On a certain day...
Lin Feng received a package containing a book. The above describes a strange and incomplete story.
The strange figure in Baiyi Apartment... Five takeaways in the building late at night... The endless corridors of despair...
Lin Feng fell into a dream at night and entered a weird novel directly...
A voice often appears in my mind.
[Dear author, hello.
[I am your writing assistant "Xiaobai". Warmly remind you, please ensure to finish writing a complete story within a reasonable time. Otherwise……
Reader comments
The idea is very good, a rare good book on Tomato, but there is one point I don't understand. Is the price of inspiration refreshed and calculated again every time a new story is started, or will it continue to accumulate without refreshing? If it keeps adding up, will there be too many people who die after the protagonist gets inspiration once? [Thinking] I also feel that the protagonist does not have much emotional fluctuations in the people who die because of getting inspiration every time. It feels like a very cold character. But in the plot, the protagonist obviously does not feel like it. It looks a little weird [face covering] I hope the author will update it faster. The plot is not interesting enough.
Currently 74, it's so damn good-looking, I haven't seen this type of thing for a long time, it's so good-looking, it's so good-looking [crying] [crying] It's so pretty [crying] [crying] It's so uncomfortable [crying] [crying] Why is it gone [crying] [crying]
I read from Chapter 1 to Chapter 72 in one go. The setting is quite novel, the characters of the protagonist and Qiu Weiwei are both strong and full, and the horror atmosphere is also created quite well. Especially the many derivative ghosts in the corridor really scared me. Overall, the writing is really good. I hope the author can keep writing. I don't think it will be a masterpiece, but it must be a masterpiece.
Great cheers, author. I recommend your book in Shuhuang Square. I hope more and more book friends will read your book.
How should I put it, there are indeed some places that are weird, but for me it's okay, um... I think the author can refer to Chen Ge in House of Horrors to highlight the protagonist's character and the plot development brought about by the character.
As the author's debut novel, this book has a very deep impression on readers overall. However, the emotional drama is slightly flawed, but it is still outstanding in the thriller and suspense genre. It will become a masterpiece if it is refined over time! And this is still the initial stage, I hope the author will not stop updating. The popularity is relatively low. The author can wait for more people to see this on the recommendation list. Good works should not be hidden away. I recommend it with five stars! (The first story is a bit sad) [Sending Hearts]
The writing is quite good, the writing style needs to be improved, and the plot is handled well, but the male protagonist is a bit dull at the beginning in the first copy.
It has a strong sense of immersion. Tomato can be beaten in the same type. I can add more branches. I really like to watch the daily life of the main world. Sometimes I can reduce some unnecessary things.
A very good book, at least better than most Tomato articles
The setting is very new, so far it looks good.
Come on, author, I feel like the writing is in line with my taste. I hope you can update it more.
Does the author have a female protagonist?
Come on! It's really good-looking, but it's a pity that Qiu Weiwei didn't come out with the protagonist. I hope she can be brought out together later.
This book is really beautiful! I've been on a book drought lately, but when I came across this book I was really blown away by it. Its worldview is wonderful and its setting is excellent. The whole story is very exciting and the plot is very compact.
Author, your book is really beautiful, and the emotional conception is also very good. However, it is too small, lacks a bit of environmental rendering, and lacks a bit of horror atmosphere.
It looks good. I love watching it. Not bad.
Qing Shui never lies to anyone
The subject matter is good and the writing can be read at least for now. The feeling and immersion are okay. It's a bit refreshing to read it in the middle of the night.
It's a very traditional weird novel. Pig's feet also transforms from hardships. It's not an invincible protagonist at the beginning.
Come on! Very nice book! [You taste carefully]
Quack, quack, very good
Haha
Very simple comment, nice looking
Although there are loopholes, you can still read it when you are short of books.
So far it's still looking good.
A very good book, it brings me a lot of happiness and eliminates a lot of worries. I like it very much.
Yes, it's pretty good-looking and suits my taste. When will Qiu Weiwei be brought out to make up for the 5 stars?
This novel is very well written, with some weirdness and horror, and a good idea. However, the writing style seems to be a little lacking, but it is acceptable in Tomato.
It's very novel and very interesting. I recommend it to all the book-loving friends.
Well written! It's quite beautiful and gives a sense of immersion. Like
Every character is vivid and vivid, as if they are right next to you and me.
