[No cp+no national luck+growth system]
Li Ji fell asleep on the subway after returning home from get off work, but when he woke up, he found himself on a strange train?
Weird rules?
A weird train?
The man who appeared on the platform was...
Strange family members?
Weird sister?
What is the secret hidden by "Dad"?
Reader comments
The sky is falling, the review was half-written and deleted, so I'll keep it short and I'm too lazy to type.
This book can make people feel uncomfortable at times, and the heroine seems to be stupid from time to time. I feel that the probability of encountering a bad guy in the team is extremely low, maybe because this game doesn't have any mechanisms to defraud teammates or hide tasks. The heroine especially likes to take the initiative to encourage her teammates, and then explore as a team, share clues, and the dungeon also encourages each other to form teams, otherwise the heroine will be too busy at all. (Lone Wolf has watched too much, so it's a bit awkward to watch this kind of thing)
Then, the author can occasionally put some of the thinking and reasoning of the protagonist or supporting characters, such as Cheng Fei, and the suspicion and reasoning should not be completely placed when everything is settled, the reader will hold his breath and think: Why is this person so stupid that everyone seems to believe it. Then the ending is reversed, which may not necessarily be satisfying, and you will feel that the heroine is smart for a while. It's more likely that you'll get bored and just give up.
The same goes for finding her father in reality. I understand that the author wants to write that the heroine is unwilling to give up all clues to find her father. However, the phone number is gone, there is no such person in the world, and the name of the real estate certificate has been changed. The heroine has been asking and searching everywhere in reality. She didn't even react when she came out of the hospital copy, and she was still looking for her in reality. It feels like it's really going to be treated as a delusion. What, did capital secretly delete your father? Maybe the author wanted to rely on the heroine's various ways to find her father, but it was really uncomfortable for the readers.
There are so few book reviews. The author is like a stand-alone, leaving you a review. Come on! I like this kind of writing without a lot of vulgar descriptions [laughs].
The copies are one after another, with light and dark lines intertwined inside. It's quite attractive. The writing style is a little immature. Although it's not as good as those of the big guys, I can still read it and encourage the author. I hope there will be more. Reading like this every day is not enough [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
It's really beautiful! ! ! I registered halfway through reading just to write a review for this book. It's a strange story about the rules of the walking brain system. The heroine will really analyze the rules one by one and then deduce the loopholes. The plot is super compact and there is no nonsense to delay the time. The heroine is a model worker. She downloaded the copies one after another. I couldn't sleep because of it in the middle of the night!
I like to see the progress of the dumpling series dungeon!
Very beautiful! It's a book that feels like a treasure [a heartfelt gift]
There isn't much fighting description, it's more cerebral, but it's a pity that there is a highlight male character. I hope that more full-bodied characters like Cheng Fei can be created!
Come on, author. I wish you happiness and good health every day.
The second dungeon has improved. I like the heroine's character. It makes people feel warm, like a beam of light in the dark, without being artificial. I hope the author will keep it up and look forward to the follow-up and completion.
I feel that the writing is very good. I have listened to each copy for more than 3,000 hours. I hope the author will not be affected by some comments. Come on, keep writing. I hope that one day your book will appear on the top recommendation list!
Like it very much! I stay up late every morning and see several updates from you. What I'm most excited about when I get back from my stay is seeing the updates.
Besides, I really think Jasmine is very cute [crying] I will get a painting when I get back from prison next week (it may be different from the author's idea, I'm sorry for not paying too much attention to the appearance description🙏
Oops, it's a pity that I can't post pictures here, but you can see them in the book circle
I am a person who reads books without logic and doesn't think too much, so I didn't think much about daddy issues.
But the copy design is very powerful, I admire the author's imagination [love] [cry]
It's pretty good. The heroine is brave and resourceful, but the number of words is too few. It's not enough to read. Great work for the author.
It's very exciting, there are many rules, and there are reasonings. There is no national destiny. It's very good. There may not be many people rating the new book. Let me wish you a helping hand!
The first dungeon was amazing. It confused me with Yuhe's dungeon. It was really good! It's just a little short! This is a great movie, but it's a pity that so few people have watched it. Did the author stop updating it because no one watched it? [Laughing and crying]
Very exciting but not enough
Not bad, unlimited flow of model workers
Good luck to the author in the new year
The most important thing is to find my father. This plot really pokes me
As a normal person's experience of ghost stories, it's not bad. I'm just a little obsessed with finding my father, but I reluctantly accept the temptation as a rule-based weird talk.
Very good. Very detailed and analyzed word for word.
Oh my god, it's so beautiful. The design of the copy is so nice. It seems like I know what's going on with my dad.
It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it works wonders when you watch it in the middle of the night [love] [love] [love]
I like it, it's very nice, the idea is unique to Hema
The plot is pretty good, but the writing is a bit jerky, but I'll keep reading.
