A Clever Little Naughty Boy, the Daily Life of a Naughty Boy Who Cultivates Immortality

Author, I originally wanted to read your book before commenting on it, but seeing how bleak you are, I'm afraid you'll eunuch (cut the book) too early, so I'll talk about it first after reading only Chapter 147. This book is actually a novel mixed with family love, friendship, and master-disciple relationship. The overall pace is slow. But unfortunately, this is not the type that most people like. In addition, your beginning is not attractive enough. I think the friendship aspects, such as the description of the Ying brothers and sisters, are slightly lacking. However, these are just minor flaws. Overall, it is considered to be an above-average level on the Tomato platform. It should not only have data like this. I think the problem is with the title and cover. The title of your book may attract readers who like shota novels, but your story is actually a waste of time. The protagonist gradually grows up with the help of wisdom and the master. Your type of book should be titled with a title that is more of a counterattack by a loser who cultivates immortality, such as "The Reborn Beauty Master Destroyed His Foundation Just to Let Me Practice", etc. This will make it more popular. Let's talk about the cover. It's really strange. Why is it black and white? It is recommended that you find an artist to draw a good-looking cover. If you don't have money temporarily, you can use AI to generate it first, and then change it when you have money. The reason why I give so many suggestions is not because I don't like it, but because this book is very suitable to my taste. I really like it and don't want you to cut the book. I really think this is a good book, so I give these suggestions.

There is no deus ex machina, and the plot is very reasonable. The only flaw is that the protagonist has too great a brain and a strong will. A person with such talent and such a heart does not look like a fledgling college student. Overall, this is a very good novel that does not require brain storage. I saw this from Shota Shuhuang Plaza. I hope the little guy can never grow up. If it doesn't work, he can grow up to 12 years old. No matter how old he is, he won't be Little Shota anymore.

How should I put it? It's my favorite type. It looks plain but very exciting. It has a sense of smooth reading. The plot is reasonable. It's not like Long Aotian or Golden Finger. It's so powerful that IQ and EQ are online.

I rarely write book reviews, but this book really made me want to read it. I have read not just thousands of books, but hundreds of them, but this book does have a feeling of being a little bit more transcendent than other books. I hope the author will not end it, let alone end it unfinished. I would rather the ending is slower, and the process is longer, so that this book can become a truly completed book. Come on, come on.

I can say that this article is the first good book I have read in 2025. I will continue to follow up. I hope to see the book from the beginning to the end. Come on, the author [like]

A little bit toxic, but overall good It's a little bit toxic, but it doesn't have much impact. However, the author recommends that you change the cover and then change the name. Your cover is really unattractive.

It's been a while since I've read a serious novel about cultivating immortals. This writing is really impressive. I just hope that I don't grow up all at once. I can do it little by little. I want to write more and it's nice. Don't open a harem. Thank you. Meow❤️

No spoilers, there are many mistakes to be made. The book is very good! [Learned] [Note] The protagonist is portrayed in detail, and there is no big problem with the writing style. It's just that I personally feel that the indifference towards cultivating immortals is inappropriate [Explore]

I feel like there are foreshadowings everywhere

It's well written, although it's not my favorite type. Good work, author. Also, it's hard to distinguish the punctuation marks between inner words and verbal descriptions.

It's uncomfortable to listen to at the beginning, but it's okay at the end, but it's still a good book to read in your spare time [Love]

It's quite good. I finished it in two days from yesterday. Please don't be too eunuch to read more.

A very serious spiritual novel. The content is quite new and interesting.

It's beautiful, why are so few people watching it?

It looks good, I love watching it, keep going!

Delicious, kids love it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very very nice looking.

Good, good, good

I hope the protagonist can become stronger soon

It's vivid and vivid, I like the immersive feeling

It's good-looking, it's my type

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty.

It's worth reading. How can I put it? It's much better than those 9.9-Rated novels.

Not bad, but my cultivation level is a bit low.