[No heroine] [System] [Behind the scenes] [Dismantle the protagonist group] [Group portrait] [Fake sky curtain]
In the year 1518 of the Hainan calendar, the arrival of a visitor from another world changed the direction of the entire world!
Spoilers below:
Bucky: Now tell the world! My name is Rocks D. Bucky!
Blackbeard: I will lead the Whitebeard Pirates to continue sailing on this sea! Until the end of the world!
Ace: What? I also have a brother named Gol D. William?
Reader comments
The beginning is really nice. I know how to recruit the protagonist group [laughs awkwardly]
It's quite interesting for the time being. The part about Blackbeard reminds me of the story I once watched, The Great Pirate Whitebeard II - Blackbeard Marshall D. Teach [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
The author is really passionate, and I can't help but admire him. I don't know why the rating is so low. This fanfic needs to be logical, the characters are basically online, the plot is not procrastinating, and it has some fun moments. Perhaps the only thing worth complaining about is that the descriptions are a bit "hard" in some places, but in the current Pirates fanfic, it should be at least 8 points or above. I don't understand why this rating is only 7.1 Points. Good cheers for the author and continue to love it. [Laughing]
It's well written, and I haven't seen any surprises yet. And the author's attitude is so good [face covering] Not only is it faster, but there is also a kowtow at the end of each chapter. Jpg. If he wants five stars, then give it to him (of course, I am willing to give it because it really doesn't hit my point)
It sucks. . .
The writing is really good, and some patches have been added to the original work appropriately. The content is quite exciting, that is, the deputy director William. If you are a person who reads at a glance, well, you will probably have to dig through the book to find it. The foreshadowing is not enough and it is quite abrupt.
Vinsmoke's strength has been over-strengthened. Even Tianyaksha can't beat them at all. Big Mom's whole group can't keep them in the rear. The few who wear combat uniforms are all generals.
Very good, although it looks like it is too many elements put together, but at least it revolves around the garbled words. It doesn't deviate from the subject. The protagonist stays behind the scenes, and there is no problem.
The only drawback is that transitions are not written, and "at the same time (location)" is not written.
But I still give it five stars! Based on my many years of experience in reading novels, this book is not relevant, it is at least about 8.5.
Who called him Wu Geng? [Mazu] [Mazu] [Mazu]
It's interesting. It's almost as good as the first one. Unfortunately, the first one was ruined in the later stage. I hope this one can keep enough fun.
Five updates a day, I announce that you are the new Pirate King [laughing evilly]
The plot design is very interesting, and the characters are not broken, but at the author's pace, it won't be finished in 200 pictures at most. But the book is a good one, and very interesting. Here are three gifts for you today.
Although his plot is not the most exciting and his logic is not the most rigorous, it is the most exciting behind-the-scenes story about pirates that I have ever read!
The group portraits are wonderful, and every character is outstanding!
I hope the author will continue to maintain quality and quantity!
At last! This author updates five times a day!
Everyone! Please feel free to read on!
With such a number of chapters, I approve of you. In terms of breaking updates, among all the Pirates fics I have read, no one is better than you. I would like to call you the strongest.
The author's novel is good. You can give the heroine to those dolls. Anyway, if the protagonist wants something, a woman can't customize a doll.
It's okay, but the progress is a bit too fast [laughing evilly]
The logic is tight, the language is fluent, and the plot is exciting. I don't know what others say, but I think it is quite interesting. Maybe it means that the subject matter is not mainstream, so there are fewer people. After all, there are fewer people reading pirate fan fiction, less people watching behind the scenes, and less people tearing down the protagonist group. Although there are not many people, it has a group of particularly loyal readers. Come on, do your homework! I will always support you! ! !
It's very good to watch, but it's a bit short. The plot is well written. The plot is a bit too fast. It could have been longer. It's a pity.
This book gave me a big surprise. I thought that it would describe many characters like the previous Tianmu novels, which would lead to confusion and confusion for readers. However, this Tianmu novel is a bit out of touch. There are not many characters fighting randomly, which gives people the impression that it is not a sky curtain. It does not interfere with the readers' sense of reading and gives five-star encouragement (՞ਊ՞)👍
Will the progress be too fast? I feel like it will be finished soon if I write it this way.
I really like this kind of subject matter, but no one writes about it
6. I like this one. . . .
If nothing else, just because he updates five times a day, he deserves this five-star rating. He is the most diligent author among the books I am currently following.
It's great, the best One Piece fanfic this year. Come on author
The writing is good. It seems to be better than the other Big Storyteller in the early stage. Just don't write too much in the future [laughing and crying]
It's very interesting. There are few creative ones. I really like this kind of behind-the-scenes flow, and coupled with the role-playing
Very good, the author keeps up the good work
Pretty good, I like it personally
The most powerful man behind the scenes!
I feel great.
It's difficult to write a novel with multiple identities. It's just average. I won't criticize the author, but I'll give it four stars.
