Abyss Dormitory: From Homebody to Supreme Lord
深渊宿舍：从宅家到无上领主
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 196k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Subgenre
- Gaming & Sports
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
92Chapters
21Reads
3Listens
34.5kReads · all time
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Reader comments 6
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Grain and grass, with more polish, it will be a masterpiece. The flaws in the plot do not hide the flaws, the plot is wonderful and logical, and there is no brainlessness. A small shortcoming is that some of the plots and prop reward data correspond to each other, resulting in a slight decrease in enjoyment. The specific parts are: 1. The golden finger does not have a good performance in cool points, and there is no detailed description of the details to reflect the advantages; the data of the golden finger is confusing, and it feels like I want to write where it is. 2. There is a bit of a mismatch and abrupt feeling between the front and the back (for example, in the contract template, you get so much on the second level, and you can directly write it on the third level so that many people can sign the contract. So many rewards do not reflect the advantages on the second and third levels at all. For example, treasure chests are always hoarded without changes in causes and consequences to transform strength). The plot of the third level of 3 Abyss is well written, but the division of power levels is very detailed, which is an advantage. The progressive levels of the protagonist are a bit stiff. 4 The first and second levels of the abyss can actually be described in depth, but the writing is too simple and monotonous. It feels like there are only settings without too much description of the plot and grand scenes. 5. This article has more than enough plot but insufficient data. Accurate data in this article will greatly increase the feeling of pleasure. Great efforts can be made in this aspect. These are some suggestions from an old bookworm of mine. Some of the words are inaccurate and vague. We welcome exchanges. This book feels like it could be a masterpiece with more polish. I hope the author will work harder and create better works.
It can be said that it is still very good, but it is a bit overwhelming. From the 1st to the 2nd level, I can definitely leave a little more or even multiple rounds of development. As a person who has been betrayed, my heart is a little bigger.
It's quite nice, but it's just such an infinite loop layer by layer, which is a bit tiring.
The pace is quite fast and the book is good
Very well written, cheers
The subject matter is novel and it's fun to watch.