I Have a Killing System, and I Live Broadcast the Swordsman to Pay Off My Debts

It's a very good novel. Unfortunately, the only flaw is that I don't know why a sister was added to the "virtual world". As soon as there are more scenes of her, it feels like it suddenly changed from the protagonist's desperate killing game to an inexplicable journey of recognizing relatives. The addition of a love line has lost the original flavor.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, Weiwei's praise begins to speak out, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

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The setting is quite interesting. The main character is a god of death. I like his personality quite a bit. What needs to be avoided is the pure brother-sister relationship. His sister likes his brother, but his brother and sister control but reject this kind of relationship that is beyond the scope... It makes me heartbroken. Why can't it be a pure family relationship... [Petrochemical]

I found a blind spot, the time ratio is 1:24, so how to calculate the time of people watching the live broadcast? In the end, at least tell me where the protagonist went in the end.

It's pretty good to watch, the barrage is acceptable, and the heroine is a non-blood sister. There are no major problems with the book overall. Most of the bad reviews seem to be about these two points. Among the many books I have read, this book can be rated above 9 points, and it is a pretty good 9 points book. The writing is straightforward and concise, and the character motivations are stable. There are some plots of the author's own little hobby, but it is not ugly. Sorry... I said it too early... It's really hard to hold back later

Proposal from the Handong Provincial Public Security Department on increasing reading efforts and tomato enthusiasm With the in-depth development of the plot, the broad masses of the people's expectations for the follow-up content have become increasingly urgent. In order to effectively solve the key and difficult problems of the broad masses of people being able to read, read well, and study well, and to respond to the major problems of the broad masses of people in urging updates, the Handong Provincial Public Security Department, under the guidance of the Handong Provincial Political and Legal Committee, issued this notice to the author, requiring the author of this book to update eight pages a day, and not to take a vacation. He must carry forward the reform and opening up spirit of "not afraid of difficulties, and become more courageous as he fights" in the update of this book, and present more exciting plots to the masses as soon as possible. At the same time, I also hope that the author of this book can continue to maintain a rigorous attitude during the creation process to ensure the quality of the work. We believe that with the ardent expectations of the people, this work will definitely become a classic and bring more joy to the people. Finally, I would like to thank the author of this book again for the wonderful works he has brought to the general public. I hope that the author of this book will update it as soon as possible to meet the expectations of the general public. Congratulations! Handong Provincial Public Security Department, Director of the Public Security Department Qi Tongwei

How high can a brother's IQ be if he can't even recognize his own sister? Change the rating. . .

Good book, I haven't seen such a good book on Tomato for a long time. It means that the protagonist is really very decisive in killing, from beginning to end, but it is too short. I seriously doubt whether the author has any flaws [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

There are fewer barrages and it looks better. I can understand the live broadcast, but don't put the emphasis on unnecessary places. I wouldn't know it without reading the comments, but it turns out the backend is epic [smile]

It's very interesting at the moment, but it's just not big enough. Many novels like this are good at the beginning, but not so good at the end. I hope the author will be more steady and not fall apart. Also, please give me more updates! ! ! Those who saw it later will know why I gave it two stars [smile]

Author I believe you will read it When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, Weiwei's praises start to come out, and the numbers are collected in vain. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

It's quite exciting to fight. Overall, there's nothing very deliberate about it. It's obviously different from other tomato-based novels that look like an assembly line. The rhythm has never stopped, but now it feels like it's a bit out of sync. The last sentence of the synopsis makes it seem like the protagonist has become a savior, but the protagonist has a realistic shape and it's hard to imagine why he wants to. To become the savior, but the protagonist's mentality is still good. I personally don't like the kind of ruthless fool who only knows how to kill people by any means. Tomato has many such portrayals, which are too deliberate. There is also the protagonist who kills innocent people at the beginning. He went to a custom shop and killed more than a dozen women, which made me feel bad. However, he didn't kill any more innocent people later.

It looks good so far, I hope the quality can be maintained. But I still want to tell the author, try not to write emotional lines. If you really want to write, write 1v1 pure love. If there is a harem or something, male readers may like it very much, but female readers like me will give up. I hope the author can maintain the current style.

