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Two Male Protagonists#jutian, You Won't Lose If You Fall into the Trap
Good-looking, two male protagonists, both very strong, very good-looking!
Falling in Love with the System Is a Fairy Tale, Right?
That is to say, the exchange of ideas between the system and the system, the system can give the protagonist the greatest help, and the protagonist can upgrade the system. How about the two of them being super matched? I don't have all of them, please recommend them to me! ! ! (Kneel down)
Cultivation of Immortals, the Male Protagonist Is Long Aotian, and the Female Protagonist Is the Cannon Fodder Fiancée.
Cultivation of Immortals, the male protagonist Long Aotian, the female protagonist is the cannon fodder fiancée. When she wakes up, she transforms into the male protagonist's fiancée. The system asked me to break off the engagement with the male protagonist according to the script, and then said that if you come back, then I will be a slave.
Gemini, Do You Have Any Good Articles About Cultivating Immortality?
A novel about cultivating immortality. One of the protagonists is aloof. There is no limit on the age, seniority, or relationship between master, apprentice, and brother. Anyway, it just needs to be a good-looking novel about cultivating immortality.
Want All Long Aotian
Looking for Two Male Protagonists Who Are Cultivators of Immortality, and Upgrade Their Streaming Tut
I want to read a book similar to "Junior Brother Xie, what should I do if he is too popular?"


































Shou doesn't appear much later, it feels like a background version I persisted until the latest one, but I really couldn't stand it anymore. This one was really grinding, and there was no character highlight at all in the back. I feel that the only reason I could persist was because of Ji Xing in his previous life. Have you never had sex with a brother? If you are tough-talking, don't use slowness as an excuse. Being slow is not stupid, okay? I really can't help it, especially this kind of self-righteousness. Treating other people's feelings as an illusion and trying to correct them is completely disrespectful of people and the other person's feelings. What's the use of running away when he knows it? As an adult, I just know how to run away from things. What is the use of deceiving oneself? Later in the writing, the subjective point of view completely changed to the point of view of the attacker, and then Shou was just like a background board, with more plot restrictions. His parents couldn't come out even if they died. It was so frustrating, and it felt like the character had collapsed. Hiding and attacking at the same time is also described as boiling a frog in warm water. After such a long time, all I could think about was attack. It felt like I was kept in the dark and didn't know anything. Like a fool, he has no feelings for so long and there is no progress at all. I don't understand why I have to write this type of emotional line, and I even had to break up the human society to let him say this. It can be said that he is completely different from Ji Xing in his previous life. Although he is gentle, he has a tough heart and a kind heart, and at least he is not that stupid. This one is like a rice bug. Basically, the effect of that system is greater than his. What counts as a cheat is the system, and the cheat is opened by the system, and then the cheat is opened by the system. After watching it for five hours, I don't understand why I persisted until now with so many chapters. The emotional line is not well written, but the world view can be improved. There are many foreshadowings of Cthulhu, but I feel that everything I see now is all foreshadowing, but there has been no great progress. For example, what is Bai Yujing in it? The soul fragments will be made into different dolls by Bai Yujing. What kind of injuries did he suffer? The Tiangui bloodline is not only for one person, why must he agree to take him back to Bai Yujing? Ji Xin comes every time and can take away a few more if they come. Especially wise. Now I am completely in a fog and I don't know anything. I am restricted by the rules. I can't even reveal my true appearance. I don't even have a real body. Along the way, they were either fighting at a higher level or on the run. Long Aotian couldn't help but fight because of his identity, which made him feel extremely aggrieved. Those who are psychologically fragile can add this life to modern times without any growth at all. It can be said that the feelings he is experiencing now can only be understood by forcing him, and he does not understand it very well now. It is the kind of emotion that he would avoid when encountering contact. In fact, he knows it in his heart, but I don't understand why the author doesn't describe his psychology? That is to say, every time I get close to him, he avoids me, and then when it comes to talking about relationships, I describe a paragraph. I already knew that his feelings for me were not pure, but I always felt that he just regarded dependence as love, so I just let it go. What is the meaning of this supplement is very fragmented. And now judging from the current description, I just feel that I don't want to make him sad by rejecting him. Instead of realizing that my feelings for him were a little abnormal, and I appeared too little, I was either sleeping or sleeping in the middle period. Very heartless. This system is not mentioned at all, and there are rules and restrictions to see what readers think is being written, so what is the foreshadowing? Now even the big foreshadowing has not been filled in.
