America: A Chronicle of Cops and Gangsters in Cahoots

It's okay so far. From an unprofessional perspective, there are no logical problems. The most important thing is that it's not popular. There aren't many reviews. There won't be any soldiers saying that the protagonist is not as good as him. The overall experience is quite enjoyable [laughs] Reading this book gives me the feeling of drinking porridge, it is very smooth. Except for the time when I just traveled through time, the plot up to chapter 30 is easy to guess, and there are some awkward descriptions. However, if you eat too much curry rice, you can drink some porridge [when you are full]

Looking very good so far. It can be seen from the description of various situations that the author's writing style is very solid. It's just that there are too few updates at the moment. It feels like the author wants to set up a relatively large worldview, but because it is a new book, the construction is not perfect yet. But for now, this book has great potential, and I give it five stars.

Read the whole book! Although the pace obviously got faster after the halfway mark, the most recent writer has solid basic skills, smooth writing, delicate emotions, and good ideas. It is not a slap in the face, and there is no self-pleasure mode. I think it is a good American version of the novel. In addition, like the author, I also have paranoia. I have been dreaming about getting rich and buying various game consoles since I was in school. Fortunately, I have finally achieved a small goal. Let us encourage and continue to make progress!

How should I put it? This book is one of the few books that I gave five stars on the Tomato platform. There are not many books with this level of logic on the Tomato platform, so it is worthy of encouragement. The content and creativity are wonderful, and the word count is not bad. The author's values ​​are very normal, and the male protagonist does not have the most annoying plots of the Boxer Rebellion and the Wealthy Boy. There are definitely minor problems, but it is still called an online novel if it is okay? Even the book written by Jin Yong still has problems. The author should not be discouraged. Come on, I am optimistic about you.

Find the original person who traveled through time, who am I? This setting is too weird to watch. The author denies the uniqueness of the self. If Xiao Huo dies, will the protagonist die too? Consciousness is separate and independent, these are two independent individuals. It's not a parallel universe either. It's so strange, I feel uncomfortable all over. Goodbye.

It looks pretty good, at least I can see there's nothing poisonous about it now, let's take a look at it slowly

The author's writing skills are good, the details are rich, and the characters are vividly drawn. It is a rare book that can be read carefully without fast forwarding.

The writing style is much better than some current novels [Sentiment]

Although there are many shortcomings, the story is complete and the foreshadowing has been filled in. It's good.

It seems okay so far