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Five stars for encouragement. To mention a small flaw, the part where the male protagonist announced his identity as a Naruto writer on social software was completely wasted. At the same time, Butterfly Kanae, who became the male protagonist's editor, did not develop further with the male protagonist, and in the end it was just nothing. Looking forward to the plot that the author will polish. There are a lot of original characters, I don't like them

The plot is okay, I hope this so-called "amnesia" aspect doesn't make a big deal. Also, when will the protagonist be strengthened? The first-level conjurer is not strong enough, and there is only one Sharingan left. At least he should be given a kaleidoscope.

Emmm. . . How can I put it, the book is still broad, but there are some issues that I personally feel bad about, such as the protagonist's combat power (I remember that the protagonist has been a first-level spellcaster since about ten chapters and can fight ordinary special-level spell spirits, but I see that the protagonist's strength has basically not changed as of the 150th chapter. There is still only one Sharingan. I have studied the Yuhu Free Technique for more than a hundred chapters, but it is of no use [laughs awkwardly], and the strength has not been enhanced in other aspects), and there are more than a hundred and ten chapters on emotions, but it is not Qiong or Jingkei, but Ming Ming (as a reader, my understanding of Ming Ming in this book is limited to the description of less than three chapters in the protagonist's memories and the dialogue between the protagonist and Glass). I personally feel a bit bad. In addition, there are some minor issues that I won't write about. I hope the author can write better in the future [smile] [hold]

It's very well written, I hope it doesn't end badly [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It feels pretty good, come on

It is relatively slow to catch on. The background of Demon Slayer is in Chapters 114 and 115. If you want to know more about it, you can read it directly. Some characters have secondary color backgrounds. Please forgive me. I hope readers who like it can support it [Code] [Working in progress] Everyone should really stop worrying about combat power. Originally I thought there was nothing to say about it, but I saw that many readers still think that Naruto should crush the curse. I am a fan after all. Please take a closer look at the setting of this novel. Moreover, the protagonist has 200 chapters. It can be said that he has almost never suffered a loss in combat power, and the Sharingan alone is almost the same. It has no effect, and seeing the latest friends, they already know that Kaleidoscope is coming, and eternity is also on the way. By then, the protagonist's eyes will be normal, and the numerical value will be greatly expanded, and the enemies of equal size will also expand. Once the expansion starts, it will be difficult to adjust it back. This must be controlled, both the enemy and ourselves must control it, otherwise why would Shibuya seal Gojo?

Come on, I believe you can do it

Not bad, worth recommending

Not bad, it's okay

It feels okay, why is the rating so low? [Smiles]

It's pretty good and looks very comfortable.

Seeing that there are no big poisonous points at present, and there are no big problems with logic,

You can watch it, and it's a little bit outrageous [laughs]

Sbarasi [shy] Although it is indeed quite slow-moving, the male protagonist is not very supervising [shy] There is no very toxic plot either nice [shy]

The plot is quite interesting and the writing is not bad. As long as it can be written at this pace, it will be a good book.

I came as soon as I saw Qiong Mei

There are currently 63 chapters, which are bland and good-looking.

It's okay, not bad.

If nothing else, give me a five-star rating [eating melon] for my taste.

The writing is okay, please support [you taste it carefully]

Although it seems to have a lot of combat elements, it is generally a daily novel, which is good to read when you are short of books.

Already very good

The protagonist is Superman. He studies in the morning, goes to clubs in the afternoon, draws comics and goes shopping in the middle of the night, cooks, and fights monsters in the evening.

It looks good, it looks good, why is the rating so low?

This book is suitable for people who are book-hungry and bored. There are too many stitches, and the author's writing style is not very good. However, the author is a complete novice, which is understandable. I hope the author can continue to write.

It's well written, but it's a pity that the rating and popularity are low. It deserves a higher rating [sending my heart]

Come on! The novel is not bad, you can read it!

Not bad, but I haven't eaten meat yet. When will I be able to eat it?

Will the protagonist's blind eyes recover?

Come on! By the way, why is the rating so low? It feels pretty good, but 5.7 Makes no sense!