Why Is She Confessing Her Love to the School Beauty Next Door?

This book is so good, let me analyze it for you... If I'm lying to you, you only need to read Chapter 13 to see the super weak and useless male protagonist. Then some people may ask, why give it five stars? Of course, it's to deceive more people. Akaichi

First of all, there are some pitfalls. For example, I was attracted by the introduction of the book. After reading the updated 47 chapters, I still haven't seen the plot I expected. It's natural to be disappointed. Then, in the current serialized plot, the bar plot made me feel more or less aggrieved. It's not that bad women are unacceptable, but the protagonist's attitude towards her is somewhat uncomfortable. He was framed and put into a situation of death. He was not thanked and was robbed of his things. The protagonist didn't say anything. That's a gun. People who wipe people's brains kill people. All they have to do to survive is to say a few yin and yang to her and then disappear? Who framed you in your relationship so that you were about to be killed, and then saved you so that you could just laugh and expose it? No one can do it. But other than that, the overall story pace is okay now, there is no logic breakdown, the writing style is more attractive to me (which is why I can continue reading), and the character traits are also good (I just want to watch women fight!). Overall, I will keep reading!

Okay, maybe the book has just been published and the rating is a bit low. Let's briefly talk about the content. The male protagonist is traveling through time and has to conquer the female protagonist. He is obviously very flirtatious but very dull. Of course, it is also possible that the male protagonist just wants to complete the task and does not really like her. But looking at the plot, the male protagonist realizes that maybe these people have independent personalities... Not many spoilers, the author's writing skills are online, and many of the descriptions are online. You can appreciate the unique charm if you give it some time. Finally, I look forward to it. I think multiple female protagonists are very attractive, but it is difficult to write well. Not only do you have to coordinate everyone's plot, but you also have to constantly deepen the character image, which makes it easy to write confusingly. But the most difficult thing is the ending, because everyone has different opinions and will have great differences in the ending. But judging from the author's plot direction, I think it is a very good ending. You should listen more to readers' suggestions. It is normal for the book to have low ratings at the beginning, but if it continues to be low, you have to see if there are some parts that readers don't like. If you can improve it later, the rating will be much higher. If you add high fever, you will have certain results. I read it through carefully, and if I want to tell you what I don't like about it, first of all, from a personal point of view, there are many characters, and everyone is diverse, but not everyone can step on the reader's xp. There may be some subtle points, but there is no need to deliberately cater to it. You must establish a good character and focus on writing changes. If the book review is really not good, just write "redemption". Whenever "redemption" comes up, you can justifiably tell those who don't like a certain character that it's not because "I" wrote it badly, it's because she was originally designed to be like this by me (just kidding). Judging from the direction of the plot, if there is a real "redemption", it has been planned for a long time, and it is not a temporary change, because there are some foreshadowings in the past that can be used directly. I think the focus should be on the male protagonist. For male videos, readers will be attracted to the male protagonist, and there are many female protagonists. If you don't like it, just change it to another one, but the male protagonist cannot, so the male protagonist's decision-making is very important, and the character must not collapse. I haven't read many books, I just read a few online articles with multiple female protagonists, and I reviewed them blindly. The purpose of writing these useless suggestions, both stated and unsaid, is mainly to make other readers feel that they are useful as a reference, and that it is more authentic to say that the book is good before [shy] The author must finish it and not give up!

It's pretty good. I came from the last book. Although the resume says it's a dog-licking story, it's different from the dog-licking stories about chasing husbands and crematoriums. The male protagonist's "dog-licking" character is not the same as those outside. Anyway, it doesn't look annoying, and no one else laughs at the male protagonist for being a dog-licking and messy things. The female protagonist is also portrayed very well. The heroine who doesn't have that kind of story is just as annoying. On the contrary, I really like this female protagonist.

Looks good Yu Miaomiao smiled heartily, and her eyes were curved, like the first quarter moon hanging high in the night sky, bright and dazzling. "A person who is ordinary in your own eyes may be the star that everyone wants to get." A person can be an ordinary student, an ordinary migrant worker, an ordinary person without any special skills, but he can also be a person who is emotionally stable, morally kind, and brave enough to do what is right. In short, people will not lose the right to be loved because of labels defined by the outside world. I love you just because it's you.

