I’m the Ultimate Mecha Girl-Chasing King

Why do you feel that our protagonist looks a bit like 02 in the national team? I hope the author can see that it is well written like this. The protagonist keeps his expression expressionless all the time. Just scan the expression. A colder one is much better, and an enthusiastic one is just average. After all, robots generally have no expression. Even human souls will have no expression after being around for a long time. I hope it can be written like this. The mood swings should not be so big. Just don't like to laugh. It's good to write it coldly.

1. The plot is quite exciting and good. I feel that the protagonist is a little too cold and has no ups and downs at all. He is like a human but not completely human, which feels awkward; 2. It is also a bit aggrieved. The feeling that the country does not trust you is uncomfortable and it feels like being manipulated, and I feel that I don't have much strength; 3. Finally, I don't know why, but I feel that the plot has no twists and turns, no ups and downs, and the knife is like no knife.

The author writes war stories in a romantic way, which always feels awkward. The subject matter is not bad, but he has full marks for his understanding of how I put people in positions of authority.

I don't know what to say about this book. I can only say that it's readable. It's quite good. But every time, I don't know whether to give up or continue reading. Every time, I come back to it. I haven't read it for a year. I originally stopped reading and updated it 40 times. I'm happy.

It feels good, I read it, and after reading the last chapter, I feel that it is not enough. The storyline is indeed developed, but the front may be a little uncomfortable. After all, there is no mother and no father at the beginning, then the brother-in-law is gone, and then the only friend is also gone. The heroine is indeed a bit long in the early stage, but I don't know if the author will use any big sword later. However, it is recommended not to post too many, otherwise readers may not buy it. The author should hold the knife appropriately and don't use it too harshly. And the protagonist, don't be too frustrated. After all, who wants to see the protagonist continue to be frustrated? Generally speaking, the plot is good. Although it is a bit depressing in the early stage, it is equivalent to a relaxing volume in the academy [Like] [Note]

The definition is novel, the logic is clear, the emotions of the previous and subsequent articles are relatively accurate, the story is compact, and there are no major surprises. There are one or two small typos that have nothing to do with the overall writing. You will not feel sleepy after reading it in one sitting.ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ❀~

A good book with great potential. The author has a good grasp of the protagonist's portrayal. Each named character has his or her own characteristics. If you read this book, don't just look at the protagonist. The supporting characters around the protagonist are also important roles with great development prospects. For the works of novice writers, giving five stars is encouragement and satisfaction, and it is also recognition. It is also a thank you for your hard work, time and effort to present the work to everyone word by word. Thank you for your hard work [Love] [Like]

The character of an honest man from China, the plot of an old Japanese comic, and the high-level executives in Hollywood blockbusters who only know how to hold meetings. This book should be called "The War Story of the Reincarnated Girl Ultron"

Yes, the subject matter is good😊 I can't find a second book on Whole Tomato. I hope the author will do his best and not let the readers down. Oh, by the way, try it on the mecha model to optimize it. For example, mass-produced Lancer mechas. For example, mechas are like current fighter jets. The models of each country should be different. For example, if some countries develop a new generation of mass-produced mechas, the whole world cannot enjoy this technology. There are also various types of mechas that I hope the author can write about soon. Currently, only medium-sized spearmen and heavy firepower appear, which is a bit boring in terms of look and feel and nothing new. In short, I hope the author can seriously consider whether to optimize these details to make the story more fulfilling.

Good luck to the good author [sending heartfelt wishes]