Zhang Chi, an 18-year-old table tennis youth grand slam player, accidentally traveled to interstellar 5046, an ABO world, and his soul came to a young boy. Take care of what you have come, and you can realize the same dream in different worlds.
No matter in which time and space, the king will eventually stand on top of the world.
Cold straight male alpha Zhang Chi (time travel) × strong and only gentle to Zhang Chi, omega Du Heng
The second book is certainly better logically than the first, as it revolves around the protagonist achieving his life goals through his own hard work. Of course, the passion of youth is accompanied by sweet love. Both of them are very strong, have contradictions and conflicts, but there is still something to watch.
The writing style is definitely a bit more novice, but I have no choice but to keep working hard.
The setting in the early stage is to highlight the attraction of two people to each other in the later stage, and the point of being together despite overcoming inner obstacles.
Love heals everything!
I feel that I have made some progress, so I will give you a star to encourage me. I have 300,000 words in my manuscript, which is considered a breakthrough. If I fail later, I will change it back [awkward laugh]
Don't criticize me, I recognize your talent! Grateful! [Sending Hearts]
I still like this novel very much. I rarely see two-male protagonists actually competing. Usually they just skip it and just fall in love. But this one is different. There are people who are working hard and the protagonist has a lot of personality. I quite like it. It's a pity that I fell in love [face covering]. This is really a sad accident.
It looks good, especially the description of the game at the beginning and subsequent events are really well written, but the moment when I suddenly traveled to the cave dwelling surprised me, because seeing the interstellar background reminded me of a high-tech world, but the overall writing is very good, recommended, but it is too short, [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]
Super pretty! I really love the characters of the two protagonists. They endured a lot of pressure and risked their lives to survive. There is an endless bond between the two people. Every description is so subtle and immersive. The little pull between the two people really poked me! ! ! ! Both of them are very strong! One day the two of them will stand side by side at the highest place! Zhang Chi, Du Heng, come on! Come on, author! !
Up to now, I feel that the author is getting better and better, and the story is becoming more and more exciting. Especially the relationship between Zhang Chi and Du Heng is so sweet. The villain Pei Ze also has his own characteristics. Du Feng's step-by-step compromise is also very funny. Come on, author, it's great!
I really like the feeling of extreme pulling between Du Heng and Zhang Chi. When did the two of them realize that they like each other [blowing kiss]
Now it's time to update to the cold war between Zhang Chi and Du Heng. In fact, I think this kind of development is in line with their characters. I feel that Zhang Chi fits the kind of gentle and warm man who also has the feeling of being a long-term fishermen. Let yourself slowly enter Du Heng's life and make Du Heng's life full. Full of Zhang Chi's shadow, he is also very affectionate. He wants to give up but still has some small habits that he can't change (I think the part about touching the bracelet is very typical, and this part is also very well written) Du Heng is an arrogant little cat, but arrogance is greater than Jiao, even Jiao only has a little bit of Zhang Chi, Zhang Chi Chi knew this, so he stroked his hair and let himself enter Du Heng's life, feeling like he was moisturizing everything silently (ps: Maomao didn't know that he had stepped into Zhang Chi's trap). Du Heng didn't know how much influence Zhang Chi had on him. He had a good meal at the restaurant. It was shown in one paragraph. Du Heng could tell that this was a shop opened by Zhang Chi just by looking at the peeled fruits (the tsundere cat only knows the cold war, ugh [crazy]). Both of them were silently entering, participating, and changing each other's lives, but they didn't even know it [almost crying]
In fact, I wrote this comment out of a thought. I felt a little sad when I saw the words posted in Dada's news [I almost cried] Dada is really super gentle, and everyone will reply patiently one by one when they comment. They update on time every day without delaying the manuscript. I would definitely not be able to do it if it were me. [Palm face] Dada's book has always been tepid, I feel so sorry for Dada, but Dada must stick to it. We original readers will always stick with you. [Salute] Finally, I would like to give you a sentence that I particularly like: "The passing of the test is difficult, but the road ahead is long and bright."
It's so good [Sending Hearts] I've been following it for a while, but I'm still a little bit sad that it ended suddenly. I don't know what to say, so I just wish Perseverance happiness in the parallel world, and I wish Mianmian all the best in the third dimension [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The article is very interesting, but could the author update it more every day? After reading it, I felt like I was starving.
It's super nice. This is the first competitive sports novel I read on Tomato. I like it very much. I like the two main characters very much. I like it very much [Adoration] [Adoration]
It's good-looking, and the writing is relatively mature, but the supporting characters are either looking for trouble or on the way to find trouble, and the protagonist has no sense of risk control. The author writes it very well.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I read a few chapters and the writing is good.