I have read the author's previous book, and the million-dollar completion is guaranteed. This book is both top-notch in terms of writing and plot, and the description of the characters is also very exciting. In particular, each female protagonist has her own characteristics and is crazy about the male protagonist. She is very possessive. It is worth reading if you like multiple female protagonists.

It's beautiful. It's so beautiful. I'm King Akaishi. Haha, come and see. It's so beautiful.

It was so good. At the end of Chapter 12, I was almost poisoned to death [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

I think it's okay. There aren't many cliche plots in high-scoring works (I don't understand why many works have to give an enemy to the protagonist). Also, the article is a bit masculine and those who like cool writing can avoid it. Finally, I want to ask what's so bad about Chapter 47?

The counselor looks a little bit toxic in the front, but it's still okay in the back. There's no big problem overall. I hope more updates will be added.

Come on, the writing and descriptions are very good, and the characters' personalities and characteristics are full and prominent, but the plot still feels a bit old-fashioned, but there is nothing you can do about writing such a multi-female protagonist. Overall, it's full of flaws! ! !

Beautiful, love watching it! I just can't get enough of it (⋟⋞) I watched it from Lian Zong. I hope to see the birth of another masterpiece [shy]

It's so beautiful. If you don't have red stone, you can eat it.

The plot is delicate, but the plot of the counselor is really not handled well. If you don't want to watch it, you can skip it. There are very few plots of the counselor later. You have to explore by yourself whether it is good or not.

Just the right environment, detailed description, and mature writing style, it feels impeccable and worth a look!

I think this book is really a good book on Shura Field. So far, the preparation is very good. I hope that the later outbreak will be better. Come on, the author (ps: I really can't read enough. [Cry][cry][cry])

I like both Song Xiyin and Yu Miaomiao, I like them very much❤️❤️❤️ A yandere and a little sun, that's great. Actually, the writing is pretty good. However, I really didn't like the storyline about the counselor, so I skipped reading it. Don't mix other weird elements into a pure love story. This is a big poisonous point and the fundamental reason why the rating is so low. If the author writes a book for his own happiness and a hobby, it doesn't matter how he writes it. If he still wants to accumulate more readers, this poisonous point needs to be changed.

You all come and read it. You are not allowed to read such a beautiful book. It is really beautiful. I have never seen such a beautiful book. I felt like I no longer need to eat after reading it. This is the real spiritual food. It is really great and exciting. Come and read it [laughs]

This novel is like a mine containing endless treasures. Every time you read it, you can find new highlights. Every chapter is full of wisdom and enlightenment, making people put it down and have endless aftertaste.

It's probably because I haven't reached the yandere plot yet [crazy]

It's amazing. I highly recommend this book. I can't eat this by myself.

This book is actually okay, just ignore the poisonous points in the first few chapters, and you still have to read it yourself to know if it's good or not.

I got it from the Lian Zong book, it's really good.

Overall it's good, but the pace is a bit slow for me. I like to read novels one by one. (But it's the kind that reads ten lines in one glance) But to be honest, this novel is indeed a bit slow for me. I hope the author can speed up the pace.

The plot is smooth and has no flaws for the time being. I hope it will end with multiple female protagonists, or it can be made into a spin-off with a single female protagonist.

It's really good. Although some parts are a bit unreasonable, overall it's a good book. Don't be affected by the rating.

In today's fast-paced era of online writing, there are not many realistic and emotionally sensitive yandere writings [Like] It may be a bit slow, but readers will be willing to wait until it explodes [Sneaky laugh]

They all say it's poisonous, so what's the matter? I'll just say it looks good (actually, it looks pretty good after that).

I came here from the book about yandere. After reading the book about yandere, I really looked for it for a long time and felt that there is no rival [salute][salute]

Come on, keep at it, I'll finish reading it in one go