[America+Weird+Gangster+Police+FBI+Mysterious Club]
After being executed,
"Kind" Huo Qiyuan traveled to the United States in a different world.
Unexpectedly, as soon as I opened my eyes, I turned into a murderer again.
He was standing at the crime scene looking at the corpse in front of him in a daze.
Just then, there was a knock on the door...
How will he deal with being unexpectedly given strange powers?
How did you fight for a smooth path in this parallel world with complicated forces?
PS: It's more daily life, with a single female protagonist.
Reader comments
It's okay so far. From an unprofessional perspective, there are no logical problems. The most important thing is that it's not popular. There aren't many reviews. There won't be any soldiers saying that the protagonist is not as good as him. The overall experience is quite enjoyable [laughs]
Reading this book gives me the feeling of drinking porridge, it is very smooth. Except for the time when I just traveled through time, the plot up to chapter 30 is easy to guess, and there are some awkward descriptions. However, if you eat too much curry rice, you can drink some porridge [when you are full]
Looking very good so far. It can be seen from the description of various situations that the author's writing style is very solid. It's just that there are too few updates at the moment. It feels like the author wants to set up a relatively large worldview, but because it is a new book, the construction is not perfect yet. But for now, this book has great potential, and I give it five stars.
Read the whole book! Although the pace obviously got faster after the halfway mark, the most recent writer has solid basic skills, smooth writing, delicate emotions, and good ideas. It is not a slap in the face, and there is no self-pleasure mode. I think it is a good American version of the novel. In addition, like the author, I also have paranoia. I have been dreaming about getting rich and buying various game consoles since I was in school. Fortunately, I have finally achieved a small goal. Let us encourage and continue to make progress!
How should I put it? This book is one of the few books that I gave five stars on the Tomato platform. There are not many books with this level of logic on the Tomato platform, so it is worthy of encouragement. The content and creativity are wonderful, and the word count is not bad. The author's values are very normal, and the male protagonist does not have the most annoying plots of the Boxer Rebellion and the Wealthy Boy. There are definitely minor problems, but it is still called an online novel if it is okay? Even the book written by Jin Yong still has problems. The author should not be discouraged. Come on, I am optimistic about you.
Find the original person who traveled through time, who am I?
This setting is too weird to watch.
The author denies the uniqueness of the self.
If Xiao Huo dies, will the protagonist die too?
Consciousness is separate and independent, these are two independent individuals.
It's not a parallel universe either.
It's so strange, I feel uncomfortable all over.
Goodbye.
It looks pretty good, at least I can see there's nothing poisonous about it now, let's take a look at it slowly
The author's writing skills are good, the details are rich, and the characters are vividly drawn. It is a rare book that can be read carefully without fast forwarding.
The writing style is much better than some current novels [Sentiment]
Well written, really good
So far so good
It seems okay so far
Good, good, good
It looks good and suits my interests!
The novel is good, and you can continue reading it to catch up on updates.
Although there are many shortcomings, the story is complete and the foreshadowing has been filled in. It's good.
The writing of this book is really smooth and the setting is also very good. The author's skills are quite solid. I like it.
Looking forward to the next article. More than 100 million US dollars.
The writing is very interesting, thank you to the author
Good looking good looking good looking
It's well written, don't read this book too strictly, you will find it pretty good [smile]
A bit addictive, charming beginning, mysterious story
cool feeling
It's okay so far. From an unprofessional perspective, there are no logical problems. The most important thing is that it's not popular. There aren't many reviews. There won't be any soldiers saying that the protagonist is not as good as him. The overall experience is quite enjoyable [laughs] Reading this book gives me the feeling of drinking porridge, it is very smooth. Except for the time when I just traveled through time, the plot up to chapter 30 is easy to guess, and there are some awkward descriptions. However, if you eat too much curry rice, you can drink some porridge [when you are full]
Looking very good so far. It can be seen from the description of various situations that the author's writing style is very solid. It's just that there are too few updates at the moment. It feels like the author wants to set up a relatively large worldview, but because it is a new book, the construction is not perfect yet. But for now, this book has great potential, and I give it five stars.
Read the whole book! Although the pace obviously got faster after the halfway mark, the most recent writer has solid basic skills, smooth writing, delicate emotions, and good ideas. It is not a slap in the face, and there is no self-pleasure mode. I think it is a good American version of the novel. In addition, like the author, I also have paranoia. I have been dreaming about getting rich and buying various game consoles since I was in school. Fortunately, I have finally achieved a small goal. Let us encourage and continue to make progress!
How should I put it? This book is one of the few books that I gave five stars on the Tomato platform. There are not many books with this level of logic on the Tomato platform, so it is worthy of encouragement. The content and creativity are wonderful, and the word count is not bad. The author's values are very normal, and the male protagonist does not have the most annoying plots of the Boxer Rebellion and the Wealthy Boy. There are definitely minor problems, but it is still called an online novel if it is okay? Even the book written by Jin Yong still has problems. The author should not be discouraged. Come on, I am optimistic about you.
Find the original person who traveled through time, who am I? This setting is too weird to watch. The author denies the uniqueness of the self. If Xiao Huo dies, will the protagonist die too? Consciousness is separate and independent, these are two independent individuals. It's not a parallel universe either. It's so strange, I feel uncomfortable all over. Goodbye.
It looks pretty good, at least I can see there's nothing poisonous about it now, let's take a look at it slowly
The author's writing skills are good, the details are rich, and the characters are vividly drawn. It is a rare book that can be read carefully without fast forwarding.
The writing style is much better than some current novels [Sentiment]
Well written, really good
So far so good
It seems okay so far
Good, good, good
It looks good and suits my interests!
The novel is good, and you can continue reading it to catch up on updates.
Although there are many shortcomings, the story is complete and the foreshadowing has been filled in. It's good.
The writing of this book is really smooth and the setting is also very good. The author's skills are quite solid. I like it. Looking forward to the next article. More than 100 million US dollars.
The writing is very interesting, thank you to the author
Good looking good looking good looking
It's well written, don't read this book too strictly, you will find it pretty good [smile]
A bit addictive, charming beginning, mysterious story cool feeling
Very nice! It's really cool and super attractive!