After I Left, the Heroine Imprisoned Me and Begged for Forgiveness

Name: After I Left, the Heroine Imprisoned Me and Begged for Forgiveness
Author: Cai Yunjing

我离开后，被女主囚禁哭着求原谅

by Cai Yunjing (蔡芸景)

Status: Completed
Length: 422k Words
Genre: Urban
Subgenre: Urban Everyday
Updated: 1y ago
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[Crematorium + Yandere + Everyday Life + Multiple Heroines + Mutual Firsts] Mo Jiang died suddenly after working endless overtime, then unexpectedly transmigrated into a book as the novel’s vicious male supporting character. By definition, a vicious male supporting character is rich, handsome, and born into a powerful family. The heroine, Cai Yunjing, will realize after meeting the male lead, Feng Jian, that her childhood friendship with Mo Jiang, the boy who grew up alongside her, isn’t love. She will gradually fall for Feng Jian, while Mo Jiang’s possessiveness toward Cai Yunjing, as a doomed supporting character, will lead him to hurt the male lead. In the end, he will wear away Cai Yunjing’s affection for him. His parents will also target the male lead, and before long his family will be ruined. He will end up homeless, eventually starving to death. He tries to change this fate. But in the end, he is only a doomed supporting character. No matter how hard he tries, he can’t change anything. When he learns that the heroine is destined to fall for the male lead and despise him, he decides to act first. When she is drugged and supposed to spend the night with the male lead, he gets to her first. Afterward, he puts on a tearful act. “Let’s break up. I’ll let you two be together.” Heartbroken, she desperately scrubs herself until her skin is raw, red, and bleeding. Afterward, he goes abroad to study. Four years later, he hears that she is going to marry the male lead. Mo Jiang thinks the story has run its course, so he returns to his family to arrange the marriage alliance they have planned for him. But on the night he returns, she takes him prisoner. She slowly strips off her clothes, one piece at a time. Her eyes are blood red as she begs him with sick, obsessive desperation. “Mo Jiang, look at me. I’ve been washing for years. I’m not dirty anymore.”

