Naruto: I Raised Scorpions in My Past Life, but I Keep Bees in This Life.

First! The author writes very well, and has his own ideas about the plot. At present, it does not follow the original plot. At the same time, he explains the behavior of the characters in the book, and also adds some more reasonable settings to fill in some of the pitfalls of the original work. For example, Uchiha Kagami developed a kaleidoscope in the first Shinobu battle, and his temperament changed drastically to seek revenge and death. Danzo and others experienced Uchiha's madness firsthand, and then Danzo obtained Kagami's kaleidoscope, and became even crazier under the influence of the kaleidoscope. This filled the gap between the village's senior management's prevention of Uchiha, Danzo's obsession with Uchiha, and Kagami's death. However, if you look at the original work of Naruto, some people may think it is unreasonable, but after all, it is a fan, so this part of the setting should be smooth. Anyway, the original work also has a lot of inconsistencies. So if you think you can accept it, you can watch it. Personally, I think it's pretty good. Finally, I hope the author can treat Shisui better. After all, judging from the author's current direction, Ding Zhen's life will probably be much more miserable. Personally, I still like Ding Zhen very much. Of course, if it doesn't work, forget it. After all, the protagonist and Ding Zhen are probably enemies. [Top post][top post]

I have read Chapter 11. It is a good book. Although it is new wine in old bottles, the wine is good and the bottle is okay. The more obvious problem is that there is too much narration. In one chapter, a lot of stories are told in a big circle, but in the end there is not much plot. Have you read it? As seen.

I saw more than 20 pictures and I couldn't stand it anymore. It felt like reading a paper, [covering face]

At first I thought it was a female channel and I haven't watched it. I stayed up all night to finish it yesterday. It's very good, but it's a pity that I didn't learn Dust Release. But it's good that Onoki has continued to live and has a new life. In short, for someone like me who has been looking for Iwa Ninja books, this is a perfect score.

This novel is very good, and it is considered a masterpiece among Naruto fanfics. However, there are a lot of narrations. Some readers may not have the patience to read it, but I think it still looks very good.

I clearly explained the political system of the ninja world. The writing is smooth, The extraordinary system is reasonable, But I didn't explain the heroine's golden finger clearly.

The writing is very nice, and the heroine is not from Konoha or the family that appears in the original work, which is very innovative. The heroine's golden finger and her current style of being stubborn are not the best in the world because she has to maintain the character of an ordinary genius, but it is already super cool. I feel that the description on the battlefield is particularly good!

My writing style doesn't look like that of a newcomer. Does anyone know the name of the previous works? I'll check it out. It's really good.

How can I put it, I feel very comfortable watching it, but I feel like I don't have the same IQ as me. I've read enough other novels, such as romance novels and other brainless cool culture. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing, and it's quite interesting.

The battlefield scene is probably the best written by Tomato Naruto

Don't be fooled by the title of the book and think it's about raising a baby. In fact, it is just like the title of the book. Ninjutsu is beekeeping of insects. From the first chapter to the latest chapter in one breath, the pace is very good and there are occasional golden sentences. Worth a try

It's okay, there's nothing poisonous about it, and it has already surpassed a large number of Naruto fans. It's great without the mind-numbing and cerebral palsy. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

As of Chapter 47 of Volume 1. This book has its own logic and is quite harmonious, which makes it very comfortable to read. The expressions of other characters are also very good, and the fighting on the battlefield is quite enjoyable. The protagonist is also more cautious, which is not only reflected in her "gou", but also in her "skills", which are very "reasonable".

It's pretty good, but I feel a little uncomfortable. Of course, this is a problem because I read a lot of Shuangwen The overall review is great, but don't be fooled by some added tricks. He was banned, so the author should cheer for you

Very beautiful, the writing is smooth, the protagonist keeps bees and explodes soldiers, I like it ~ (I have only seen two books of Naruto's Insect-Raising Explosion Style so far. This one is more realistic. The previous one was too obsessed with suppressing combat power and boosting the strength of others. I look forward to the follow-up)

Want to see past lives I feel like I've finished Naruto and can't write anymore.

It's very interesting, and makes people want to follow it. There are very few novels with this quality in Tomato. Most of them are attractive at the beginning, and then they don't. This one may seem to be full of narration, but the plot is very interesting, and the various ideas and logic are very good. I just feel that the fighting scenes are not passionate enough. If it is not a fan, the supporting characters are not vivid enough if they do not have the impression of extending the original characters, but the flaws are not concealed. I give it five stars.

It's quite ok. I feel like there are few people because of the cover and the name... It's very similar to the style of raising a baby. . The moves are localized in the world of Naruto, and the story is quite interesting. The battle descriptions are very detailed, which is both an advantage and a disadvantage. It feels a bit like a group portrait, but it felt a bit confusing later on, so I skipped and read it. The extras are also available, and you can read them in Shuhuang.

The writing is very good, I like it very much, it is very humorous and interesting, and it is very interesting. Come on, the author, come on and update more! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I rarely comment. To be honest, to be honest, if I say that the plot of this book is relatively strong, at least the supporting characters here have some IQs and so on, which is relatively good anyway. Then when I read other Naruto stories, they basically want to be dark to the extreme or some stallion harem stories, which are very abstract. Although it is very exciting to watch, it is very abstract!!! This book ranks among the many novels I have read, it is in the top 10. You may say that I have not read a particularly good novel, but I have only read chapter 17 now. Anyway, I think these 10 chapters are pretty good. You can't wait until later to read it. Anyway, let's wait until later to comment.

It's written in detail, but it's so detailed that it feels like reading an explanatory text.

It's okay, but the expansion in the back is a bit too much. I don't think this book will be too long. It feels like no one can restrain the protagonist Feng Aotian's work.

The only shortcoming is probably the narration, which is pretty well written.

Progress Chapter 74 Looks good, recommended, don't be a rip off, don't be a mess! There are too few, I will raise them first [laughing and crying] The author also made some patches to the pitfalls of the original work to make it more reasonable, which is quite thoughtful. It's just that the heroine's previous life is a bit inconsistent with her previous life. I hope it can be integrated more reasonably. Progress completed It's good to watch. Except for some characters and some pitfalls that disappear as soon as I write them down, it's still pretty good. Overall, the flaws are not hidden.

Although the plot is a bit too detailed, I like it. The details look very real, and the overall plot is smooth. It is not a brainless novel. I hope you will continue to write it. It is fun to read! If you have any skill settings in the previous life, can you give a general introduction? I haven't seen the world view of the previous life.

It's not that Konoha starts with a three-point score, it's not a brainless four-point score, the plot is reasonable and interesting, and it's a five-point score that's special.

The starting point is pretty good. Very nice. I don't know whether it's cool to have a brain or not. This is so well written. The protagonist's identity and skills. Very rare in fan fiction.

Repeated defeats and battles, keep up the good work, the author [laughing]

It's okay, the only pity is that I saw him in the new book issue. The number of words is too small, and I'm afraid the author won't be able to finish it.

The work is amazing and excellent, it feels like a trumpet played by a great god It's extremely excellent, but I always felt it was too short and inconsistent. I wanted to wait but couldn't bear to part with it.