Undertale: A Journey of My Own

It is a very pure, almost original fan book. It is a first-person experience of the original Undertale story. Unlike most of the other brainless and refreshing Undertale novels (and Gu Aotian), it is rare to see fan books with human beings as the protagonists. It is considered a good book, but the creative elements are a bit small, there are only jokes, and the novelty is not high. But as a non-fan fan and a first-time writer, the writing style and logic have surpassed most people, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also very good! So I give it five stars and hope the author can work hard and maintain your determination! (Determined face) Sorry, I was too loud before, and I commented blindly before I finished reading. The plot behind it is very exciting, and the author's creativity is very good. I really like the author's creativity and writing style. It's great to have a teacher in the ut circle (ง ˙ω˙)ว

I'm explaining my personal views. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. (Please note that my account is a small account and I changed devices and got a Tomato account. Don't look at my reading time and teach me.) The look and feel of this book is very good. Although the specific fighting scenes were a little uncomfortable in the early stage, they became smooth in the middle and late stages. The author also created the characters very well. The character creation in the original book is more inclined to games, such as Andai Yin, and the protagonist of the novel, Lao Peng, also has a good image. It is very good, with rich emotional scenes and the author has made him a flesh-and-blood person, much better than the smiling protagonist in some UT novels. Of course, this book is still being serialized and has a great future. In short, it is a great gift to have people like you in the UT circle. The framework is not a normal UT mindless novel. It has the development of combat power, and the protagonist also has time to realize and grow. My evaluation of this book is that it is a very good book with a great world view and a very promising future. Finally, I still hope that the author's books will become more and more fluent and he will be diligent in updating the eloquence.

The plot has ups and downs, and the logic is clear. Sometimes you don't know what the foreshadowing is until you see it later. Here's a tip. Pay attention to the English homophony of the protagonist's name. There is a knife, but after the knife there is sweetness. The author's redemption for each story is very good. The further you read, the more you can't stop. The author will update soon! !

It's a good-looking and exciting story. After reading it, my impression is that there are a lot of stories mixed with a few jokes. The first half of the story is a bit sad, but from time to time there are some jokes that can ease people's emotions. It's easier for me to relate to the emotions. The seeker line made me a little scared😱. The protagonist has a growth potential, and everyone has a happy ending in the end, which can be regarded as a traditional family reunion. As soon as I got started, I read such a well-written article. Thank you very much. It feels like there are a lot of sans. I'm not sure about it but it doesn't affect the viewing experience very much. I think the fighting scenes are quite exciting. I'll continue to watch them.

After reading it, I really, really like it, thank you author! ! Thank you for your hard work! ! I am a philanthropist. I have only been in the game for a few months and there are many AUs that I don't understand. This is also the first time I have read a UT fanfic. It is very enjoyable. I rarely read so many in one go. I saved it before going home for vacation. I read it on the way home. I was really happy. I may never forget this novel in my life. Already recommended to my friends😋👍🏻Good luck to the author

There are really not many UT books that rely on hard skills to score points, and the score is over 7 without any push [face covering]

If I were asked to evaluate this book in two sentences, I can only say that it is beautiful. If I were asked to evaluate this book in three sentences, I can only say that it is very beautiful. You can only know this book if you actually read it. The content is very calm and talks about the peace line. I really felt like I was being treated while reading it. It felt pretty much the same anyway. Anyway, this book is really great to read. If you like my evaluation, then please read this book until the end. Thank you I don't know what to say, but I felt really good after reading the last words. Looking forward to the author's next book.

It's so good. At first I thought it was just an ordinary peaceful ending, but then I noticed there were so many chapters. I said this book was really good to read. Among so many AU stories, I think the quality of this one is particularly good.

Good-looking, really good-looking mouth and teeth! ! ! ! ! ! ! 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃ヽ(=^･ω･^=) Good luck, good luck!🤓👆

I like it very much, very beautiful.