Practical Teaching*****

How can I put it, it's okay to satisfy the daily love life with Ichinoyori. It's understandable that there is basically nothing about the intellectual battle, but you can read more about other practical literature. After all, the previous things were too hasty, including how to fall in love with the male protagonist. I didn't see what happened at all. He just said that he could treat me as his boyfriend in the future, and then It's a bit counterintuitive to self-guide. If you know each other when you were young or had some experience of getting to know each other before, and the relationship between the two is relatively good, at least it will be a bit of a foreshadowing. Secondly, if you later feel that the male protagonist has a psychological problem and is still feeling aggrieved and aggrieved, it feels unreal, then it will be a bit fast. After you finish writing, it will only be a hundred thousand words. I don't think it will be written in the first book. It's a good habit to finish a hundred thousand words. After all, if you have a first time, you will have a second time. If you wait until a book is really developed before writing a high word count, will you have the experience to write this high word count? Later, you can also increase the rewards of this system. In the exam, you can use other people's expressions to write more details, and you will have more wits. Then I thought to myself that I should not use double quotation marks. After finishing this guide, I went back to the original world and made changes. After all, it is a bit confusing to regard it as a simulation of the game world. I gave you two options: one is to stay in this world, and the other is to take important people out. Understand. In the end, I actually liked reading it. Although the writing is a bit green, but come on, I hope this book can be thicker. Regarding the points, I don't know if you can write a special test for the return trip from the cruise ship to make a fortune, or you can ask Class B to make a profit. Hey, you can make a rich little girl and transfer directly to Class B. After all, no matter how you extort the points later, you won't be able to make as much as you can on this cruise.

Y(^_^)Y Just reply briefly 1. At present, I only write fanfics simply because I like them. 2. I haven't watched anime for a while, and I've been writing in a hurry. I'm mostly writing from memory, so some of it may be sloppy. 3. If there are any problems now, I will modify the article immediately when you see it. 4. Currently, I am supplementing the plot of the original novel and trying to satisfy the setting of the original world. Unified reply It's been too long since I've watched anime party The original setting should be completely closed. But when I started writing this book Watched the plot again. I checked the information of these characters again. Didn't they say at the end that they were going to have a holiday? I thought it was a regular high school holiday. Then I corresponded to the timeline I checked the character information of Katsuragi from Class A. Isn't he worried about his sister? I was thinking what if he couldn't see his sister for three years? For now, I can only put the holiday here. I'm really sorry, it's my first time writing, it's really too hasty. Let's see if there are any other ways to fill this hole in the future. Or just take this vacation.

It looks good. If you like it, if you can write, write more. Also, the emotional scenes are good

Are we going a little too fast? , I doubt you can finish it in 100 pages.

Single girl or multiple girls? If there are many girls, I will run away.