Full Understanding? of Course I Have to Learn Martial Arts from All over the World

It's not too much to encourage your book by giving it five stars [shy] I started writing books after I lost my job. I started writing books one after another in September. I couldn't help but feel depressed. This is the first novel that is still read. Thank you to everyone who has watched it, sincerely. As for reading, I also came here as a reader. I just want to relax and have some fun. I am already very tired from studying and working, so I just want to be happy. If you like it, read it, if you don't like it, don't read it. Anyway, there are free novels on the Tomato platform, so there will always be something you like to read. It's understandable to curse a few words when you encounter something unhappy. People have to have a place to vent their emotions and accept it. I have written three books before, all of which I learned about "commercially valuable" themes, but they were all thrown away [face covering]. This one was written on a less popular theme such as traditional online games, purely because I like it. During the conception process, I just wanted to write a large-scale online game. Various data references are drawn from online games, mobile games, and even tabletop games. Of course, the main skeleton and some details are original. The data was also adjusted by playing board games with friends, and there was no problem in the preliminary test. The plot is purely original and is still in the exploratory stage. In short, I want to write this book well. As for the level, it is this level. Just write seriously. And the ones that can be written well are all carefully thought out, which may have something to do with previous work. The characters' motivations, inner thoughts and logic will be written more. And I won't write nonsense, I want to write a biography of a character. It's very difficult. Regarding replying to comments. To be honest, I used to hardly comment on the books I read because I found them troublesome. Those who liked reading had too much time to read and didn't have time to comment, and those who didn't like reading just left. After I became an author, I realized that those who are willing to give you time to comment are all good people. Regardless of good or bad reviews. Good reviews are readers' approval of your work. What's wrong with negative reviews when people waste their time saying a few words about you? Hahaha, I understand. It can also help you find poison spots, which is pretty good. As long as the comments are with reasons, I will reply seriously and respect each other. It doesn't matter if you scold me for no reason, and I won't talk back. Anyway, I'm the one who writes the book, and you're the one who reads the book. It's reasonable to write you as a character and torment you for a while, and there are viewers watching. It's not as satisfying as scolding you [eating melon] Jie Jie Jie~ But reading the negative reviews is really heartbreaking. Come on, who made me do this? Books are very subjective. It is difficult to achieve perfect scores, even 80% is difficult. When I was specifically analyzing books, I found that the works of several great masters also had problems (logic, timeline, plot, data). But the flaws don't hide the good points, and they don't affect the writing of the story. It's good, and people just love to read it. And I irresponsibly say that 95% of the books are mediocre, not even good. As a result, when I write them myself, I feel even more embarrassed [laughing and crying]. Therefore, I ask myself to be sincere and not show off. We are at this level. Only when we know where we are wrong can we correct and improve. The more I write, the better. Hey, happy new year, may everything go well [sending heartfelt wishes]

Yes, but today's book lovers are not used to this kind of leisurely enjoyment, and life is not easy in the first place. It's normal for everyone to want to relax I didn't feel better gradually, but now I'm unhappy. I really don't want to say anything [awkward laugh]

A very good martial arts online game, far better than those mindless novels, the author has put his heart into it. Highly recommended, please keep writing💪 Chapter 99: It's so retarded there. What's the point of trying to trick someone into punching someone in the face? You simply win the plot and go through it, but you have to write three chapters in one circle. You go back and forth about human nature, but you don't show it yet? It was agreed that we would have a one-on-one fight, but you inexplicably said that we should fight each other, and then give up with a slap in the face. What's the point? You put it in, do you really think you have an IQ? It seems stingy. Three chapters in a row are very abstract. The author can write well, but he always messes up suddenly, including chapter 59, already twice. There are not many online martial arts games available. Still five stars for encouragement. But can the author think more when arranging the plot? So baffling.

(Up and down) 9 points, mark,,,,,, Very good and average. ─────────────────── Rating of the novel: ①Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, five stars/10 points+) ②Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, with more than 1,000 updates, five stars/10 points) ③Shang Xia (logically self-consistent & a good book that I don't like, five stars/9 points) ④Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, five stars/8 points) ⑤Medium (cheated, no evaluation, three stars/one point minus) ⑥Mid-to-lower (general, three stars/6 points & four stars/7 points) ⑦Bottom and top (major defects, one star/2 points & three stars/4 points) ⑧Inferior (tasteless, two stars/0 points) ⑨Xiaxia (revenge against society, two stars/negative points)

Although it has an online game shell, it is actually a martial arts novel. It can be seen that the author has a certain depth of research on martial arts theory, which should be influenced by "The Romance of Dragon and Snake"; but the root of martial arts is Jin Yong Gu Long. It can be said that Jin Yong is the pinnacle and master of all Chinese martial arts novels. Gu Long is slightly abstract, and I can't even tell which book he used a ghostwriter for. To be honest, I think it is not easy to match the martial arts in martial arts novels with the numerical values ​​​​of online games in modern society. But now, judging from the data, "rigorous online literature" is not a very popular category. Today's online articles on the Tomato platform are actually more popular for cool articles, which are meant to be fun, to make extreme comebacks and walk a tightrope, and to do some new tricks in every chapter. It is the same as short plays. The author is really a relatively clear stream. Pay tribute.

