Sealed Away, I Can Only Restart My Account in the Uchiha Clan

The subject matter is very good, but the paragraphs are too big. It will be more comfortable to read if it is divided into smaller paragraphs. There is also no sense of immersion, it is a bit like reading reports and journals.

Knowing that there are tigers in the mountains, I prefer to go to the tiger mountains. The whole family can survive elsewhere and use ninjutsu to produce and develop very well. Being patient will not earn the respect of others, and will only be exterminated. When you leave, remember to steal Hashirama's cells, cheats for ordinary tribesmen.

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The writing is okay, but there are too many words in ~I'~ In some places. If I use fewer words, it will be easier to read.

The novel is pretty good, but the plot is neither fast nor slow, but one page a day is too little.

Everything else is fine, I just feel like the segments could be shorter [face covering] [face covering]

The choice of subject matter and timeline are very good. The details are a little rough, but the plot builds right up to the climax.

The plot is quite enjoyable and the pace is strong

It's much better than the previous dog-licking novels. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Let's solve it completely. It's boring to wait too long. The F4 family will also be assassinated.