Storms and Chilling Winds

Not bad. Generally speaking, the plot advancement is like the protagonist's innate power, which is stagnant. Haha, this kind of slow-burning novel requires time to read. Slow heat allows the author to describe emotions gently and delicately, shape characters, exaggerate plots, and show people's hearts without leaving a trace behind, achieving a very good artistic effect. However, the author also suffers from a common shortcoming of slow novels, that is, it is difficult to accurately grasp the progress of the plot, and the foreshadowing is too deep and too thin at the same time: specifically, there is almost no sign of the foreshadowing, and the final reveal is too deliberate, which can neither arouse the reader's curiosity at all times during the development of the plot, nor give people a sense of sudden enlightenment when it breaks out. Of course, this is difficult to do. It is not the author's problem, but the challenges that come with this writing method itself. But I hope the author can continue to work hard. The writing style is not a big problem. The key lies in organizing the plot, arranging the characters, and advancing the development of the story. It is recommended that the author re-examine his words from the reader's perspective after finishing writing. Even though the author has an outline, plot, and foreshadowing in his mind, the reader does not have it in his mind and cannot see it. Therefore, after finishing writing, the author may feel that he has written well, or he may be very excited when the foreshadowing breaks out and the suspense is revealed, and he may feel a sudden enlightenment, but the reader may not see it or tell it. If you just write blindly and write to get high, it can only be said to be a kind of narcissism. A little superficial advice, not worth mentioning, I hope it can be of some help to you. Thanks.

Recently, I fell in love with the male channel. For girls, I also feel that it is very good. The article is well written: it advocates martial arts strength and has some elements of cultivating immortals. I like it overall. The 1v1 male and female protagonists have been leveling up together. It is good-looking and exciting, but the rating is too low, only 6.7. In the female channel, it should be about 9 points. After all, the logic is flawless, revenge is quick, not aggrieved, not bloody, and not competitive. 👍 Great support for the author 👍 Looking forward to publishing more good books.

Pure Love plus Gaowu plus plug-ins, high-quality products, nothing to say. The male protagonist is cautious, dedicated, and well-planned; the female protagonist is an innocent girl, generous and generous. The daily fights between the heroine and the hero are also well described, and I can't find any flaws for the time being [I learned it]

Chapter 30 is very sweet and the progress is very fast. For those who like to read comments before reading the book, I can remind you that the heroine starts to reveal herself in chapter 21 and then there are many scenes. The only scene in the first 20 is the shadow man, so you only need to read the first few chapters to understand the realm of the book and the division of power. You can almost jump to 21.

It's good to watch, but I always felt that it wasn't exciting enough. It ended in a bland way. The previous part is still okay. It might have been better to put the feelings of Ye at the front as an introduction. The previous feelings were unclear.

So far, the settings and writing are all pretty good. There are no particularly intolerable flaws, but there is nothing particularly attractive either. Summary: These 100 chapters are pretty good, but the details will come later.

The group portrait is a group portrait of flesh and blood. It is very well written. Each character has flesh and blood drawn, as well as the author's thoughts about the human heart. The most attractive setting is that the strong person here is not like other novels that only kill and kill as he pleases, but everyone has his own purpose when doing things. I think a strong person is not strong because he has talent and can kill people, but a person who thinks for himself, knows the rules, uses the rules, understands how the world works, and uses them.

It's a good book, the realm is pretty good, the plot is well laid out, the combat power is not broken, and the content is sweet, but it's not suitable for people like me, so I'll leave it with five stars. It's a good book, you can read it if you're interested 👍

Very nice, I don't know why the score is so low

It's well written, but it just doesn't suit me! It should be suitable for single "boys" who have a beautiful yearning for love!