Shura Field? It's Just Her Comfort Zone

Friends, please note that this article contains a lot of elements: heartthrob, Mary Sue, old-fashioned bad blood, paranoia, psychosis, revenge, madness and other elements. All the characters are villains, and all the characters who appear have their own dark sides. As for our heroine, she is not a good person according to universal values, but she is not a pure evil person either. I want to write about the feeling of "hypocrisy but also a hint of sincerity", but I don't know if my writing skills can achieve it. This is the second novel the author has tried to write, but it is the first one in which all background characters are original. I hope it can be completed well~ BTW: If you like to read about the heartthrob Shura Chang Xiong's competition, you can go to my homepage. There is a completed drama that meets the above requirements ~ It's very fat 70W+ Finally, thank you all for your patience and support~

Let's talk about this book 1. Character design: First of all, the heroine of this book is a very attractive girl. She is not a show-off heartthrob like most of the Tomato novels I have read. To put it simply, she is a woman who can make me bend. Secondly, the male protagonists of this book each have their own characteristics and charms. Unlike other Tomato novels I have read, most of them only made me feel that one word is domineering, but the male protagonist of this book can be said to have it all, a violent maniac, a control freak, and a white and black man. 2. Plot: The plot also made me think it was very logical. Every foreshadowing and everything the heroine did would allow me to see the corresponding results later. Moreover, the emotional lines between the heroine and the male protagonists did not make me feel inexplicable, nor did it make me feel that it was a refreshing article. The author treated me as a person and did not treat me as a fool. 3. Three views: Although the author said that everyone is evil, I think this is a thoughtful article and the three views are normal. It can be summed up in one word, cool

Super pretty! ! I have read a lot of this kind of novels and discarded a lot [laughing and crying] but I think this one is attractive to readers. First of all, the heroine and the male protagonists are portrayed very well! ! I think this is not easy. Nowadays, novels are written too quickly. The characters have entered the emotional line before they are clear. [Read carefully] Although the heroine is introduced as an evil girl, her confession and thoughts are obviously not a single evil. She is flesh and blood. People themselves are complex. There is no simple good or bad. I prefer it. I like a heroine like this~ Secondly, the emotional and career lines are very good, step by step, there is no so-called love at first sight or a big show at the beginning. Some novels start with an intimate scene. The heroine can stand it, but the readers can't stand it [vomit]. Moreover, the heroine is slow to feelings, or more accurately, she is self-absorbed. This is very attractive to me! ! She is very smart and will consider her own interests first in everything, so she will subconsciously ignore the feelings of the male protagonists towards her. A strong self-awareness and a weak emotional side form a closed loop, so the female protagonist has established [admiration]. Currently, I feel that none of the male protagonists are worthy of her, haha, but the author tells the characters and experiences of each male protagonist very well! ! Crazy criticism also requires background and experience, hahaha. The behavior of each male protagonist is not inconsistent with their character, and will cause doubts and suspicions about the female protagonist. Especially the large text has a sense of substitution, and there is no watery writing style! ! I have seen very few good articles on 🍅, but I am very optimistic about you! ! I leave the characters to you, I believe you can shape them well, and I look forward to the next plot direction [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

The heroine is scheming but kind-hearted (with a certain purpose), knows how to build a good relationship with the original heroine, treats herself as an outsider, brings together the original heroine and the two protagonists in the ED, and works hard to conquer the young master Gong in the ED. However, as the plot progresses, she unknowingly gets entangled with the three male protagonists. The character of the heroine is well portrayed, not an evil scheming one, but a refreshing scheming that makes people feel comfortable, have a good impression, and like her🥰🥰🥰! ! ! The author's writing is very consistent with the heroine in my mind, but it is a bit too little and not enough to read. I hope the author will update it more! ! !

So far, it's quite good-looking, both have brains, and the heroine is thoughtful. I like the plot and the heroine very much. I just have a small suggestion, can you shorten the inner monologue a little bit? Everyone has a long monologue. The plot seems to unfold very slowly, and sometimes you don't know where the previous plot is going after reading the monologue. Although this will highlight that each character is three-dimensional and intelligent, the large amount of monologue analysis will make me think that I am watching Detective Conan. I keep reasoning [love] [love] [love] [love]

The heroine is vicious with a hint of integrity, and only does things that are beneficial to herself. She is a beautiful and charming poppy~ When her brother first appeared, I thought he had an unruly character, but later I thought he was a cute puppy. (I hope it can be orthopedics, it really smells good, hehe [admiration]) Of the three male protagonists I have contacted so far, one is irritable, one is yandere, and one has indescribable feelings (from the Gong family) I hope there won't be so many female supporting characters hanging around the male protagonists. It would be more fragrant with some lily~

I finished reading it in one go. I really like the character of the heroine. The heroine is not a good person but she has her own views and principles. She is not a black and white script that is very cliche. The male protagonist also has his own position. You can see all kinds of extreme push and pull. It is really beautiful.