The further back the better
It's a great book. Why is there no rating? The logic is very smooth. The heroine has no cheats and uses her brain. I like it very much.
The sky is falling, the review was half-written and deleted, so I'll keep it short and I'm too lazy to type. This book can make people feel uncomfortable at times, and the heroine seems to be stupid from time to time. I feel that the probability of encountering a bad guy in the team is extremely low, maybe because this game doesn't have any mechanisms to defraud teammates or hide tasks. The heroine especially likes to take the initiative to encourage her teammates, and then explore as a team, share clues, and the dungeon also encourages each other to form teams, otherwise the heroine will be too busy at all. (Lone Wolf has watched too much, so it's a bit awkward to watch this kind of thing) Then, the author can occasionally put some of the thinking and reasoning of the protagonist or supporting characters, such as Cheng Fei, and the suspicion and reasoning should not be completely placed when everything is settled, the reader will hold his breath and think: Why is this person so stupid that everyone seems to believe it. Then the ending is reversed, which may not necessarily be satisfying, and you will feel that the heroine is smart for a while. It's more likely that you'll get bored and just give up. The same goes for finding her father in reality. I understand that the author wants to write that the heroine is unwilling to give up all clues to find her father. However, the phone number is gone, there is no such person in the world, and the name of the real estate certificate has been changed. The heroine has been asking and searching everywhere in reality. She didn't even react when she came out of the hospital copy, and she was still looking for her in reality. It feels like it's really going to be treated as a delusion. What, did capital secretly delete your father? Maybe the author wanted to rely on the heroine's various ways to find her father, but it was really uncomfortable for the readers. There are so few book reviews. The author is like a stand-alone, leaving you a review. Come on! I like this kind of writing without a lot of vulgar descriptions [laughs].
The copies are one after another, with light and dark lines intertwined inside. It's quite attractive. The writing style is a little immature. Although it's not as good as those of the big guys, I can still read it and encourage the author. I hope there will be more. Reading like this every day is not enough [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
It's really beautiful! ! ! I registered halfway through reading just to write a review for this book. It's a strange story about the rules of the walking brain system. The heroine will really analyze the rules one by one and then deduce the loopholes. The plot is super compact and there is no nonsense to delay the time. The heroine is a model worker. She downloaded the copies one after another. I couldn't sleep because of it in the middle of the night! I like to see the progress of the dumpling series dungeon!
Very beautiful! It's a book that feels like a treasure [a heartfelt gift] There isn't much fighting description, it's more cerebral, but it's a pity that there is a highlight male character. I hope that more full-bodied characters like Cheng Fei can be created! Come on, author. I wish you happiness and good health every day.
The second dungeon has improved. I like the heroine's character. It makes people feel warm, like a beam of light in the dark, without being artificial. I hope the author will keep it up and look forward to the follow-up and completion.
I feel that the writing is very good. I have listened to each copy for more than 3,000 hours. I hope the author will not be affected by some comments. Come on, keep writing. I hope that one day your book will appear on the top recommendation list!
Like it very much! I stay up late every morning and see several updates from you. What I'm most excited about when I get back from my stay is seeing the updates. Besides, I really think Jasmine is very cute [crying] I will get a painting when I get back from prison next week (it may be different from the author's idea, I'm sorry for not paying too much attention to the appearance description🙏 Oops, it's a pity that I can't post pictures here, but you can see them in the book circle I am a person who reads books without logic and doesn't think too much, so I didn't think much about daddy issues. But the copy design is very powerful, I admire the author's imagination [love] [cry]
It's pretty good. The heroine is brave and resourceful, but the number of words is too few. It's not enough to read. Great work for the author.
It's very exciting, there are many rules, and there are reasonings. There is no national destiny. It's very good. There may not be many people rating the new book. Let me wish you a helping hand!
The first dungeon was amazing. It confused me with Yuhe's dungeon. It was really good! It's just a little short! This is a great movie, but it's a pity that so few people have watched it. Did the author stop updating it because no one watched it? [Laughing and crying]
Very exciting but not enough
Not bad, unlimited flow of model workers
Good luck to the author in the new year
The most important thing is to find my father. This plot really pokes me
As a normal person's experience of ghost stories, it's not bad. I'm just a little obsessed with finding my father, but I reluctantly accept the temptation as a rule-based weird talk.
Very good. Very detailed and analyzed word for word.
Oh my god, it's so beautiful. The design of the copy is so nice. It seems like I know what's going on with my dad.
It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it works wonders when you watch it in the middle of the night [love] [love] [love]
I like it, it's very nice, the idea is unique to Hema
The plot is pretty good, but the writing is a bit jerky, but I'll keep reading. The further back the better
It's a great book. Why is there no rating? The logic is very smooth. The heroine has no cheats and uses her brain. I like it very much.