Hu Bei Weiwei Travels Through the Story of a Smile That Allures the City

It's still good. The plot is better than other fanfics. It's just standard symbols. Some problematic characters don't have double quotes in their dialogues, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch, but the plot is really good. To be honest, it gets a little confusing later on. Let's not talk about the slow development. We mainly look at the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, not the development of scientific research. Basically, more than half of your articles are about how computers develop and how the protagonists learn. It can be said that there are basically no emotional lines between the male and female protagonists.

There is no need to present panel data one by one or simplify it as it is too long.

The plot setting is very good, the character setting is not bad, and the protagonist's words are also very good. The character design of the original heroine has not changed much. The main reason is that the author is a bit slow in updating. I hope the author can work harder.

I'm curious if I can write two hundred chapters.

The writing is quite good, but there are too many system interfaces, so try to reduce them as much as possible.

I can recommend it, I think it's pretty good. It just feels like it's a bit underwhelming

Very good, worth recommending (^_^)👍

Well written, very good

Well written and beautiful

Okay, okay, okay, okay

Ya, really elegant

Why do I feel that in recent chapters, the sense of deja vu of the domineering president has become more and more serious [laughing] [laughing awkwardly]

Except for the punctuation marks in the early stage that were not marked properly, everything else is still [send heart][send heart]

Not bad, I like this novel very much

Not bad, good, very good-looking

It's pretty cool, I don't know why the score is so low

Except that there are never double quotes when speaking, which affects reading, everything is fine.

It's really beautiful. I like the design of the male protagonist very much. When will the author update it again? Please!

Come on, come on, come on?

It looks great when you close your eyes

Pretty good but not enough

It's okay to read a book.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Xiao Nai: I don't want to compete with you.

It's quite generous, so it's pretty good

It's really good, but there are shadows of the TV series in many places.

Author, when you write fanfic, just write fanfic. Don't focus on learning. I think it's like studying. The focus is always on learning, so just write a little bit about the heroine of the game.

Personally I feel good, it looks pretty

Comparable to the TV plot, five-star praise

Super good-looking, really good-looking, very good-looking