I fantasized again, fantasizing about my girlfriend "Xiao Ren" still living with me, playing games together, and reading novels together... In order to make me happy, she cosplayed my favorite novel character "Bundao Ren". Although she did not perfectly restore the character, I was still very happy... However, every time I read the latest chapter of the novel and found that shitty yellow button, "Xiao Ren" disappeared as if he was playing hide and seek with me. Only then did I realize - it turned out that "Xiao Ren" was just the person I imagined to accompany me. So why does it matter that she imagined it? I still love her. Author, please update quickly... I want my "Xiaoren"... To stay with me for a little longer... Please update quickly, please update author

It's okay, the main plot takes place in the game, and the setting is okay. It's not the data flow of online games, but divided into cunning and ordinary weapons, which is a bit like the skills and own attributes in the game. In addition, there are hints that this is a real world. The official bans this game completely, but also hints that the only platform that can play this game is the official backer. What can be said later, maybe there will be a plot such as "games merge with reality"? The background in the game is similar to a gang war. The male protagonist can use his system easily and become stronger by killing people. But it is a pity that what is strengthened is his own value, that is, ordinary martial arts. It is a bit like the physical cultivation in the world of cultivating immortals, but the setting is that the mysterious martial arts is stronger than the ordinary martial arts, and it is stronger at different levels. Therefore, the male protagonist can only be said to be invincible at the same level, and he still cannot beat the mysterious warriors. There is also a live broadcast of this game. Although some of the jokes are quite interesting, and it can be seen at a glance that the author plays a lot on the Internet, sometimes it is a bit too watery. By the way, there are Japanese people in the book, and it is currently described that the Japanese people who are at the same level as the male protagonist are stronger than the Jiuhuang people. I feel that this setting is a bit typical, and the other people are useless. In the end, the male protagonist can only turn the tide [facepalm]. Although this is only the situation of the male protagonist's gang, and it is just an example, I still suspect that this will be the epitome of the combat power of the entire book. Overall, it's okay, because there are relatively few brainless villains, and the male protagonist has high growth potential and is invincible at the same level, which is pretty cool. I hope that the focus will be on the plot in the game, at least there won't be any plot where someone threatens the male protagonist with his family. After all, the male protagonist comes to play this game because of his seriously ill mother, his sister who has to go to school, and the million-dollar debt left by his father. In addition, there are hints that the game is a real world (the Japanese people in the game directly mentioned and scolded the real Jiuhuang people). It is not surprising that such a plot will happen, but if it is not the main plot, let's not mention it.

It's so good to read, it's so exciting. This weird world of gangsters with a sense of being in a hot-blooded college is really, really good to read. Especially when I see that each region does not have the strongest ruler, I know that this book is very interesting. This kind of setting does not add a sense of chaos in the middle and later stages. The love line keeps getting worse and worse, I think it will explode, and the male protagonist is well designed and very interesting. He neither actively pursues the pleasure of killing nor is he sluggish in his development. He feeds war with war, and the soldiers come to cover up the water and the earth. Compared with other stories, the male protagonist is still very good. Don't let it be unfinished! ! ! Don't stop updating! ! ! I will always keep an eye on you author! ! !

Not bad. I read this book at around 12 o'clock in the morning and finished reading it at 2 o'clock. The plot starts off relatively high at the beginning, and then it becomes even more exciting to fight directly. What I like most is that the protagonist kills women just like he kills NPCs. He simply states "there is a woman, the protagonist kills it." I have seen too many authors, even if they are killing a girl, write a bunch of descriptions of her appearance before killing her, how beautiful and stunning she is, and then let this "peerless beauty" say a bunch of last words to curse the protagonist. She is still beautiful after being killed by the protagonist in the end - this kind of plot makes me feel sick to my stomach. These descriptions are too out of line with the plot. Isn't this the showy ice love genre that I always read in the forums and forums? I like to read it in the forums because of the details, but writing these things in serious novels makes me feel sick to my stomach. All in all, I hope the protagonist has fun fighting. I don't know if this book will be popular. I have only read two or three dark novels, but they didn't last long.

It still looks pretty good, except for some minor flaws, so you can eat it with confidence. The first volume was okay. From the first chapter of the second volume, the protagonist returns to reality. Let's not mention that he didn't bring back any attribute points. He will be suppressed by the live broadcast company when he returns, isn't it? Didn't I say before that the boss has almost let go? I don't believe that there are no other live broadcast companies with big bosses to explore the bottom line (just find someone to put your name on, and it won't be a big deal if something goes wrong. Even if no one goes to find out the bottom line in four hours, there should be a big boss who will come to him to see if he has the idea of ​​​​live broadcast overseas. You don't have to go far, just the border.), Even if you are not in China, there is no live broadcast platform abroad? The second volume was so frustrating that I skipped it. I personally rated the first volume four and a half stars, but the second volume is hard to describe.