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177 likes1y ago
No, where did [what] come from? Is this still a male video? . Gif Ahem... Let's get down to business, if this book is not a male channel, then think what I say next is all bullshit, but if it is a male channel, then I can only say that the smell is too strong, sister, even if you approve of the male channel, the smell of the female channel will almost overflow. Sister, since you are here to write a book on a male channel, then follow the rules and don't always get some Yiyi Yaoyao and I don't know the so-called things. About two-thirds of the first 40 chapters of the book are Mo and Cai's posts, and then there are pulls and fakes. Then I read your setting explanation, and I just feel that unless it is me, the Red King, there is not much explanation and extension of these settings in these 40 chapters. Even the foreshadowing feels careless, so if you want to change it, you should change it quickly. As for the author who thinks this is a breaking point, then I say there is no good foreshadowing. Such breaking points can only be called "runaway" and "cyber patch + film repair". As for the neon part, I suggest you work within your ability. It can be done in a complete way, but don't make it into a big mess. If you feel unsure, just cut it off quickly. According to your outline, I personally feel that it can't be solved without a large chapter, so please do it according to your ability and don't mess up the work🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 At this point, let's finish.
124 likes1y ago
Brothers Bian Que in the national service, the male protagonist takes over from Pan Xia, and the female protagonist is married to someone else [laughing and crying]
87 likes1y ago
This article is really a pure industrial saccharine with a male protagonist + a heroine with no sense of distance. I read Hong Wen at night. All I can say is that it is impossible for any person to be able to pull off the magic skills of the male protagonist in this book. I didn't see any vicious villain as the male protagonist. I only saw the extraordinary purity of the male protagonist. The male protagonist can't speak. You can't eat hard without suffering. Looking at this male protagonist, I really want to know what is between the two ears of this male protagonist + why your head is so pointed. This kind of yandere novel is really the most frustrating one I have ever read. Everywhere is bound by the original novel. The most important thing is that the male protagonist did not resist when he knew that it was all bound by the novel. Instead, he chose to let nature take its course. I can only It is said that this male protagonist is the worthy heir to the Taoist school just because he fully understands the principle of "governing by doing nothing". Nothing is logical. A normal person would have already struck preemptively when he saw the "male protagonist" in the original work for the third time. I can only say that you are the author who can also write this kind of novel [like]
71 likes1y ago
The way of heaven is still too gentle, otherwise how could Mo Jiang rush to the hotel to intercept Hu Cai Yunjing [laughing evilly] Something would happen on the way, and he might die or be hospitalized for several days [laughing evilly] Mo Jiang should feel the help of Cai Yunjing, the author of Tiandao, otherwise there would be nothing wrong with you [laughing evilly]
35 likes1y ago
I have roughly finished the plot before going abroad. First of all, I would like to tell those who read this comment that there is indeed no cow. . But uncomfortable. First of all, the character creation is definitely not good, but it is not important. The main thing is not to feel uncomfortable watching it. This female channel is really a bit strong, isn't it? ! But I understand that when a girl writes, she cannot understand all the bad things about boys. Cai's mental derailment, coupled with some indeed out-of-bounds behavior, such as being accompanied in the ward for a night. Although I know it's not awesome, it's really uncomfortable, especially the part where the heroine was caught and raped by the drugged hero. It had to be written very briefly. It seemed like the hero did something like kissing and hugging him before he came. After all, who knows whether the male protagonist will arrive immediately, but this is all conjecture. The most important thing is that you want to describe the female protagonist regretting the so-called mental cheating, and foreshadowing the plot after the male protagonist returns to China. As a result, there are more plots in which the male protagonist is sad and the female protagonist is controlled by the will of heaven and is in love with others. From a male perspective, it is really frustrating. At least male authors can control this scale better. You should downplay this kind of plot. I've read male-channeled novels, and it must be from the perspective of the male protagonist, that is, the male protagonist. The female protagonist must be "squeaky clean." Since mental infidelity is a given, it's OK. But don't have contact with others or even stay all night, go out and play together, which is not awesome but uncomfortable. Otherwise, it wouldn't be a hat article, and it wouldn't be cool either. You have to remember that "cow" is just a setting. There is no need to write too much writing and description for this setting. The plot scale of the heroine's confusion and hesitation is enough. I've still added this book to my bookshelf. I'll wait and see how it goes when I get back to China. If it's good, I can still read it!
33 likes1y ago
The early stage was okay, but the middle and later stages were all stuck. It would have been okay if the male protagonist lost his virginity. Then the male and female protagonists had various inexplicable misunderstandings. This is the first time I gave such a low score on Tomato. Also, I was curious about the part where the male protagonist was forced to drink holy water. Also, I'm not a troll or anything, I just want to make some suggestions. I haven't skipped a single chapter in this book, so I still have some say. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The holy water part can be changed. The female protagonist is clean and self-sufficient. The male protagonist's flirting with women (although it is passive) feels a bit like the male protagonist betraying the female protagonist. There are also some unnecessary plots and misunderstandings that can be written less or not. Just talk about it when the male protagonist is imprisoned by the female protagonist. Then write a sweet story or harem later. Now it feels very awkward. The author is great. What I am offering are some small suggestions. Whether to refer to them or not is up to the author. Disclaimer: The above opinions only represent personal opinions. If readers feel that something is wrong, you can make corrections. Thank you. I don't mean to offend you. If the author or readers think it's not good, you can delete the comment. Thank you.
31 likes1y ago
According to the ancient secretary, Shennong was concerned about the safety of the people. He personally set foot in the world and tasted hundreds of herbs. He gained the true nature and understood the Tao. He said that the antidote to poison can be found within a few steps. Shennong taught it to the people without thinking that a single poison would cause them to die unwillingly. When Shen Nong passed away, he left a few strokes on the ground with his thumbnail. The thing was very poisonous. When Yu Yu first heard about it, he knew that this time was very bad. He hoped that future generations would not fall into Yu's fate. He should leave quickly after hearing about this thing. If an ordinary person is within ten meters of this thing, he will know that his head is heavy. If there is light, it will be green. His fortune will be like a wingless bird or a fish without gills. It will become more and more miserable. After knowing Yu's ending, don't fall into this poisonous net.
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