A Great Revolution for Slytherin

First! Yes he! Secondly! It's a sweet article taught by CP Si! Again! What the author wrote is very suitable for me who grew up under the red flag of socialism. The black words in the extra chapter become redder as I read them (cross out this one) Again! The author writes in a parent-generation setting, and GGAD also makes a small appearance [Like] Finally! Although short! But it looks good! !

It's so sweet, so sweet, so sweet, I just said this article must be interesting, it's super beautiful! It took me two days to read it, and he made me give up the time to rank the fifth personality. You should understand how good it is.

Among the many Harry Potter fanfics I have read, this one is above average, and the writing style is delicate. Although it is a little OOC, it is acceptable. The OOC is also more reasonable, and it is also the OOC I like to read. Although there are some shortcomings in the design of the plot, it is understandable that the author just started writing the article in October 24, and it did not take long. At 181,000 words, I think it's a bit short. I feel like the reading experience would be better if some of the plots were described in more detail and were longer. For example, the emotional experiences, inner activities, and body movements of the two protagonists (some small habits or subconscious body movements) can make the characters more three-dimensional. I give this book a score of 95. Good luck, author, and I look forward to more of your works.

The article is relatively short and sweet, which is very comforting to read (children are really abused too much by fellow Sri Lankans.) It's a bit OOC but it's not surprising that it's acceptable. In today's world, it's hard not to be OOC. It's quite fun to pull in the front hehe (ღ˘⌣˘ღ). One star was deducted because of the revolution and Lin Xiuxian's strength. The article is very popular, but the revolution really looks awkward and weak? (I don't know how to describe it). I really like watching the Eastern Cultivation Heroine at Hogwarts, but Lin's strength feels much weaker than I thought. The golden elixir is so weak, but I don't remember the specific strength of the Cultivation level (I haven't read the Cultivation article for a long time).

Nice! [Admiration] It's so sweet, not cruel at all, it makes my heart melt. Although it is short, the plot is quite complete. The character of the heroine La Rui is well created [crying] It's great that no one has sacrificed [almost crying] Recommended [Like]

I like it, I like the main plot of time travel back after the war, especially when Sri Lanka travels back through time, I like it even more [shy][shy][shy], especially The story of time travel and rebirth is very exciting🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Well, you must love Sif very much. No one deserves happiness more than him Σ>―(°ω°)♡→

The low rating is just because there are few comments just now. Don't miss this super sweet story about falling in love with Snape💘! The heroine is an Eastern Taoist priest reincarnated into Hogwarts, and the daughter-in-law Les is a reincarnated happy man👨The main plot is very fast and a Voldemort is solved in one year. The daily life is very sweet. The male and female protagonists are both career crazy. The only regret is that the extra chapter has not been updated yet

Cp rebirth of Sri Lanka religion. The heroine formed an organization similar to the Order of the Phoenix. By the way, also, in the end, I found that the heroine found something to do for herself, but with Severus's existence, she had to destroy Voldemort no matter what.

Overall, it's pretty good... Except for chapters 59-62, which I don't think are too hard-fought, and the intimacy between the male and female protagonists when they are underage. I rarely read short stories (anything under 50 feels short), so I almost missed this one, but after seeing the good reviews of Isshiki, I came in to read it. It's okay.

It looks good, but has a sour feeling in the front? No, it's just that I knew the possible outcome later, so when I watched the interaction between the two people in front, I added a little bit of my own mood, hehehe

The heroine is awesome! The CP relationship line with Sijiao is too sweet Red spirit is super strong

It looks great, and Snape's reborn character is handled very well. Very natural and sweet to get along with the heroine [shy] The author's writing style is very delicate. I love the new book and will continue to read it. Recommendation index: ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

Emm... Is there a hole that hasn't been filled? What's going on behind my Ganoderma lucidum? I've been saying that the two bags on its head are going to turn into dragons? It was written that it disappeared after helping the protagonist fight against the thunder. Was it sent? Or take the opportunity to advance? I never mentioned it later, what happened to Ganoderma lucidum •᷄ࡇ•᷅

Although it's a little ooc, it's a sweet cookie overall

Ahhhh, I like it, it's a relatively lively writing style, it's very relaxing to read, the original characters are not too OOC, and the plot is also very clear and compact, I really like reading it!

Good-looking, love to see, optimistic about

Super pretty 🥰I love it😘

Good looking, good looking, good looking. Brother, I don't understand why the heroine is still unable to defeat Voldemort and avoid Voldemort's attacks even though she is in the golden elixir stage? But I don't understand

I declare that this book is a treasure, ah ah ah, it's so beautiful. I hope the author will finish it in one day [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Still a very good little sweet article

It looks good, but it's a bit short and not satisfying [face covering]. There's nothing too sad about the plot, if you like pure love you can come here

Nice! Super pretty! The plot is very interesting and somewhat enjoyable!

It's a sweet cookie, but it's a bit abusive in the later stages. The man and woman reunited ten years later. It's still worth watching.

It's so well written in big letters that I couldn't hold my lips down while reading it.

It's beautiful and the content is very novel [laughs][laughs][laughs] A treasure novel, recommended [note]

Sweet, sweet! Beautiful, love watching it!

Finished reading, not bad

These are super pretty cookies!

Nice looking, sweet article with a knife!