Feather of Blazing Flame by Douluo Fans

It's very beautiful, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the writing is also good. I don't know much about it, but this book is the best Douluo book I've read, and the author has updated it steadily. Some people may not like the original work, but I hope everyone will give it a try and don't be dissuaded by other people's opinions. Thank you, thank you, thank you [Sending my heart]

Give yourself encouragement and support! This is just a dream of mine, I hope Tomato won't be taken off the shelves.

It can be seen that the writing is very careful, and it is much better than those systematic journal writings. It pays great attention to detailed descriptions and inner fluctuations, and the battle descriptions are not dealt with casually. Although some battles are a little unreasonable, but from the perspective of the protagonist, perhaps it is really impossible to do more. When fighting in a team, the real-time reactions of the protagonist and teammates are not well connected. The background of the story is also rare between the first and second generations. It feels like a group portrait. You can clearly see the personalities and thinking of different characters, and it is easy to get involved. They all have their own shining points and despicable places. However, because of this, like the previous plot where the protagonist obtains the third soul ring, it is very frustrating to watch. Moving on to big scenes like the beast tide, I obviously felt (personally) that it was very difficult to write, and the description of the big scene was almost meaningless. Furthermore, I felt that the writing of Shrek Academy was too distorted. Even if it was not an era when stars were shining, it would not have been to the point where there was no response to the beast tide, and it was purely relying on tactics to attract outsiders to come and defend the city. The most attractive part of the work, for me, is more of its novelty and delicacy. I will continue to read it, hoping that this book will get better and better.

As a Douluo novel, it's pretty good, but I feel that the protagonist's growth is a bit slow. It could use more characters or experiences to push it forward. Like Zhang Zuohong's, I think it's a good opportunity. If you write this character to death, and then say something before death that can affect the protagonist, I think this character is already very good. In addition, the author likes to describe many characters. I feel that it can be divided into different perspectives. When you write this, you can switch scenes and write another scene at the same time.

It's very interesting, the writing is very serious, and it is very close to the original work. There is no personal setting. I just hope that the author can continue to make more. In this era of Douluo fans being the same, we can no longer see this kind of pure writing.

Apart from the fact that the boys' dormitory is ridiculous, other things are really rare. There are not many writers with good writing skills. I didn't expect that I am already in my second year of high school and there is a Douluo fanfic, which is quite good. Also, as a boy, the description of the appearance of the female characters is really good.

I feel that the writing is very detailed and the content is smooth👍 It is recommended that some unnecessary links can be deleted. The number of words can be deleted. Too many descriptions will make it look difficult. Some of the key contents are not what I want to read. Come on!

Hello, author. Can you still add characters now?

Okay, very novel. I feel like there are too many details and it's not necessary. It would be better to talk more about my fan worldview setting.

It's okay, it's very interesting, a different kind of fanfic

The author's writing is superb

Seeing that you have no rating, I will give you a 5. If possible, please arrange my role, name Lai Pigou, martial soul paralysis ring [laughter]

I feel this book is as good-looking as Douluo Dalu, please give it a thumbs up to the author [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is really good, the writing style is very good, but after reading the beginning, I always felt that I would be knifed.

A very good fanfic, the characters are portrayed very delicately Hello, author? I would like to ask if it is still possible to add character settings?

Can you please send me a table with the character name, family, and martial arts information? The more I look at it, the more confused I am. I really can't remember it.