Reborn as Wu Shanshan: Becoming a Rich and Beautiful Woman

Out of 10 points, I would give it a 7.5. ✅The writing is okay, especially the characters' dialogue ideas are very consistent with the original work, and it feels very immersive. ❌Typos, and it would be nice if it was changed to the third person. The first person is a bit uncomfortable. It is better to write in paragraphs. Some paragraphs are too long and make reading a bit tiring. ✅Except for the occasional recall of the original plot, it is all the author's original content, which is very novel. There are relatively few stories about children in the alley, and they are all told from Shanshan's perspective, describing what happens in family (the head of Lao Wu's family is short-lived), family relationships (the story with Xiaojun and Xiaomin, love (getting along with Liu Jian), and life (starting a business to make money, daily life with alley neighbors, campus life)).

Not bad, update soon, thank you, learn from the donkeys of the production team.