Pokémon+City+System+Long Story+Parallel World
In his previous life, Jet Li died while saving someone from drowning, and accidentally traveled to the world of Pokémon. In this world, Jet Li felt the long-lost family affection. Time passed quickly. When Jet Li got his first Pokémon at the age of 16, the system awakened. However, after Jet Li studied it, he found that the system was somewhat useful, but not very useful. In the end, Jet Li led a group of elves and climbed to the top step by step...
Reader comments
It seems pretty good at the moment, but things start to change when I meet that girl. First, the protagonist's family takes the subway back to the protagonist's home. They meet a woman on the way, and they get to know each other. But when the school starts, it turns out that the girl is a transfer student, and she is in the same class with the protagonist, and they become good friends within a few days. They video chatted about good night, are they good friends? Then they held her hand to watch the protagonist's friends play. His friends said naughty things about his girlfriend, and then the protagonist didn't admit it. They were ordinary friends. The most outrageous thing was that the protagonist's friend said that the protagonist liked that girl. Why didn't he mind? Later, the girl he just met said I don't mind. Now he likes me. It's only been a few days. Do you know where her family is or what her family does, have you known her, etc. They all say that they like her, but they still don't admit it. Alas, the second point is the current strength of the protagonist's family. Grandpa is already a quasi-king. Grandpa currently has four teams. The highest is currently in the middle of the quasi-king, and the lowest is in the early stage of the gym. Grandma is an intermediate trainer, and mom is a beginner. Level trainer, father is a senior trainer, grandpa is a gym trainer and B-level researcher. Grandma's Pokémon is over level 40. Thirdly, grandpa has three apprentices, an apprentice and an adopted son, and grandpa's old classmates. Grandpa has an old classmate. This classmate has the same name as his son. This makes it look like they are from the same generation. What kind of brothers? The eldest disciple is The director's second apprentice doesn't know. He is the adopted son, and the third apprentice is the principal. Yes, the fourth point is that his father conquered new elves right at the beginning. This is good, otherwise I don't know when it will happen, because it is almost meaningless. Father's previous elf protagonists all know that there must be something different. It is impossible to wait until the protagonist reaches the age of 20 or 30, and his father is still the same. Why? Maybe there must be some trump cards, etc. The fifth point is that this book is good. It not only has the protagonist from the perspective, but also Grandpa and the others. For example, there is no protagonist at all in the auction. Grandpa and his apprentices kill the enemies, so that there are more stories to write. If it is about Grandpa and the others in one stroke, what is the point of writing all about the protagonists, so the author writes well in this way. The sixth point is that the land cloud gives opportunities to The protagonist, on the way home, Grandpa's elf enchantment eye is with the protagonist. The enchantment eye senses something, and there is actually a super evolved enchantment eye in the cave. This is good, not only the protagonist, but also other people's. Otherwise, it feels like the protagonist has encountered it, but in the end, others have nothing. The seventh point is to improve the strength. It is best to improve grandpa's, and other people, so that the protagonist is safer. , The protagonist cannot be promoted to the gym all at once, and finally I suggested to my grandfather and father that their newly conquered elves include Bloodwing Flying Dragon, Biting Land Shark, Double Ax War Dragon, Hu Di, Night Demon, Salamander, Nidoqueen, Electric Warcraft, Fire Beast, Poison Skeleton, Sonic Dragon, Crystal Lantern, Vulcan Moth, Leave King, Diya Sea Lion, Metagross, Bulbasaur, Nine Tails, Wind Speed Dog, Dream Girl Demon, Cresselia, Strange Power, Strong Crocodile, Centipede King, Lotte Kappa, Overlord Flower, Abo Monster, Builder, Yanwu King, Snow Demon Girl, Fire-breathing Camel, Three Evil Dragons, Pokkya, Snorkeling Weasel, Forked Bat, Lady Flower Cleanse, Gotha Duck, Baby Protector, Ancient Pterodactyl, Big Chrysanthemum, White Sea Lion, Giant Winged Flying Fish, Dunjia, King Swallow, Super Power King, Howler Whale King, Ancient Feather Worm, Iron Clad Lobster, Ancient Armor, Electric Wolf Spider, Azure Cloud Dragon, etc., And Grandpa and his elves have the sky, the sky, and the sea, but the one in the sea is not big enough. It seems to be just the Swamp King. It is best to have the Howler Whale King, Water Arrow Turtle and others when going to sea. Personal opinions and suggestions, very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Forgot about levels. If you have 50 chapters and more than 20 levels, it's pretty good. If it's 450, you're already half way to level 100 with just 50 chapters. Not to mention level 100, even level 200 isn't enough. You'll still be able to see more than 50 chapters and only have more than 20 levels. It's not just a matter of level, you can also To practice skills, it seems that in other novels, he has several stages for each skill, and this novel also has it. The author said that this skill is good, and that skill needs to be practiced, such as getting started, mastering, familiarity, etc. It is a pity that this one has a little less family, so it doesn't matter, I can only do the next one [smile] ], and it is best to write this type of novel with a female protagonist. Why? Just because there are elves. For example, the author of this book is the first elf Chuanshan King, the elf descendant of his father or grandfather. This is a good inheritance. If there is no heroine, it is okay, but the elf cannot conquer too many, although Although I have won many championships and so on in the past, but when I get older..., By the way, it is still the problem with that girl. She actually said Xiaojiezi. None of his friends and brothers said this. When it comes to writing about her situation, maybe she saw it too quickly, maybe she developed too fast, or the way she spoke, etc. @Cotton
The update is really too slow. It is best for novice authors to write three chapters a day, otherwise it will be easy to maintain the book, and the CNC will be very poor. I hope the author can pay attention to it.
