Under One Person: Refining Weapons to Become an Immortal

Thirty-four chapters that I read during the deadline for rating: I can correct my mentality, don't be a dog for everyone, don't lick Feng Baobao, don't be a nanny, don't force the main plot, and don't have any weird magical second settings. It didn't go as well later on, so I retract my initial review.

It's good to read. Don't be misled by the author's introduction. He's a novelist who knows far too much about introductions [smile][smile][smile]

Under One Person is the most interesting fanfic. Only the protagonist of this book can be considered a real cultivator. This is called dual cultivation of life and life. Moreover, it is so consistent with the original work. In addition to the protagonist being a time traveler and the prophetic changes to the story, what the protagonist does in the text, you just It is added to the original work now, so there is no problem for such a person to appear. Unlike other fanfics, they are either purely cool and systematic, like Zhao Nian trapped in the inner scene, or there are too many unreasonable things with the original work. Some of them are well written, but they are completely different from the foreshadowing stories of the original work. This is the only book that perfectly solves these two problems that often arise in the fan fiction of Under One Person. Needless to say, it is great.

It's really good and beautiful! ! ! Rather than blindly participating in the plot or being a nanny, I have my own secondary setting. I really like the character of the protagonist. He has ideas and restraint. He has had a general idea of ​​his own path since he created his own cultivation method. Then, step by step, through the guidance of the older generation such as Old Man Yuan and Lao Tianshi, as well as conversations with his peers, he will clarify and improve his own path step by step. Really good! ! ! !

Come on, after reading it, I feel that this is a good quality book among Yiren, and the aspect of weapon refining is still quite rare in Yiren fandom. Most of them are using the divine mask or going to Taoism, and I don't know if there is a precedent for the weapon refining. Most of the Yiren weapon refining books seem to start by going straight to Biyou to learn Shenji. This is the first book I have personally seen to learn and innovate by myself. Come on! ! !

The book ends very quickly, but it's not too rushed. Everything that needs to be explained is explained. As a fanfic, it's well written and very creative. The author also has his own understanding of the original work, and the ending he chose is appropriate so as not to conflict with the original work. Overall, it's a relatively comfortable book. I recommend it.

It is very worthy of my five stars, very creative, not cliche and very refreshing. Plus he's the same as the original. Taoist thought is also relatively strong. Add more fun. It's a pity that this good book is delayed by his name and preface.

The structure is clear, it seems smooth, and it has an independent point of view. Although it does not have an amazing idea, it handles interpersonal relationships and self-awareness very well. It is a good article. I personally think it's worth a look and not a waste of time.

Good review, the writing is better than others anyway. I don't care if there is no heroine or no heroine. As for relatives, I've seen them a lot and think it's okay. In reality, it's much worse than this.

I think this novel is very good and the logic is clear

The character of the protagonist is well developed, one of the few pleasing characters I have ever seen | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ, But there is another shortcoming in this book It's just too short, author! ! ! (｡•́•̀｡)

The author has worked hard. This is one of the better-written novels I have read in "Under One Person". Although the chapters are not long and the ending is short and stubby, the description is not abrupt, which shows the sincerity of the author who does not want to give in. Bookworms express their respect. The article uses the protagonist's mouth to explain the principles of spiritual practice and the philosophy of life, including self-salvation in a bad situation and unique insights into how to deal with the world. It is based on the comic book "Under One Person" and does not make any magical changes or copy it mechanically. It also intersperses with embellished and colorful changes, which shows that the author's writing skills are outstanding. Nowadays, when writing novels, there is less nonsense and concise writing style, which is really rare. Not to mention free reading, why is it too meaty? I look forward to the next good article.

Slow-paced, flesh-and-blood, sentimental, all-round old man, master, and friend all write very well. I personally prefer this kind of writing to others who just cheat at the first glance. When I have worked through all the hardships, I will tell you how I got there!

A particularly excellent work. I guess the reason why it didn't get a rating of 9 is because it's a bit serious. From the lines in the book, it can be seen that the author has a deep research on Taoist thought. However, in this era of impetuous per capita, it is not enough to be "diode" and go to extremes, so the score has been lowered.

