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Is anyone watching? ! ! It's okay to come in and curse a few words! ! !

The plot is novel and the writing is smooth, worth reading

The plot is good but a bit watery, and there are some problems with the segmentation, but they are all minor problems, keep up the good work

It's okay. It's a very high-level original novel. It has good writing and plot. The shortcoming is that it's too short.

The relevant content of the observer was not detailed enough, so he started to mention it, and then the protagonist found out inexplicably later.

Good looking, recommended three consecutive

Despite the low score, it is actually very exciting and the story logic is pretty good.

The writing is good, the plot is very good, and the main plot is reasonable. It is a good book.

Super beautiful and highly recommended A very, very good book, hit me if you don't agree²

Beautiful (*＾-＾*). (Please reply from the author)🥺

Okay, but not enough

Okay, it feels good

Very nice but too short.

Still very good

It's okay, please support me

It ended so suddenly

Not bad! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's hard to think of a reason, it just looks good

Like it, but a little bit less!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Although it's short, it looks pretty good from the front^ω^

It's very funny. The most exciting thing is that the male protagonist made a Zhongli kite, and his hands and feet can still move.