Ka's writing is so good, the author! Do you know that you get beaten easily?
It seems pretty good at the moment, but things start to change when I meet that girl. First, the protagonist's family takes the subway back to the protagonist's home. They meet a woman on the way, and they get to know each other. But when the school starts, it turns out that the girl is a transfer student, and she is in the same class with the protagonist, and they become good friends within a few days. They video chatted about good night, are they good friends? Then they held her hand to watch the protagonist's friends play. His friends said naughty things about his girlfriend, and then the protagonist didn't admit it. They were ordinary friends. The most outrageous thing was that the protagonist's friend said that the protagonist liked that girl. Why didn't he mind? Later, the girl he just met said I don't mind. Now he likes me. It's only been a few days. Do you know where her family is or what her family does, have you known her, etc. They all say that they like her, but they still don't admit it. Alas, the second point is the current strength of the protagonist's family. Grandpa is already a quasi-king. Grandpa currently has four teams. The highest is currently in the middle of the quasi-king, and the lowest is in the early stage of the gym. Grandma is an intermediate trainer, and mom is a beginner. Level trainer, father is a senior trainer, grandpa is a gym trainer and B-level researcher. Grandma's Pokémon is over level 40. Thirdly, grandpa has three apprentices, an apprentice and an adopted son, and grandpa's old classmates. Grandpa has an old classmate. This classmate has the same name as his son. This makes it look like they are from the same generation. What kind of brothers? The eldest disciple is The director's second apprentice doesn't know. He is the adopted son, and the third apprentice is the principal. Yes, the fourth point is that his father conquered new elves right at the beginning. This is good, otherwise I don't know when it will happen, because it is almost meaningless. Father's previous elf protagonists all know that there must be something different. It is impossible to wait until the protagonist reaches the age of 20 or 30, and his father is still the same. Why? Maybe there must be some trump cards, etc. The fifth point is that this book is good. It not only has the protagonist from the perspective, but also Grandpa and the others. For example, there is no protagonist at all in the auction. Grandpa and his apprentices kill the enemies, so that there are more stories to write. If it is about Grandpa and the others in one stroke, what is the point of writing all about the protagonists, so the author writes well in this way. The sixth point is that the land cloud gives opportunities to The protagonist, on the way home, Grandpa's elf enchantment eye is with the protagonist. The enchantment eye senses something, and there is actually a super evolved enchantment eye in the cave. This is good, not only the protagonist, but also other people's. Otherwise, it feels like the protagonist has encountered it, but in the end, others have nothing. The seventh point is to improve the strength. It is best to improve grandpa's, and other people, so that the protagonist is safer. , The protagonist cannot be promoted to the gym all at once, and finally I suggested to my grandfather and father that their newly conquered elves include Bloodwing Flying Dragon, Biting Land Shark, Double Ax War Dragon, Hu Di, Night Demon, Salamander, Nidoqueen, Electric Warcraft, Fire Beast, Poison Skeleton, Sonic Dragon, Crystal Lantern, Vulcan Moth, Leave King, Diya Sea Lion, Metagross, Bulbasaur, Nine Tails, Wind Speed Dog, Dream Girl Demon, Cresselia, Strange Power, Strong Crocodile, Centipede King, Lotte Kappa, Overlord Flower, Abo Monster, Builder, Yanwu King, Snow Demon Girl, Fire-breathing Camel, Three Evil Dragons, Pokkya, Snorkeling Weasel, Forked Bat, Lady Flower Cleanse, Gotha Duck, Baby Protector, Ancient Pterodactyl, Big Chrysanthemum, White Sea Lion, Giant Winged Flying Fish, Dunjia, King Swallow, Super Power King, Howler Whale King, Ancient Feather Worm, Iron Clad Lobster, Ancient Armor, Electric Wolf Spider, Azure Cloud Dragon, etc., And Grandpa and his elves have the sky, the sky, and the sea, but the one in the sea is not big enough. It seems to be just the Swamp King. It is best to have the Howler Whale King, Water Arrow Turtle and others when going to sea. Personal opinions and suggestions, very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Forgot about levels. If you have 50 chapters and more than 20 levels, it's pretty good. If it's 450, you're already half way to level 100 with just 50 chapters. Not to mention level 100, even level 200 isn't enough. You'll still be able to see more than 50 chapters and only have more than 20 levels. It's not just a matter of level, you can also To practice skills, it seems that in other novels, he has several stages for each skill, and this novel also has it. The author said that this skill is good, and that skill needs to be practiced, such as getting started, mastering, familiarity, etc. It is a pity that this one has a little less family, so it doesn't matter, I can only do the next one [smile] ], and it is best to write this type of novel with a female protagonist. Why? Just because there are elves. For example, the author of this book is the first elf Chuanshan King, the elf descendant of his father or grandfather. This is a good inheritance. If there is no heroine, it is okay, but the elf cannot conquer too many, although Although I have won many championships and so on in the past, but when I get older..., By the way, it is still the problem with that girl. She actually said Xiaojiezi. None of his friends and brothers said this. When it comes to writing about her situation, maybe she saw it too quickly, maybe she developed too fast, or the way she spoke, etc. @Cotton
The update is really too slow. It is best for novice authors to write three chapters a day, otherwise it will be easy to maintain the book, and the CNC will be very poor. I hope the author can pay attention to it. Ka's writing is so good, the author! Do you know that you get beaten easily?
Very good, very nice, you can take a look
I just realized there was no rating