It's cool, but it's enough, but there are too many barrages, a little less, which affects the reading rhythm a bit @

I think the best thing to evaluate a group portrait novel is: each character has its own personality traits and style of doing things, and has a story line that is entangled with the protagonist. At the same time, the IQ is online rather than the foil of the plot. From the perspective of the protagonist, the style is distinctive and the methods are ruthless. The plot of the novel is a little thin, and it also has the word count of an online novel. But judging from the world view, the ups and downs of the plot development, and the setting of 3 to 4 intertwined light and dark lines at the same time, as long as the overall combat power system does not collapse too much, there will be a chance to become a god in the future.

Let's start reading from Chapter 4. The previous chapters are too realistic and frustrating. Although there are some background settings in the first few chapters, it does not affect the viewing. It's still possible later on, it's very interesting, but the author is so slow in updating.

The protagonist is very powerful, if not the Holy Mother, she will kill whenever she wants.

After reading some, I summarized: a broken home, and him in debt. It's not suitable for those who like fast-paced reading. This book is quite detailed and not a fun read, at least not the first part. The first three chapters describe the process of why the male protagonist enters the game, and also clearly describe the male protagonist's character. This is a live broadcast article, and there are a lot of barrages. Personally, as long as it is not a barrage with a low number of words, I can accept it if the barrages are a little more interesting. It is not recommended to open a comment area, there are a lot of inexplicable valuables. As for the female protagonist, according to the author's description of the male protagonist, there should be no female protagonist. Overall it is worth seeing! [Blowing kiss]

I originally thought it was some kind of weird live broadcast. I didn't expect it to be Yakuza style, and it blends very well. I feel like reading this novel has a bit of freshness. The author must keep writing, come on! ! !

It's very enjoyable to watch, and the highlight is the improvement in explosive strength that can flip the table. The enemy's prediction is weaker than the contrasting feeling brought by the protagonist's power jump speed. It's just as enjoyable as the Go Go book. Those who like Go Go books will also like this one.

Keep up the good work and hope to write better and better. There could be less barrage, it takes up too much of the plot and I don't want to watch it. I hope there won't be any ambiguity or anything like that if there's no heroine.

This book is quite good, the author's writing is very good, and the protagonist has a three-dimensional image. At the beginning, he is a social animal that is more relevant to life, but then he becomes a bit cruel? Anyway, it's not the Holy Mother [Like] There should be no heroine, I hope the author will update it [Blow kiss]

It's a good book, but it's a bit slow. You don't need to use your brain to read it. It's quite enjoyable, but it won't start until you enter the game. After writing six to seven hundred chapters according to this writing method, I should be able to get a score of about nine points. As for whether the barrage is too watery or not, I can only say that everyone has a personal opinion, and benevolent people have different opinions and the wise have different opinions. Personally, I like it better, and the five-star reviews encourage me [Chigua]

Ouch, I came across a book by chance, what a surprise! In this book, Wen Daoren has an outstanding demeanor, and his acting style is like a sharp knife cutting through a mess, clean and neat, without any sloppiness. He is decisive in killing and can turn danger into danger whenever he encounters it. He is truly a hero! Looking at his actions, he treats men and women equally, cutting them off with the knife in his hand, showing no mercy, but it also shows that he is hard-hearted and ruthless. Although this kind of style is slightly cruel, it is also very refreshing and enjoyable to watch. Judging from the writing style of this book, it is also a good choice. The writing is humorous and full of wit, and it is good at picking up on current hot topics, making readers laugh and laugh. When a young student reads it, his heart is surging and his blood is boiling. It is so happy! However, this book also has its shortcomings, that is, there are not enough chapters, which is like a delicacy that is not enough, which makes people feel unfulfilled and regretful. Xiaosheng hereby implores the author not to live up to the eager expectations of our readers and to update the follow-up chapters quickly to quench our thirst. Jianghu Youyou, once this book is published, it will definitely make waves in the Internet literary circle. Xiaosheng is willing to appreciate the brilliance of this book, comment on its charm, and participate in this literary feast with you. Happy, happy!