Game Invasion: Players Can Travel Through Time Only After I Become Emperor

This book has received mixed reviews, but I think it is fundamentally a very well-written book. First of all, I think the handling of the role of Song Jiang is very good, completely breaking the previous style of Song Jiang's obedience to Tang Monk. Tang Seng is not like before who always chatted with Lin Daiyu and did not do his job properly. The plot including Xiahou Dun's battle with Xu Sanduo was also well portrayed, completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as stated in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and separation, sparks sparked with her. In this way, the logic of the plot becomes very smooth, giving the audience a refreshing feeling. The plot of the story is also intricate and fascinating. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies have a revenge plan against He-Man? Who is responsible for the big belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions tightly locked the audience's attention. The finale of the fight scene between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck was well arranged, and the open ending made the audience yearn for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. It is worth mentioning that the vicissitudes of the atmosphere in which Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in the Akina Mountains suddenly reveal the delicate inner world of Ren Wo Xing when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan. The comic dialogue between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang, who guest-starred in the book, and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage three times and asking Charlotte to rescue his grandfather are also highlights. It's hard to describe in one word, it's a masterpiece!

Tomato is another magical book. It's not easy. 9.5 Is a bit high for this book. The previous review was too hasty. 9.0 Is not bad. The male protagonist has an affair with a woman, which makes people feel a little nauseous. (I heard that one star does not reduce the score, so I will change it again.)

It's very beautiful, the thinking is clear, the narrative is very clear, and it's fun to watch.

I finished reading it in one go. Objectively speaking, the rating of 8.9 Is low. It is better written than many 9-point books. Pig's Knuckles and Yushu Linfeng has an online IQ and knows how to advance and retreat. It is not the kind of mindless cool plot. The characters are well described and the plot is well advanced. It is worth watching.

It's worth watching, but the Empress doesn't like it very much. I don't know if it's Xiaodu. According to the male protagonist's memory, the Empress and the male protagonist's brother Xia Hao seemed to have a mutual affection in the previous life. Moreover, the original male protagonist may have been pressed to death by the Empress, and the Empress looked down on the male protagonist in the early stage. This is human nature. The above is my personal understanding. I am waiting for the author to patch it up. I like the character of the male protagonist. There is no scene of deliberately copying the work and slapping the man in the face to pretend to be a b. I want to see the follow-up of the empress' love but not being able to get it. The male protagonist and other lovers can achieve enlightenment and immortality [Please update] [Please update]

To sum up, after reading it so far, the world view is very big, not the kind of confusion, but the kind that I am looking forward to, and the plot is also very exciting. Facing the coming rebellion, the foreshadowing is very detailed. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I've been reading this for a long time, and I commented on the world view before. Now more people are reading it, and the negative comments from before are gone. It's really good.

The only one who has a system and whose level of advancement is very slow but I feel that it is not slow. IQ is online. My evaluation is that there is something. In the world of Tomato Flowers, the author is also unique. Come on!

So far, the author's writing skills are strong! And the world view is very grand. There are quite a few buried holes. I feel like the pace is a bit slow. I don't know how many million words are left at the end of the writing. You can speed up the pace a bit.

Quality must be guaranteed, quantity must also be improved. You are an excellent author, I believe you can definitely do it [Like]

First of all, let me declare: the author's writing is excellent, and the plot is compact and coherent without being superficial, nor does it overwhelm the protagonist. It is a great work and deserves 5 stars. But here comes the problem. They are all plots of intrigues and intrigues in TV dramas. You say okay, this is a novel, or even an upgrade of the game invasion theme, not a TV series. People mainly come to watch the protagonist "play the game" and "upgrade" step by step. They are not here to watch "Gong Du". Just skip 100 chapters and the protagonist's strength still has not changed. The plot is good, it is indeed good, but I really didn't come here specifically to watch Gong Du. If I want to watch this kind of thing, why should I come to your "Game Invasion"? There is no data, promotion is "slow", and there is no feeling of "playing the game". Bad review, I can only give 1⭐️ in this aspect, but the author's level is indeed very good. Those who want to see the "upgrade flow" can just quit. Those who want to see "step by step in the world of low martial arts to climb to a high position", pure plot flow, 5⭐️ praise

This book is what I like, especially the classical Chinese text at the back, which is recorded truthfully.

It's a great book, but the updates are too slow. Come on, author. Even though it's not the time yet, the protagonist's strength should be strengthened, right? Even if you want to cultivate immortality in the future, you still need to increase your current strength, right? Two hundred pictures, it is completely written about tactics. The game world written in the introduction has nothing to do with the age of cultivating immortals. It is all about tactics. Although it is good-looking, it is no longer relevant to the introduction. Readers who come later can read this comment. I hope the pace of writing will be faster, otherwise I am afraid that it will be delayed.

