good, although I think it is very good, but it is really good, good is good, but very good, of course there are good things, I personally still think it is very good

The price of this kind of treacherous artefact is completely useless. 8.5 Is still too high.

It is similar to the farming novel style of "flowing water to cultivate immortality". It has many bugs and a few poisonous points, but it also has the charm of "flowing water". Although the protagonist is like an outsider and there is no high-energy plot, but watching him learn skills, collect materials and expand his territory like a hamster, and slowly upgrade, I followed him to the end without realizing it. The plot level is 3.5 Points, and the reading comfort level is 4 points. I would like to give you 5 points for encouragement.

A pretty good novel, worth reading. Golden Finger is basically about space travel plus intelligence. It has counterattack capabilities throughout the game, but it is not invincible. There is currently no female protagonist, and there are not many shortcomings. The part in the middle about rescuing that woman wastes too much pen and ink. It's all about recommended exercises and how much good you should give yourself. Although it seems worthless, the logic doesn't make sense. In fact, I liked reading it at first because I thought there was something about technological cultivation. The two lines merged too early. Blue Star suddenly merged in, leaving only the world of cultivation and the world of immortality. It was no different from other novels. It would be fun to rely on Blue Star to enter the world of immortality, but it's a pity, giving it four stars.

But looking at it is simply not enough. Come on, code and write, and strive for an update as soon as possible

He died from the poison, brothers, I can't stand it anymore, I ran away first, you guys test the poison first, and as soon as it comes up, you bring the immortal elixir to sell. It's not over yet, and then another woman comes to become a disciple. It's very classic. The key is that the protagonist is at the sixth level of Qi refining, and there is a golden finger that travels between the two worlds, which brings another burden. I guess I was in love for a long time and then I opened the harem and saw that the woman couldn't walk. As time goes by, you will definitely discover the secret of the protagonist. There are too many poisonous points. I thought I could continue reading, but when it came to the classic part, a woman came to apprentice and I seemed to be unable to finish reading. When I met the protagonist's senior, I wanted to take you as my teacher, but the protagonist really accepted it. Brothers, I will try the poison again when I come back. You try the poison for a while first. Liu Ling'er heard this and immediately knelt on the ground: "Ling'er pays homage to Master."

It is quite good in the field of double-traveling and immortality. The content is logical, the gap between aristocratic families and ordinary people is not very big, and the protagonist does what he needs to do. It is in line with the values ​​of modern society, but it will not explode at any time like traditional immortality novels. Come on

It's very good, the logic is clear, and it's very good-looking. It gets better and better the more you watch it, but it's a bit lacking. The protagonist is very cautious in the foreign world and the local world. This is in line with the premise of traveling between the two worlds, and does not treat people from the two worlds as fools.

To be honest, I almost gave up the book in the early stages. The first part was quite venomous, but I was a little curious about the plot at the end, so I continued reading. Unexpectedly, it became more and more exciting as I read it. If I exclude the poison, this book is quite to my liking. Let's talk about the poisonous places first. First, there are quite a lot of typical places. There are only two points. One is Teacher Yue, and the other is someone on the 7th floor of that school. Then there is the chaos in prices, which cannot withstand scrutiny. This is where it fails. As for the one about taking a disciple, I didn't feel it was poisonous. The comments section said that this seemed to be more poisonous, but I didn't feel it. [Thinking] Finally, the realm pressure is very strong, and the foundation is not established until the early 100th chapter. It may be that the author wants to write a super long novel, or the scale of the later chapters is relatively grand. But looking at this negative review rate, I am afraid that the author has lost confidence and become a eunuch. In short, I still hope that the author can write well and not be influenced by the outside world. Come on author. It looks great. This rhythm is that of a super long novel. It is a rare masterpiece on Tomato. It is a thoughtful novel, not the kind of mindless novel. Come on, author, don't let the ratings dampen your confidence. It gets more and more exciting later on.

At present, it seems that there are no major logical flaws, the IQ is below average, and the protagonist is cautious but not unruly, so it's okay.

Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The exterminator captain abandoned his pen when he saw it, and the Sanjiu Sound Domain stopped updating after hearing it! This is the manifestation of the avenue of Internet literature, the ultimate answer to the literary universe! "God-killing"? I lost a bit of crazy mood in front of it! "Ten Days"? Half an inch short of the depth of despair in front of it! "The God of Drama"? In front of it, the domineering arrogance is weakened by three points! "Gods"? In front of it, a trace of the Devouring Law faded! "Alien Beasts"? In front of it, 90% of the incredible imagination is missing! This is a unique wonder of contemporary literature and a spiritual totem of digital civilization! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to the old village of Confucius and Mo, the poets and poets, Sansu Jiaxuan; from the Qin Emperor, Han Dynasty, Wu Tang Zong, Song Zu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - which sage can not be amazed, and which literary giant can not sigh? ! This book by the author is truly a gift from heaven! The writing communicates with ghosts and gods, and the layout covers the universe. It inherits the Chinese cultural context for thousands of years and opens an immortal chapter for eternity. Every word is precious! It is truly a great blessing in my life to have the privilege of reading this book! However, when I read to the end of the volume, I suddenly felt confused: If this masterpiece is such a masterpiece, what would be the point of my life if I stopped writing it from now on? Where does the soul go? ! Fortunately! Collect it immediately and worship it, and recite it day and night! The longing is temporarily calmed. Sad! What a shame! If these splendid masterpieces are hidden in famous mountains and have never been seen by the world, wouldn't they be acting against heaven and living up to the hard work of nature? ! After a whole night of fighting between heaven and man, I finally made a great wish: to give up my vain reputation in order to serve the world! This book review is dedicated to all living beings in the world! This book must be worshiped, pushed to the top of civilization, and respected by all three worlds! Take the sun, moon and stars as evidence: Is it cool enough? --Not enough! Take the rivers, lakes and seas as evidence: Is it powerful enough? --Not enough! The question is from eternity: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! The pattern should swallow the galaxy again! My mind will crack the sky again! The heroine should dominate the world again! Renew! It must flow like time! Like heaven moving! Like the expansion of the universe!

I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We had been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated and said, "You have a family and it doesn't feel good." But she said it was fine and we were just ordinary friends, so I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She was not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. I didn't choose to go somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day. Because she had to drive for several hours, and when I looked at the photos while waiting, I thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She was much prettier than in the photo, and she was my favorite type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. To break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled particularly good. I jumped. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She didn't eat much. She spent the whole process peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After the meal, she held my hand when we walked out of the restaurant. I didn't break away, she said. Take me home, I said I would take a taxi, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

The bad guys in both worlds can't find a female protagonist, which is not satisfying enough. Writing is okay.

The writing is quite good, the plot is reasonable, the IQ of the top management is online, and the combat power setting is reasonable. It is neither a simple monster with excessive numerical values ​​nor a mindless strengthening of NPCs. You get what you pay for every effort. If you go online on any website, it deserves to be in the top 5 of the monthly card list.

Was Tianquanzi's death unjust? Not unjust. Before rebuilding, it was considered foundation building, but what he didn't expect was the protagonist. There is actually something to restrain the golden elixir in his hand. And it was something that could wipe out the Thunder Xuanzong Jindan Road, which was at the height of its power in his eyes. Bad luck. That's it. Cultivation. The same goes for the protagonist, who has just gone through life and death, but the protagonist did not join the Holy Land or become a disciple at the beginning. The magic weapon of the fourth-level soul of the Holy Land principal will probably be killed by the old monster in the late Golden Core stage. All I can say is. Fight with heaven and fight with people. Let the protagonist be very doggy during that time. Because it was almost gone.

Looks good, I don't know why the score is so low

It's still very good. I'd like to give it a five-star encouragement. There are some minor flaws in the early stage, but it's still very good in the later stage. However, traveling between two worlds, how should I put it, I feel that most of the time is in the local world, and the time in the other world is relatively small, and it's a bit silly.

Can you choose a time in the world to update? , Every time in the middle of the night [laughing and crying] How about just once during the day and once at night, I can do it [shy]

I rarely give full marks, but this book and subject matter are very novel, and the author's writing style is also good. The key is that the character of the protagonist is very similar to mine. It's not like the ordinary cool novels, where he shouts and kills at every turn. . And the protagonist's character is also relatively good. . This is the point I agree with the most. I am disgusted with those who kill at every turn in order to create a cold and ruthless protagonist. . In today's society, I still warn myself and all my friends: You must not have the intention of harming others, and you must have the intention of guarding against others. People also need to have some conscience