Slice-of-Life Arknights

🤦 Ling Paopao has been sleeping every time he appears since he appeared. When it's time to wake up, he makes the protagonist drink, and then the bubbles gather to take the protagonist away from Nian Xi Ling. The heroine you think is: Nian Xiling, the real heroine is: Bubbles. Mistress: Ajie.

Here is what I would say about you as a Ring Apprentice Overall: B+ I can understand your love for the characters. Generally speaking, each character's personality is vivid. Even the research party can think that this is the character in Ark who can live freely in a normal urban campus. However, the protagonist does not give people the feeling of a protagonist. On the contrary, because you describe too many passers-by, A, B, B, B, and D, the status of the protagonist and the supporting role are almost equal. This equality of status does not mean that the protagonist is the protagonist in the play. The proportion is too small, but the character of the protagonist is too unclear, and there are too many meaningless side plots. The scolding war caused by the protagonist in the class is understandable to enhance the appearance of the protagonist, but it will only make people upset. The novel is centered on the protagonist. The protagonist solves the problem and creates the highlight of the protagonist, rather than letting the protagonist become a tool to vent his desires when other characters come to feel. The protagonist serves as his own That part, as an individual, is too little... Even the disgusting cliché plot about the woman saved by W who is only mentioned for a few lines is more impressive than many plots when the protagonist is present, but it is a taboo for a supporting character to be more impressive than the protagonist. I don't think you have thought about what you want to write before you decide to rush into the dark room to write. You just use a bunch of characters randomly. The built twin towers will collapse when they touch the reader's point of view, but even after entering the state, it is still a runaway train that is too fast-paced, reducing the appeal of readers who are interested in the vivid characters of Ark, and it is difficult for readers who come to satisfy their small heads to persist until the new plot. In works of the same type, the latest ten chapters are even the first ten chapters of other novels of the same type... But overall, there are still merits. The writing style is acceptable, so it will not fall to a C rating. It is particularly emotionally delicate, so it is B+. It is a pity that there are too many meaningless plots... It is very tiring to read, and some plots will only make people irritated. In addition, large sections of the plot are used to describe the absence of the protagonist, and the protagonist does not even appear once in a whole chapter... Succubus?

Great book! I was almost fooled by the book review and cover. 🤦

So exciting! But don't be silenced! 😆

Very well written, keep up the good work.

The male protagonist won't become a star slave in the future, right? Now I feel like there are signs of this

Great, don't be banned 😎👍👍👍

Good book, sweet daily life, very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The car speeds up, it looks good, I love watching it

This book is definitely the best book I have ever read.