It's really pretty
I hope the plot doesn't collapse later
Just with 5 updates a day, it is definitely a 5-star review. [Sinister smile]
The subject matter is good, but the characterization is not good enough, but it is understandable that the new author should support it, and only 4 stars will be included in the rating, and 5 stars will generally be invalid.
The beginning is really nice. I know how to recruit the protagonist group [laughs awkwardly]
It's quite interesting for the time being. The part about Blackbeard reminds me of the story I once watched, The Great Pirate Whitebeard II - Blackbeard Marshall D. Teach [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
The author is really passionate, and I can't help but admire him. I don't know why the rating is so low. This fanfic needs to be logical, the characters are basically online, the plot is not procrastinating, and it has some fun moments. Perhaps the only thing worth complaining about is that the descriptions are a bit "hard" in some places, but in the current Pirates fanfic, it should be at least 8 points or above. I don't understand why this rating is only 7.1 Points. Good cheers for the author and continue to love it. [Laughing]
It's well written, and I haven't seen any surprises yet. And the author's attitude is so good [face covering] Not only is it faster, but there is also a kowtow at the end of each chapter. Jpg. If he wants five stars, then give it to him (of course, I am willing to give it because it really doesn't hit my point) It sucks. . .
The writing is really good, and some patches have been added to the original work appropriately. The content is quite exciting, that is, the deputy director William. If you are a person who reads at a glance, well, you will probably have to dig through the book to find it. The foreshadowing is not enough and it is quite abrupt.
Vinsmoke's strength has been over-strengthened. Even Tianyaksha can't beat them at all. Big Mom's whole group can't keep them in the rear. The few who wear combat uniforms are all generals.
Very good, although it looks like it is too many elements put together, but at least it revolves around the garbled words. It doesn't deviate from the subject. The protagonist stays behind the scenes, and there is no problem. The only drawback is that transitions are not written, and "at the same time (location)" is not written. But I still give it five stars! Based on my many years of experience in reading novels, this book is not relevant, it is at least about 8.5. Who called him Wu Geng? [Mazu] [Mazu] [Mazu]
It's interesting. It's almost as good as the first one. Unfortunately, the first one was ruined in the later stage. I hope this one can keep enough fun. Five updates a day, I announce that you are the new Pirate King [laughing evilly]
The plot design is very interesting, and the characters are not broken, but at the author's pace, it won't be finished in 200 pictures at most. But the book is a good one, and very interesting. Here are three gifts for you today.
Although his plot is not the most exciting and his logic is not the most rigorous, it is the most exciting behind-the-scenes story about pirates that I have ever read! The group portraits are wonderful, and every character is outstanding! I hope the author will continue to maintain quality and quantity! At last! This author updates five times a day! Everyone! Please feel free to read on!
With such a number of chapters, I approve of you. In terms of breaking updates, among all the Pirates fics I have read, no one is better than you. I would like to call you the strongest.
The author's novel is good. You can give the heroine to those dolls. Anyway, if the protagonist wants something, a woman can't customize a doll.
It's okay, but the progress is a bit too fast [laughing evilly]
The logic is tight, the language is fluent, and the plot is exciting. I don't know what others say, but I think it is quite interesting. Maybe it means that the subject matter is not mainstream, so there are fewer people. After all, there are fewer people reading pirate fan fiction, less people watching behind the scenes, and less people tearing down the protagonist group. Although there are not many people, it has a group of particularly loyal readers. Come on, do your homework! I will always support you! ! !
It's very good to watch, but it's a bit short. The plot is well written. The plot is a bit too fast. It could have been longer. It's a pity.
This book gave me a big surprise. I thought that it would describe many characters like the previous Tianmu novels, which would lead to confusion and confusion for readers. However, this Tianmu novel is a bit out of touch. There are not many characters fighting randomly, which gives people the impression that it is not a sky curtain. It does not interfere with the readers' sense of reading and gives five-star encouragement (՞ਊ՞)👍
Will the progress be too fast? I feel like it will be finished soon if I write it this way. I really like this kind of subject matter, but no one writes about it
6. I like this one. . . .
If nothing else, just because he updates five times a day, he deserves this five-star rating. He is the most diligent author among the books I am currently following.
It's great, the best One Piece fanfic this year. Come on author
The writing is good. It seems to be better than the other Big Storyteller in the early stage. Just don't write too much in the future [laughing and crying]
It's very interesting. There are few creative ones. I really like this kind of behind-the-scenes flow, and coupled with the role-playing
Very good, the author keeps up the good work
Pretty good, I like it personally
The most powerful man behind the scenes!
I feel great.
It's difficult to write a novel with multiple identities. It's just average. I won't criticize the author, but I'll give it four stars.
It's really pretty I hope the plot doesn't collapse later
Just with 5 updates a day, it is definitely a 5-star review. [Sinister smile]
The subject matter is good, but the characterization is not good enough, but it is understandable that the new author should support it, and only 4 stars will be included in the rating, and 5 stars will generally be invalid.