Not bad, worth watching
It's really sweet. The way Zhang Chi treats love is really enviable. Du Heng likes to be tolerant. This is the essence of love. Full text without knife
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The second book is certainly better logically than the first, as it revolves around the protagonist achieving his life goals through his own hard work. Of course, the passion of youth is accompanied by sweet love. Both of them are very strong, have contradictions and conflicts, but there is still something to watch. The writing style is definitely a bit more novice, but I have no choice but to keep working hard. The setting in the early stage is to highlight the attraction of two people to each other in the later stage, and the point of being together despite overcoming inner obstacles. Love heals everything! I feel that I have made some progress, so I will give you a star to encourage me. I have 300,000 words in my manuscript, which is considered a breakthrough. If I fail later, I will change it back [awkward laugh] Don't criticize me, I recognize your talent! Grateful! [Sending Hearts]
I still like this novel very much. I rarely see two-male protagonists actually competing. Usually they just skip it and just fall in love. But this one is different. There are people who are working hard and the protagonist has a lot of personality. I quite like it. It's a pity that I fell in love [face covering]. This is really a sad accident.
It looks good, especially the description of the game at the beginning and subsequent events are really well written, but the moment when I suddenly traveled to the cave dwelling surprised me, because seeing the interstellar background reminded me of a high-tech world, but the overall writing is very good, recommended, but it is too short, [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]
Super pretty! I really love the characters of the two protagonists. They endured a lot of pressure and risked their lives to survive. There is an endless bond between the two people. Every description is so subtle and immersive. The little pull between the two people really poked me! ! ! ! Both of them are very strong! One day the two of them will stand side by side at the highest place! Zhang Chi, Du Heng, come on! Come on, author! !
Up to now, I feel that the author is getting better and better, and the story is becoming more and more exciting. Especially the relationship between Zhang Chi and Du Heng is so sweet. The villain Pei Ze also has his own characteristics. Du Feng's step-by-step compromise is also very funny. Come on, author, it's great!
I really like the feeling of extreme pulling between Du Heng and Zhang Chi. When did the two of them realize that they like each other [blowing kiss] Now it's time to update to the cold war between Zhang Chi and Du Heng. In fact, I think this kind of development is in line with their characters. I feel that Zhang Chi fits the kind of gentle and warm man who also has the feeling of being a long-term fishermen. Let yourself slowly enter Du Heng's life and make Du Heng's life full. Full of Zhang Chi's shadow, he is also very affectionate. He wants to give up but still has some small habits that he can't change (I think the part about touching the bracelet is very typical, and this part is also very well written) Du Heng is an arrogant little cat, but arrogance is greater than Jiao, even Jiao only has a little bit of Zhang Chi, Zhang Chi Chi knew this, so he stroked his hair and let himself enter Du Heng's life, feeling like he was moisturizing everything silently (ps: Maomao didn't know that he had stepped into Zhang Chi's trap). Du Heng didn't know how much influence Zhang Chi had on him. He had a good meal at the restaurant. It was shown in one paragraph. Du Heng could tell that this was a shop opened by Zhang Chi just by looking at the peeled fruits (the tsundere cat only knows the cold war, ugh [crazy]). Both of them were silently entering, participating, and changing each other's lives, but they didn't even know it [almost crying] In fact, I wrote this comment out of a thought. I felt a little sad when I saw the words posted in Dada's news [I almost cried] Dada is really super gentle, and everyone will reply patiently one by one when they comment. They update on time every day without delaying the manuscript. I would definitely not be able to do it if it were me. [Palm face] Dada's book has always been tepid, I feel so sorry for Dada, but Dada must stick to it. We original readers will always stick with you. [Salute] Finally, I would like to give you a sentence that I particularly like: "The passing of the test is difficult, but the road ahead is long and bright."
It's so good [Sending Hearts] I've been following it for a while, but I'm still a little bit sad that it ended suddenly. I don't know what to say, so I just wish Perseverance happiness in the parallel world, and I wish Mianmian all the best in the third dimension [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The article is very interesting, but could the author update it more every day? After reading it, I felt like I was starving.
It's super nice. This is the first competitive sports novel I read on Tomato. I like it very much. I like the two main characters very much. I like it very much [Adoration] [Adoration]
It's good-looking, and the writing is relatively mature, but the supporting characters are either looking for trouble or on the way to find trouble, and the protagonist has no sense of risk control. The author writes it very well.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I read a few chapters and the writing is good.
Not bad, worth watching
It's really sweet. The way Zhang Chi treats love is really enviable. Du Heng likes to be tolerant. This is the essence of love. Full text without knife