The Adventures of Luoluo, Taking over the World from the Vanguard

The writing is pretty good, not as good as Tailong Aotian, but why hasn't it been updated for so long? Isn't it really discontinued?

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Potential stock, no system

With great writing, he travels through Vanguard and discovers that the world of robot beasts has been invaded. See how Vanguard conquers the three beast kings and the war plane.

The only drawback is the time-traveling through the body, the poor pacing when new forces are introduced in the middle, and the confusing setting of the source energy world. In addition, the plot is interesting and the pace is not sluggish. Overall, it is a good book.

So far, it looks good, let alone eunuchs. Also, the combat power of the new world should not be too low. I feel that the combat power of the new world will collapse very quickly. The combat power level there is almost a few levels higher than that of the robot beasts. It seems to be around 25. If it is too high, it will not work if it is in the 30s or 40s. Oops, I realized that the book "The Unlimited" was also written by you. It's unfinished, and your combat power has collapsed terribly. Please take it easy this time.

Not bad, the world view is innovative

The writing is quite good, at least it makes me interested in reading it. I still feel a little bit of the flavor of the blue "fox", but it's too little. And I heard that the author was resurrected after watching a video. Come on, don't stop. There was a resurrected before, but he stopped again after just two days of rest. Now it's time to see the blue bear leading 50,000 blind bears undercover... So what is the protagonist's situation now? The King of Robots in the form of a motorcycle?

Good looking. Love to see more.

Throw the blue poison beast as an instant blast

It's obviously so good-looking but not many people see it, so why don't I just give it a full rating!

It's so right, that's what it tastes like

It's indeed possible. It adds new areas and characters to the original foundation. It's interesting.

It's not bad, there's nothing poisonous about it, and it's not a brainless piece of writing. It has great potential, but I don't know if it will become popular.

It looks good and fulfills my previous fantasy of what it would be like if Boundless Sea hadn't died. Beautiful, no need to say more!

So far it looks okay, the combat power has not collapsed, and the world view is quite rich.

Author, I approve of you

Come on, come on, come on

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

It looks so good that I'm addicted to it

It's very beautiful and very enjoyable to watch. There are a few mistakes that need to be corrected, such as the vanguard's level being wrong.

Yes, the world view has become bigger, I look forward to the first-hand plot

Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking.

It looks good, much better than the original Vanguard.

Very good-looking, one of the best in the Luoluo series [Eating Melon]

It's okay, although it's a bit distracting

It's okay, come on

Interesting, I like it very much

The needle won't poke, I really won't poke.

Okay, worth a look