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After reading for a while, there are a lot of problems in general. First of all, there are many common sense errors in the description of Warhammer 40k. It can be seen that the author is indeed a newbie or Cloud Hammer, but it can also be seen that the author has been working hard to gain knowledge of Warhammer and admits his mistakes. He has a correct attitude and accepts opinions humbly. The writing style cannot be said to be good, after all, it is acceptable for a new author. For a veteran Hammer, many common sense errors should cause cerebral hemorrhage. For example, in the beginning of the Astartes team, one Astartes was hit by a Gauss weapon for more than ten times when he only had power armor. It was true that he was blessed by the emperor. For the Necrons, there is basically nothing that can block their attacks. They can kill most enemies in one or two hits. The technology of the Necrons is at the level of a true materialistic god. I hope the author will not limit his imagination. [Laughing evilly] Okay, I'll keep looking.

Some of the writing is a bit confusing to me, but the author is more obedient, and it can be seen that he is also learning. There are indeed few books about Necron, so I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

It's well written and can be regarded as a masterpiece, but it's not as good as a masterpiece. A little bit may be a person with good writing skills in my mind. This is a book! I have read many favorite books, but few can compare to them Get over this! Generally speaking, the author's thinking is very strong and every plot is vividly described. It's better than my ideal.

It's a good book, but shouldn't the ruler of a great dynasty be a French emperor?

If it's rare to write a plot about Necron, that's fine.

The author has written a book for the first time and it is already very good. I am optimistic about you and will continue to work hard to improve it [Like] [Like]

Pretty good, come on

Very beautiful, come on 👏

How shameless, I hope I won't be a eunuch

When I have nothing to do, I like to listen to books. I think this book is quite interesting and very special!

Can you add some star universes, replace Gray Wind's ships, and Necrons' ships with Gray Wind's ships? It would look more interesting.

Not bad, the content is very substantial

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

@ Falling Fish Come on, author, you are one of the few who writes about Necrons in the Warhammer world.

Very well written, keep it up!

Nice book in Warhammer

It's rare to see something that's not from the Human Empire. I'm also a Yun Hammer myself. I know it from playing games. Let's just watch it. Five stars for encouragement.

It's rare to see Necron anymore.

The author writes well, keep up the good work

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Forget it, it's not easy. I'll give you a high score. Keep working hard and improve your writing skills.