The Villain After I Transmigrate into a Book: I Lose It When I Hear the Heroine's Thoughts

Everyone thinks from Tang Feng's perspective, why is the protagonist not the second Tang Feng? After reading dozens of chapters, I just want to say one thing. As a time-traveler with a system who is timid and afraid of things, look at Gu Changge, the villain of Destiny next door. That is a cool story about villains! All I can say is that the author needs to practice more!

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For the book I wrote, I took the opportunities that should be taken from God's perspective, and let the family take over the forces that needed to be conquered, and also took care of the system. I was afraid of seeing a female protagonist every day, and I didn't try to suppress the development of the child of destiny. So what if I had the master and the family behind me to kill him forcibly? If the heroine is a system task, just accept it. If she doesn't ask for it, just kill her. If she takes over, she will just accept it. Now Liu knows that Xiao Yun is a person who has changed his soul, so he can still accept it. The other reborns knew Tang Feng's feelings and quickly dealt with him, huh. . There is a bug with the Empress Soul that makes everyone invincible but they still dare not touch it [vomit]

The writing is not very good, the routines and the plot are too tight. The protagonist's emotional development makes no sense and has no foreshadowing. Therefore, it will give people a sense of suddenness and no sense of substitution. Although the story is a good one, the writing is terrible. The protagonist is the author of this book. It didn't work and the protagonist system was too useless. These two things conflict. There is a feeling of suddenly having money and wearing all the good things on your body. The feeling of a nouveau riche is like a gold chain. The big gold tooth sticks to everything. The stuffed feeling seems bloated and lacks beauty. It's like adding fabrics, designs, and elements to a piece of clothing. Adding bright colors also seems too complicated. Lacks aesthetics. The plot has no ups and downs, the main plot is too slow, and the reborn empress does not have much role. There is also an unclear purpose and unclear meaning to the protagonist. Give people a sense of where I am, what I am doing, and who you are. There are also some things that are very unclear.

Doesn't the takeover man want to take over all the orders?

Continue to torture the pig's feet, very good, two stars

Isn't Liu Muqing just a prostitute?

Damn, I don't know what to say. Are they all reborn?

I really can't stand it

No, I can't stand it. It would be great if the protagonist had the ability to listen to his heart. There is no need to add another system. And this is a harem story, right? The protagonist won't be the hero's successor in the later stage, right? If this novel had a single female protagonist (nothing to do with the male protagonist), it would actually be okay. If it was a harem novel, it would be a mess.