A great book, especially the classical Chinese at the end. It is very thoughtful. It has the framework of a masterpiece but the depth is not good enough. The language and literature are not very good. The plot arrangement is not sharp enough. The experience of life is not enough. The conception needs to be more detailed. Five stars are support and gifts are supplements. The most taboo thing in novels It's not that there are few gifts, it's that the business failed half way through. I would like to emphasize that the money is not much, but there are free gifts every day. I don't think many people will read the comments, but you can still collect the free gifts to encourage the author. Have a good year, honor your parents, and support your children.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Well written, I give it a five. There are no big problems with the plot, nor with the logic. The only thing that is a little too bland is that, although it is said that the early stage needs to be wretched and developed, so as not to stand out from the crowd, the protagonist is from a royal family, and there is actually no problem with being a little bit cheesy. Moreover, the protagonist's father and his younger brother are poisonous. So in the future, he should be more ruthless with his father, his younger brother, and his mother. Don't engage in retaliation with kindness. Instead, be more aggressive and imitate Fangyuan's method of gathering the power of the entire clan so that he can obtain the Ten Ultimate Body. There is no need to annihilate the entire clan. Just kill these three, and Yao Guangyao. It says that he is still testing the protagonist. Since he wants to test, he must be prepared for the impact he will receive after the test. Women are just seasoning, not the whole life. The plot has made it clear that the protagonist has the ambition to swallow the sky, so don't care too much about him. This woman is just for promotion. The initial establishment of capital will inevitably involve some dirty and bloody methods, which is harmless.

You are the most interesting author I have seen so far. I invested 1,000 yuan in traffic for you. Although the money is not much, I did not invest.

The plot and world view are very good But I want to complain about it, the male protagonist gets an electric shock when he touches a female. . . . . . The author is not very good at writing emotional dramas. If there are fewer emotional dramas, the score may be higher.

It's a bit creative, but it's all routine and cool, right? There were so many arrogant comments, you thought I was wrong... [Face covering]

The overall structure is okay, and it is considered a very good novel in Tomato. Personally, I suggest that you don't write the so-called villains too brainlessly. A single star is not spring, and a hundred flowers bloom and eventually become a god.

[The method of Shinto (complete) can refine the power of faith and transform it into divine power. Use divine power to ignite divine fire to replace mana. The soul becomes a god, creates a Shinto, establishes a godhead, and becomes a god (Taiyi True Immortal) and a third-level god (Golden Immortal). Second-level god (Taiyi Golden Immortal), first-level god (Daluo Jinxian), main god (quasi-sage), god king (Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian), creation god (Wujiluo Jinxian), supreme god (Hunyuan Wujiluo Jinxian), avenue level!

It looks interesting, not bad, the only drawback is that there are too few When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slight praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

The protagonist gets whatever he wants, the protagonist is omnipotent and omniscient, and the protagonist is infinitely charming for both men and women. The male protagonist says a few words, and the male feels admiration, and the female feels admiration. The plot was written based on what I thought of, and I didn't see any plotting. What I wanted to see was the intrigue between others and the protagonist. The content was ups and downs, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists was clear. Here I only see the protagonist's family being the only one in the family, the previous chapter and the aftermath are resolved in one chapter, and the relationship between the male and female protagonist is resolved in one chapter. I can only say that it is very, very beautiful. I highly recommend it. I feel like I have seen the platinum author next door. I can't stand it anymore, I'm so embarrassed

That's it. The structure is large but not scattered, humorous but not out of style, there are plots and famous lines from poems and books, there are successes and failures, there are wolves who live in the shadows, there are talents and beauties, there are also powerful plans, there are wits and strength, the scale is huge but there are traces to follow, it is compact but not tense, there are some male channels and some female channels like to watch, watch it differently You can only find fault points in this book, but you can only find faults in this book. It is a cool article. You understand, it is a cool article, but it is the kind of cool article written by Huangtian Emperor, the kind of cool article written by the Great Love Immortal, and the kind of cool article in which the Great Love Immortal Lord fights and plots against each other. It is not a navy, but it is readable, good-looking, systematic but not big in the drama, and there are many things. Please take a closer look.

It feels good. If you like multiple female protagonists, you can check it out. Look at the reading time.