It's a good book ———————————— The attitudes of the two parties changed gradually and slowly. The overall direction of the story is pretty good, I recommend watching it. But the book has left a lot of pitfalls so far, but there are also a lot of foreshadowings [laughing] It's just that there are so many pitfalls and now my memory is confused [face covering] This may be my own fault. The pace of the whole book is slow, there are not many characters, and it mainly revolves around the protagonist. The content is quite interesting, and the character settings are the aloof Big Iceberg and Sunshine Little Sun that I like [smirking] [snickering] Not bad. There are too many pitfalls, and so far I have a lot of very bold conjectures, but I don't know whether to say it or not [facepalm] It feels like all the characters that have appeared so far are related to the protagonist. The missing one should be him, the one with amnesia should be him, and the friend who has lost his memory should also be him [facepalm] If all the characters in the entire book revolve around the two of them, and there are some amnesia and rebirths in it, then the plot may be a little top-heavy in later reading. It seems to be okay at the moment, but I don't know how it will develop in the future. I personally have high hopes for this [Like] ———————————————— Overall, it's worth watching [sending my heart][sending my heart]
The poisonous spots are not very edible. The characters and personalities of the protagonist and the male protagonist are very good. It is a double-powerful novel. Spoiler: Bai Yueguang, the male protagonist, has always been the protagonist. The two are in love in both directions.
Damn, I give it to you, but it's a pity that it's limited to five stars. The writing is very good, but please don't want Narcissus male protagonists, and don't be like Erha, who is not my kind, the only soul, can you? All in past and present lives
I have seen the latest chapter, and I don't know about Xiao Lin's younger face later on. I saw a comment that Xiao Lin is Xiao Xing, but I hope Xiao Lin is Xiao Lin and Xiao Xing is Xiao Xing, because Xiao Lin did not come in the previous life. If Xiao Lin and Xiao Xing look the same, there will be a feeling that they are substitutes, and it feels unfair to Xiao Lin (because I am controlled). It's my own idea, please don't criticize [dog head saves life] I really like this book, and I also like the author. Can the author update it 10 times a day? It's really not enough [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I'm waiting for the updated chapter every day. It's so good that I can't read it [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's okay, the plot is quite tight, but there are too many foreshadowings, and one question mark pops up and another question mark appears, and the hole is half filled and then not filled in [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Anyway, most of them are readers guessing. Newbies who read less books may watch it for fun, but if you look closely, you probably won't understand [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] If you watch it for fun, just go for it. Anyway, I don't have any bad points so far. It's just that the writing on emotional issues is a bit old-fashioned. I don't know if it's because I'm relatively new to the game. I've had this book on my bookshelf for a long time, and I just started reading it recently [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Also, there are too few people. I don't know why, but the writing is good and the book is quite old. It's a bit uncomfortable for me, who likes to read and read comments at the same time, but it's not a big problem [thinking][thinking][thinking] Come on, author! Don't die young [crying] [crying] [crying] I was thinking about it very slowly before, and now it's only about fifty chapters [crying] [crying] [crying] You can look forward to the next part, author, come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
The plot is compact and coherent, and the writing is also good! It has a lot of foreshadowing and is great, and many pitfalls have been filled in. There are many interspersed memories, and the emotions are not delayed. The narration is very clear. Overall, it is a very good novel. But there are a few lightning points. First of all, the whole novel is very depressing. Although it is said to be Long Aotian, it is actually just a pronoun. The protagonist is actually quite frustrated all the time, whether it is attacking or receiving. I also felt this way until the end, being forced to do one thing. Secondly, I felt that the ending was a bit rushed, that is, the plot connection in the early part of the finale was a bit strange as I restored my memory before going to the ancestral land. Then there seems to be no explanation as to why the protagonist has arrived in modern times, and some small holes have not been filled in. Also, the text ends with "be" (this is the biggest reason why I gave it four stars). I saw the author replying to the comment saying "he" in the middle, and I kept looking forward to it, but I almost died at the end. The extra chapter ends at the end, but reincarnation and memory recovery feel a bit far-fetched. Finally, the author's writing and plot are great! Looking forward to the next article. Woo woo woo, stop being so cruel [crying] [crying] The two babies will always be happy [blowing kisses]
Damn, this book is so to my liking. I searched for the main character Goldfinger but couldn't find anything to read. Finally, I came across this book [crying] [crying] [crying] [heartfelt] [heartfelt] [heartfelt] [heartfelt] It's very annoying even though it's still being serialized😩 [crying] [crying] [crying] I can't tell you how good it is [heartfelt] Come on, thank you
Except for a few chapters that made me want to complain, this book has a bit of an old-fashioned feel about two male protagonists. The emotional drama finally has a process. I read the first chapter in one go. It is very interesting and the writing makes me want to continue reading. It is a pity that few people read it.