I have finished reading it, and the author has worked hard. This is one of the better-written books among the "Under One Person" fanfics I have read. Although the chapters are not long and the ending is short and stubby, the description is not abrupt, which shows the sincerity of the author who does not want to give in. Bookworms express their respect. The article uses the protagonist's words to explain the principles of spiritual practice and the philosophy of life. It is based on the comic book "Under One Person". It does not make magical changes or copy it mechanically, and intersperses it with embellished and colorful changes, which shows that the author's writing skills are outstanding. Nowadays, when writing novels, there is less nonsense and concise writing style, which is really rare. Not to mention free reading, why is it too meaty? I look forward to the next good article.

It's not completely stuck to the original work. The new characters blend into the original characters very naturally, the logic is very smooth, and the main characters are very distinct. I stayed up late to catch up on it in one go [awkward laugh]

I took a look at the paragraph review and the general review. I have also read the novel several times. The novel is good. Most people gave it a low score because of Octopus. I have to say that it is a commentary. It is not up to that level but it is indeed good. I did not ruin the setting by saying that I added settings. The characters are also not good. It's not broken, and there's nothing wrong with reading it. At least the quality is very high among Under One Person fanfics. Of course, I won't talk about the ceiling. After all, I don't read many books. But if you like Under One Person, this book should suit your taste.

It's quite interesting. The growth path of the protagonist is relatively reasonable. You don't become invincible right from the beginning. You follow the plot but it's not exactly the same path. The protagonist has his own way to go. It's my favorite one-person fanfic.

A novel worth reading, with the pursuit of different weapon refining under one person! You can also see different perspectives of the characters. Even the unpleasant Yuan Tao can have a good side. The most frustrating thing about chasing someone is Daying Immortal Zuo Ruotong. He gives everyone a chance, but forgets his own selfless person! I look forward to a linkage between the protagonist and Trinity ~ Looking forward to it

The best fanfic I have seen so far, the logic is clear and the plot transitions are quite natural. However, it is recommended that Chu Mo is the only female protagonist. The protagonist's golden elixir is immortal and can transform all things into one. Chu Mo's innate power is to transform all kinds of things into one.

The writing is very good. It doesn't seem to be invincible right from the beginning, nor does it rush to follow the plot. The characters have distinct personalities and grow step by step. It's rare to watch it.

How to put it, I can't say it's good or bad, it just feels like it's just not good enough. I couldn't stand it until the later stages. Maybe the plot is too bland. The protagonist is more like a middle-aged and elderly person, lacking the passion that young people should have. To put it simply, it's not exciting at all, and lacks the conflict and collision of the plot. But the writing is good, and it is a book that can be read but lacks the desire to read.

Another Pixi Road, I am very satisfied with the writing, hehehe, it looks very good, very good [make faces][make faces][make faces][make faces][make faces][make faces][make faces][make faces][make faces]

This book is very flavorful and fits the creative style of Mr. Mi Er. What I particularly like is that the author did not make the characters with extreme facial makeup, but made the characters more layered, which is in line with the complexity of human beings.

I would give it a 9.5 Out of 10. The characters are almost the same as the original, the plot has not changed much, and the protagonist is very real. But it's really well written. So much so that you can only see this kind of person in comics

Not bad. The writing and plot are both very good. After flipping through the comments section [smile] I wasn't ready to read any further. I've read online articles and I want to be a Virgin, which is a bit outrageous, man. But after all, I didn't see it, so I won't change the rating.

The writing is smooth and flowing. It's very peaceful. There's not so much fighting and killing. I like that.

This book is the best one I have seen on Tomato. Thank you to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]

In addition to the average writing style, the setting is okay, the plot is also okay, and it can be extracted from the tomato.

The writing is quite perfect. It would be even better if a large flying mount is added. So far, I think the writing is quite good. It deserves a rating of 9.2 To 9.3. It is not easy to find such a novel in Tomato.