Five-star praise, very beautiful. If you haven't seen it, come in and take a look, I've already finished it. Very beautiful, five-star rating. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Some brothers, some Ultimate resilience——Yang Jian The ultimate real injury——Lu Bu Ultimate control - Bodhidharma The ultimate deceleration - Charlotte The ultimate support——Guan Yu The ultimate technique - Yuan Ge The ultimate explosion——Li Xin The ultimate injury-free——Meng Tian The ultimate lines - Sikong Zhen Of course there is more than one such strong hero. These are all powerful heroes at the tO.5 Level in the current version. If you master one or two Nine Gates Heroes, there will be no problem with the Glory Hundred Stars Small National Standard. If you can master more than half of the nine-door heroes, it will be quite easy for you to reach the top one hundred or ten.

To be honest. Very nice. Very nice. For now, there is definitely a female protagonist. The second princess is definitely the heroine. And the protagonist wants to take the path of being an emperor. As an emperor, one heroine is too few. Since the four beauties are all here, there must be some drama. The introduction also states that the protagonist is a succubus, so there are multiple female protagonists. I hope there won't be too many female leads. About 7 will do. The main thing is to shape it well. Come on!

The previous chapter of Machiavellian Strategy is really surprising😱, the layout is grand, the logic is meticulous, the early plot is still great, and then transitions to Chuzhou, this is my favorite plot, from the beginning of the Chuzhou Mu to the King of Chu, to the later King of Luo and the emperor who competes for hegemony on the Nine Provinces Continent. I have to give thumbs up here, I like it very much, but I am not interested in opening the Central Plains, the pace is a bit slow, I think the regional governance is very reasonable, the spiritual energy has not yet recovered (~_~💧), the foreshadowing is a bit too long, I hope the author can write more excellent plots🤗

I have to say that this book is more time-consuming to read than some online games, and it can be savored like a cup of tea. If it is better to read than traditional online game novels and more interesting than fantasy novels, maybe you are not pursuing spiritual treasures and the like. After all, there is a system, and there are no bottlenecks. Now, the main thing is to overthrow the dynasty, and you may not see anything important. The post-processing of the relationship between players and locals may also lead to some transitional periods. After all, it is still three or four levels away from the level of this version. Let alone the official version, it has reached a critical point. Of course, these are only personal opinions. It was also said in the early stage that there are three or four versions. This should belong to the first version. It is normal to write it in detail. It is still the same sentence. Big boost for the author [please update]

How shameless! The author's skills are there. I really like the ending of the historical records at the end of the chapter. From the introduction, it seems to be an online game article, but in fact it is more like a historical article like "Dafeng's Watcher" and "Celebrating More Than Years", but the system that does not appear much adds to the sense of fun. In the future, modern players will join in, but now the progress of the protagonist exceeds the players by too much, and because it is a historical novel, the protagonist has developed a lot of party members, and inevitably uses some modern thinking. However, the players who come later also have modern thinking, but the author has forcefully filled in the holes (it can be seen that the author is thoughtful), and players cannot remember to use modern poetry when entering the game. It's like the protagonist is a time-traveler and uses this advantage to develop, but many of the same time-travelers will also appear, which will lead to problems such as gangs. The last innovation in this book is the collision of game writing and historical writing. The writing is not easy and problems may arise later on, but I believe in the author's strength. With this worldview, there are still four major versions, and they are outlined step by step with the delicate writing style of historical texts (powerful plots will appear in historical texts, etc.). This book should take a long time to write, and the number of words should be very large. This makes it easy for big heads to appear. The first version has too much, and the later versions have less than the last, but I still believe in the author's strength. The characters are also good. This book is mostly a harem novel, but the scale should be restrained (the author has a book with good results that was too big and was blocked). It doesn't matter, after all, no one can resist the power of the Nine Turns Net Gu, but the author should not let the protagonist be a eunuch, and the number and personality of the heroines should be controlled, not too many, and try to let each heroine have her own shining point, not a vase, and try to make readers remember each heroine after reading. For now, the author's character portrayal is of a very high standard, and everyone's IQ is online. There is Princess Pingyang, who is charming, intelligent, and caring about the protagonist, and there is also Princess Yaoguang, the future empress who is extremely intelligent and good at hiding her martial arts. Her favorable impression of the protagonist has increased after admiring her again and again. With such a huge worldview, each chapter should be extremely concise. The author should pursue quantity under the premise of quality. Otherwise, when the number of words increases later, a large amount of water injection will also be a big criticism. The author's way of writing this large version can add fantasy and other elements to the book, but I hope the author can balance it more than he can chew. Summary: It's too early to meet, not enough to watch. It has the power of a historical novel and the strength of a game novel and a fantasy novel. The author has a good grasp of it. This book has a bright future. I hope the author will adopt my opinion. I give it five stars. The 800-word review is quite confusing, but I hope it will be helpful to the author and readers.