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It's good-looking, not too much to read, and it's really serious. But the plot of the secret realm is relatively long, so if you want to watch it for fun, you can skip it (but the plot of the secret realm is really too nb) Hello, I am the mother of a child with this account. The child was diagnosed with severe depression the day before yesterday. My child is very happy after reading your article. The doctor said it can relieve depression, so it's not too much to trouble you to read thousands of chapters a day [Love] [Love] [Love] Thank you🌹🌹

(Bottom middle) Green-•Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points, mark... Sense of substitution C, plug-ins B, setting C, writing style C, rhythm D, imagination C, character design D, main plot C, logic B. Extra points: none Personal feelings: Give a few examples: "① Playing with the princes with beacon fire, ② Riding on the red dust to make the concubine laugh, ③ Parents: I am doing this for your own good." The protagonist feels artificial, and the entire text also feels artificial, a bit deviating from the style of online game writing. Hmm~, very strange? Do you feel similar to me? Or am I overthinking it? See Chapter 26 #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words

The rhythm is good, and the content is rebirth and invincible, but it is not mindless and invincible; it is a rare book that attracts deep reading, and you can read the latest in one go; The characters in it are very three-dimensional, and each supporting role has its own characteristics; The development of the protagonist and the multiple heroines is not delayed. It is undoubtedly a refreshing novel, but the development of the story is flesh-and-blood. It is not like "I fell in love with you when I was overlord". I also like the touching and sad plot developments that take place in the secret realm inside, which can arouse people's emotions. Things in the world are always not as expected. It can be seen that the author writes carefully and creatively. I hope he can persevere! It's just that the current length is short, with only more than 400 chapters. Personally, I think this book can reach more than 1,000 chapters. I hope the author can persevere! Furthermore, maybe during the early preparations, some characters or settings did not take into account the current development, and I always feel that there may be some improvements (the protagonist was too weak in his previous life and did not know the world of the strong, so his knowledge and foresight are much worse) But I don't know the author's outline, maybe he did it intentionally. I hope the author pays attention to his health and rest, and hopes that he can write the book in a good condition. If it is not necessary, his health is still important.

Not bad, not bad. I finally read a novel that combines such a comfortable virtual game with reality. The most important thing is that there are multiple heroines in the real sense. The heroines are currently full of sisters, Daidai, Qianmeng, master, and senior sister. I have read almost 300 chapters and only collected them so far. Three, each one has the development process of the emotional line. It is not a stallion novel or a harem novel with multiple heroines. The most important thing is that this novel is not good. You may not see the main character panel once in dozens of chapters. It is very comfortable to read. The only shortcoming is that the author is too short and updates are too slow! Of course there are some unreasonable places, but among most mindless articles, I think this one is quite sensible, and the cheating is not too outrageous. Just make the novel comfortable and don't take it too seriously. You must know that fantasy and virtual reality are the most outrageous. You can't ignore filial piety just because of this, right?

This novel is not only a feast of words, but also a journey of the soul. It uses poetic language to build a world that is both real and dreamy, making people constantly touched and awakened while reading. The author uses delicate brushwork to describe the complexity and brilliance of human nature, making every detail shine with the light of thought. It not only tells a touching story, but also leaves a long-lasting echo - after closing the page, those words are still whispering in the heart, lingering for a long time. This is a work worth chewing over and savoring carefully. It is the crystallization of the intersection of literature and emotion. The author's handling of the plot can be said to be both "smart" and "cruel". The cleverness lies in the structure: Every climax is laid out half a step in advance, like a key quietly inserted into the reader's pocket. Only when the door clicks shut does he realize that he has already held it in his hand. The timeline is broken into prisms, and the fragments seem random, but when the last beam of light shines down, they form a complete rainbow, which makes people admire but also faintly fearful - if you miss a page, you may miss a heartbeat. Cruelty lies in the rhythm: He dares to put the sharpest turning point after the softest paragraph, letting you indulge in poetic description first, and then cut in with a knife, leaving no time for emotions to be guarded. When the characters are pushed to the edge of the cliff, the author does not give them a breather, nor does he give the readers a breather; but the knife edge is always precise, not sentimental, and does not spatter blood, leaving only a thin cut, but it is enough to make the reader's emotions bleed. Even more rare is the ability to "collect". Many works will be discouraged after the mystery is revealed, but he leaves the greatest tension in the "afterwards" - when the truth is revealed in the light, the character just says a daily dialogue, or a habitual small action, and all the previously collapsed values ​​are re-established at this moment, but become heavier.

It's a bit like a full-time swordsman, but I feel that the writing is more interesting. The first secret realm is quite creative. I hope the number of harems can be controlled. If there are too many, labeling will be inevitable, but it is not as good as the multi-faceted portrayal of existing female characters.

I found that this book has more than 500 chapters and I can still read it. It is of high quality (I have read it for 7,000 hours and I love to watch many female protagonists). Some of the multiple female protagonists are pure stallion stories, but the real book is to write each female protagonist with flesh and blood. Although there are some shortcomings in the early stage, the author is also reflecting on it. Thinking about this attitude also makes me want to write a long review. When I buried the pit in the front and filled in the pit in the back, I was very touched by the ups and downs of the plot in the back. A plot that originally made me sleepy brought me back. Those who like to watch more female protagonists but don't like stallions can also give it a try. Come on, author!

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 would have fired six times Must die. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character descriptions are spot-on!

The content is exciting, the plot has ups and downs, and there is no brainless writing. It can be seen that a lot of thought was put into the secret realm. The theme of cultivating immortals and the attribute display allow readers to clearly know the protagonist's combat power level, unlike some articles where the combat power collapses in the later stages. Keep up the good work! @ The secret realm in the story is a highlight of the novel. It does not take up much space, but it describes a complete story with a fascinating plot. It talks about love, family affection and selfless love for mankind in various types. Recommended, trust me you won't regret it [blowing kiss] The protagonist's combat power is not invincible. In the later stage, there are also tribulations arranged to sharpen the protagonist's character so that the change in the character's character will not appear abrupt. Each of the women around the protagonist has an emotional line, not just a mindless stallion who falls in love with one after another. Intuitively, in the later stages, there is also a sense of acceptance. From "no rejection of anyone who comes" at the beginning to having her own principles later, this is also a change in the character of the character.

It looks good, it's a bulldozer, it takes down the heroine without any ink, I like this kind of thing!