The writing is good, and the game settings are okay, but there are too many inner dramas. Five of the ten chapters are filled with inner dramas [face covering]

I was a little tired after reading 200 chapters. The anti-Japanese plot of the online game took me back to the era of online literature twenty years ago. . .

The author is very attentive, analyzing things, and working hard on character creation. The protagonist's society and personality are all the type I like. I don't know if there will be changes in the future, but I feel good now, and everything in the book has been analyzed in detail. The logical thinking is clear, and the overall feeling of the book is very good to me. Don't overlay infinite abilities, it is brainless and cool. It tells us what we want to express through one thing. On the surface, it seems to be a story, one thing, and it is integrated to express one's own thoughts. The score given by the system is too low

Overall, it's not bad. It has its own design and its own world, but it can be seen that the author has ideas but lacks writing skills, and is diligent but misses the point. Looking forward to the subsequent unfolding of the story and the improvement of the author

When I first started reading this novel, I felt inspired to create a character. Nickname: Hai Futian, a player with high internal energy and high bones, seems to be a martial arts champion! ? The inner breath is like a continuous wave of waves, and the weapon is a fine steel paddle (same as the yue only with a blade in the front) Some people have seen him driving a boat into a storm at sea, and finally escaping on the waves. It is speculated that his strong internal strength allowed the waves to push the boat out. I named him Fei. His wife is strong in Qinggong and swordsmanship. Ride the waves across the river and climb up the waterfall. Swordsmanship is related to rain. The first part is like a dark cloud pressing in, hiding and gathering strength. The second part began with a fierce and violent attack. The third part is like a dark cloud pressing in. He regains his blood and accumulates strength while carrying out defensive counterattacks. Hard work is also part of talent, so his wife asked him to stop practicing all the time and experience traveling in the game. But habits may not be broken for a while. They are a very mysterious couple But it seems that they have the ability to cross the sea? And the location of some mysterious islands in the sea? (Legendary Penglai Island, Peach Blossom Island, Shenlong Island, Ice and Fire Island, etc.)

How can I put it, it is generally to my liking. Tang Butian's share of one million is really unpleasant [face covering] After this wave of cross-region special missions is over, I hope the plot will be more exciting. Five-star support

It can only be said that the shortcomings do not hide the good points. If you can accept some small poisonous points at the beginning, it is still good. I hope the author can make the protagonist better reflect the 72 stunts of the title. The characteristics of the protagonist are not obvious compared to other players. The heroes and villains of other non-protagonist groups feel that they have inexplicably defeated the protagonist, or were inexplicably defeated by the protagonist.

The content of the online game is well written, and the character creation is quite good, but the plot is too slow, with a lot of inner drama and daily life, and the introduction of the game settings is a lot of water. I hope the author can work hard

I don't understand the author's definition of understanding. I gave it a 4 because the author often replies and doesn't give low marks. It's because, in more than 700 chapters, my understanding of understanding is to observe hundreds of schools, discover strange ideas, and lead one's own.

Alas, restricting players is a common problem in games. There is no pleasure and hatred, and I can't find the knight I want.

Pretty good martial arts Just do whatever you want

I was beaten up by others at the beginning and still let him play with me. Personally, I can't do it.

There is a lot of room for improvement, and the martial arts online game is inferior.

Regardless of martial arts or state of mind, the protagonist is in a gradual growth process. Relying on friends and relying on large organizations is the rule of the world or the world. Even if Li Ku possesses unique skills, the individual will end up lonely in the end.

It's good to read, I love reading it, but the name isn't good enough. The book definitely has the qualities of a great writer, the plot is reasonable and not brainless, and it's eye-catching.

It's really possible, the data is sophisticated, the content is reasonable and rich, and the expression is quite good. It's just that the author is too humble~[ Eat Melon ][ Eat Melon ]

Judging from the current situation (I have seen Chapter 167), its score should not be so low. It is worth watching.

It's quite good to read, but the character creation in the early stage is a bit jerky and abrupt, which resulted in this rare online martial arts novel only getting a poor 7.1 Which originally started out as an 8.

The character plot is well written, but Mingxin is a bit shabby in terms of the protagonist's efforts and gains. However, the author has changed it, so you can take a look.

If only the author could see my comment. I suggest the author take a look at the setting and writing of "The Loneliness of the Master". Written by Lan Di Meichen. I didn't expect that there was a tomato with the same name on it.

Not bad, let's see again

Yes, I feel very relieved

The writing style suits me quite well.

Give a five-star support to the author [Sending Hearts]

A bit like the world view of Jianghu