At present, the characters, plot, and settings are all very good, quite satisfactory, and there are no major problems. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I hope the protagonist can become stronger and more substantial soon
I have been doing my homework for three hours. Now I am lying in bed and I have just read Chapter 39. Then I look at the table of contents. The number of words in each chapter is sufficient (I only found this book by random chance). I didn't read the introduction and table of contents before reading it (I didn't look at the word count either). Now it's dawn and I'm going to sleep [laughs][laughs][laughs] If I don't sleep, I might die suddenly and time travel (bs)
It's a great book with potential. There are very few books like this on 🍅. Most of them are weak, heart-throbs, or just fake books.
It's okay. The title of the book is Goldfinger, but the overall style is not light-hearted. There are many reversals in it. The book follows the protagonist's limited perspective. The overall pace is very fast (I also read it very quickly). Sometimes the next thing happens before I can react. I only suddenly realized this after reading it. The overall pace is fast and there are many things going on. There are no ventilation holes. The back is like eating steamed buns without water.
Overall, it's okay, but it seems that the emotional line progresses too slowly. It wasn't until about 200 chapters that Lin regained his memory. I felt that I had almost finished guessing the previous chapters, and there was almost nothing surprising. I skipped through it. I will slowly complete the whole book when I have time. I will review it after reading it. If you like a fast pace, consider whether to read it. If you like to read medium and long articles, you can read it. I have no motivation to continue reading at the moment. I need to adjust my mood first.
Ah, I watched it too early and there wasn't enough to watch! The author's writing is really good, the characters are very comfortable, and the plot direction is not so brainless. Five-star praise
Good looking! You can't tell it's the first book at all! Although there are some holes left unfilled, it still looks great! Flaws are not covered! I just feel that Zhaoyang and Xiaochen's happy time was too short and I feel a little unhappy...😭😭😭
It's so beautiful, it requires a certain amount of brainpower. [Love]
It's so pretty, it really pokes me, come on!
The content is novel, the plot is not procrastinating, and the plot ends quickly (exciting)
It's quite beautiful, but very few people see it.
It's not bad, but there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope the author will update it every day [Blow a kiss]
This kind of theme usually appears in Long Aotian's Golden Finger and so on, but he is a double male protagonist, so I haven't seen five-star reviews for this one.
Beautiful~╭(╯ε╰)╮♥ Come on, the author~O(∩_∩)O
It's so beautiful, so much more to come [laughing][laughing][laughing]
It's really good-looking, it's completely fine, the characters are very three-dimensional, the narrative is slow but interlocking, the descriptions are delicate, the subject matter is good, and it's a bit novel. The two protagonists absolutely love each other (although they don't want to admit it), they are sweet, but they are just a bit prickly [laughing]
It's beautiful. In terms of Chinese terms: the content is ups and downs, and the emotions are meticulous. [Please update]
I finally finished reading it... In fact, I was still a bit sad at the end and I felt that the ending was really sloppy, but fortunately, the reality episode made up for the life of the young couple, and they finished it beautifully.
Looks good [laughs] Looking forward to the follow-up
Oh, why do you look so good?