The writing is quite good and gives a sense of immersion. It's not the kind of fast-food novel, and the female character is not annoying either, so it would be good if there is a female protagonist. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart]
The idea is very good, a rare good book on Tomato, but there is one point I don't understand. Is the price of inspiration refreshed and calculated again every time a new story is started, or will it continue to accumulate without refreshing? If it keeps adding up, will there be too many people who die after the protagonist gets inspiration once? [Thinking] I also feel that the protagonist does not have much emotional fluctuations in the people who die because of getting inspiration every time. It feels like a very cold character. But in the plot, the protagonist obviously does not feel like it. It looks a little weird [face covering] I hope the author will update it faster. The plot is not interesting enough.
Currently 74, it's so damn good-looking, I haven't seen this type of thing for a long time, it's so good-looking, it's so good-looking [crying] [crying] It's so pretty [crying] [crying] It's so uncomfortable [crying] [crying] Why is it gone [crying] [crying]
I read from Chapter 1 to Chapter 72 in one go. The setting is quite novel, the characters of the protagonist and Qiu Weiwei are both strong and full, and the horror atmosphere is also created quite well. Especially the many derivative ghosts in the corridor really scared me. Overall, the writing is really good. I hope the author can keep writing. I don't think it will be a masterpiece, but it must be a masterpiece. Great cheers, author. I recommend your book in Shuhuang Square. I hope more and more book friends will read your book.
How should I put it, there are indeed some places that are weird, but for me it's okay, um... I think the author can refer to Chen Ge in House of Horrors to highlight the protagonist's character and the plot development brought about by the character.
As the author's debut novel, this book has a very deep impression on readers overall. However, the emotional drama is slightly flawed, but it is still outstanding in the thriller and suspense genre. It will become a masterpiece if it is refined over time! And this is still the initial stage, I hope the author will not stop updating. The popularity is relatively low. The author can wait for more people to see this on the recommendation list. Good works should not be hidden away. I recommend it with five stars! (The first story is a bit sad) [Sending Hearts]
The writing is quite good, the writing style needs to be improved, and the plot is handled well, but the male protagonist is a bit dull at the beginning in the first copy. It has a strong sense of immersion. Tomato can be beaten in the same type. I can add more branches. I really like to watch the daily life of the main world. Sometimes I can reduce some unnecessary things.
A very good book, at least better than most Tomato articles
The setting is very new, so far it looks good.
Come on, author, I feel like the writing is in line with my taste. I hope you can update it more.
Does the author have a female protagonist?
Come on! It's really good-looking, but it's a pity that Qiu Weiwei didn't come out with the protagonist. I hope she can be brought out together later.
This book is really beautiful! I've been on a book drought lately, but when I came across this book I was really blown away by it. Its worldview is wonderful and its setting is excellent. The whole story is very exciting and the plot is very compact.
Author, your book is really beautiful, and the emotional conception is also very good. However, it is too small, lacks a bit of environmental rendering, and lacks a bit of horror atmosphere.
It looks good. I love watching it. Not bad.
Qing Shui never lies to anyone
The subject matter is good and the writing can be read at least for now. The feeling and immersion are okay. It's a bit refreshing to read it in the middle of the night. It's a very traditional weird novel. Pig's feet also transforms from hardships. It's not an invincible protagonist at the beginning.
Come on! Very nice book! [You taste carefully]
Quack, quack, very good Haha
Very simple comment, nice looking
Although there are loopholes, you can still read it when you are short of books.
So far it's still looking good.
A very good book, it brings me a lot of happiness and eliminates a lot of worries. I like it very much.
Yes, it's pretty good-looking and suits my taste. When will Qiu Weiwei be brought out to make up for the 5 stars?
This novel is very well written, with some weirdness and horror, and a good idea. However, the writing style seems to be a little lacking, but it is acceptable in Tomato.
It's very novel and very interesting. I recommend it to all the book-loving friends.
Well written! It's quite beautiful and gives a sense of immersion. Like
Every character is vivid and vivid, as if they are right next to you and me.
The writing is quite good and gives a sense of immersion. It's not the kind of fast-food novel, and the female character is not annoying either, so it would be good if there is a female protagonist. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart]
Very good, very attractive [adoration]
It's well written and has great potential. [Cool]