Travel Through the World of Immortality with Doria's Skills

First of all, I am a lover of novels. Every time I read a novel, I imagine myself as the heroine, so I have many thoughts and stories in my mind. But there are not so many novels for me to read, and not every novel is written in my heart, so I came up with the idea of ​​writing my own novel. But writing novels is really different from reading novels. You may be able to read a story in one day, but a story cannot be written in one day. Every time I write, I forget some details and logic, and the characters may be a bit broken. If there are these problems in the stories I write, you can point them out and I will try to accept them with an open mind. This is a novice author here. My story is really not to your liking, so you can leave quietly, because every reader must have a different idea in their mind. There is no way to change it so much. I just hope you will be merciful. Thank you all. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Coding is not easy, but what supports me now is a few people who have been urging me to update. Thank you.

The subject matter is quite new hahaha. The main reason is that I like Doria very much, so I came to take a look. I am a newbie. The author even provided pictures. I love it. Come on and update it [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I like it😍I think my sister is a peerless aristocrat with a halo who stepped out of a Raphael painting. I was playing with my mobile phone with the fluorescent lamp on, and suddenly I felt that everything around me was getting dark. It turned out to be your beauty shining in the mobile phone! Life makes me miserable every day, but you have the ability to make roses bloom in the desert. Do you know why the dinosaurs became extinct? Because their front limbs are too short to applaud your beauty, they are so sad that they die. It's over or not, why don't you say goodbye in advance when the fairy descends to earth? Life is annoying, but luckily you are cute enough. The moon is hidden in the clouds. If you are already asleep, I will kiss you secretly. You are cuter than a hundred cats put together, and I sleep better than a hundred cats put together. Do you want to try it? You are so cute, you don't dare to resist, so just do it secretly

The author's writing is very good, and it suits my taste anyway. I just want to beat CP... Hee hee, if nothing else, come on, big brother! I hope your hard work will be rewarded [blowing kiss] @ My dear dear, don't be too tired, after all, your body is the most important!

So far it's pretty good, there are no flaws, and the friendship between the two girls is also beautifully written\^O^/ Come on, the author will update ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧I will support you

Very novel subject The author's writing is smooth and the cute plot is very comfortable to watch. It's just that the rhythm of the plot is a bit off-kilter, and the transitions could be improved. It's a pity that there is no cp. I thought we could have Hainuo. Come on baby

The chicken looks great, and the clouds look super cute.

Is the author not updating anymore? I was really enjoying watching it, but half of it was gone.

Support the author greatly

Level and cultivation realm are independent. If it is independent, why not indicate the level?

It's pretty good-looking, better than most.

Fine. I just love to roll my eyes a little bit The description of the protagonist's character is a bit not very good. Well, maybe I'm used to reading stories where the heroine is more powerful and more powerful. I always find this article strange. .

A few minutes of attitude pays off

This setting is very nice! ! ! !

Why doesn't the author update? [Cry][cry][cry][cry]