It's rare to see a story about a Mary Sue aristocratic campus written so wonderfully. Hahahaha. I'm looking forward to the following plots. A small request: I hope the author can speed up the emotional line a little bit, I can't wait! ! 🥰🥰

When I first read it, I thought the writing was pretty good and quite emotional. Later, maybe because of the break in updates, or because I haven't read it for a while, but then I started to feel very bland and uninteresting. The ending was a bit rushed, the death of the big boss was a bit sloppy, and the forced ending was a bit bland. But the logic is pretty good, it's reasonable, and it doesn't specifically highlight any plot. For example, the story line of Yu Green Tea written in the extra chapter is quite normal [please taste it carefully]. Of course, there are two extra chapters that are not written. If you include the younger brother, there are three [Love] ] Although I have already written about the stock I am standing on (I love the energy of green tea so much, and there is a hint of sincerity in my pretense of standing on them from the beginning), I am still looking forward to the other few episodes. If the other two episodes are out, please remember to kick me. I feel like I'm driving too high and driving too low, and I still feel uncomfortable looking at it later.

I was fascinated by what I read yesterday. The heroine is not a weak little white rabbit, nor is she an ordinary person who works hard, but the campus chaebol is also divided into levels. She knows exactly what she wants. The description of the heroine's appearance is also very eye-catching. I have been liking this type of book recently. What I like most is the author's writing style and the speed of typing. I really love this kind of book.

First of all, the author was very rational when he started writing this. It was at the beginning that I wrote the general character and some other things about this novel. Then when I was watching it, I still liked the female protagonist better, and I felt that the attitude and ideas of the film were also good, because everyone is not black and white. Also, in this novel, it is said that the heroine will be a little crazy, crazy, and other things, but I actually think it's okay. As for the heroine being said to be rather vicious, I don't think she is evil, right? I think it's just right. After all, in order to protect one's own interests, I think it is normal to take actions or have some bad thoughts. The heroine is also more sensible and cautious in taking advantage of others. But the main thing is that when I look at the process, I feel that it is very messy and complicated. Well, because it involves a lot of narration or inner dialogue, which every character will have, and it is also a very long section, it will cause me to be unable to connect to the subsequent content after reading it. It was a process of jumping back and forth between their narration and the actual story. I felt it was very complicated and confusing, and I couldn't figure it out. Then there are quite a lot of main characters designed in it. Then it makes the process of watching it feel complicated. And many of the people inside are very strategic, and many of them are good at pretending. I feel that this description is particularly in line with the kind of wealthy family I imagined. In fact, I think the various narrations could be shortened and have some foreshadowing. It's just that sometimes the author describes many environments and lays out a lot of foreshadowing. The descriptions are very detailed, and then I feel that it is very long while watching. Then the heroine suddenly appears, and I feel that the front and back don't seem to match up, and the connection is not coherent. It just leads me to this kind of illusion and this kind of incomprehension in reading. Of course, it's possible that my brain capacity isn't up to par. Personal opinion, please don't comment Lightning protection: All the villains in this article [not pure evil! Everyone has a dark side! Non-female perspective, micro-group portraits! All men! [Not a fast-paced slap in the face, but a non-traditional refreshing novel] There is a plot to save the original heroine, she is mostly used, and she is not a pure evil person who goes crazy everywhere! It's not black and white!

It's quite good to watch. I struck gold unexpectedly. I was enjoying watching it but then ran out. I like the female protagonist. The three male protagonists are all good so far. I hope there is no censorship and the female protagonist has a successful career. Then I can give some if lines for the extra story. By the way, I originally thought the original heroine was a really strong little white flower, but now I think all the characters are villains.

Shi Zhongjin. The writing style is very good and the rhythm of the writing is very mature. In the later stage, it may feel a little lack of compactness and become tired, but overall it is a good story. A black fairy tale that combines gore, Mary Sue, and heart-throb. I like the character of the heroine very much, and I saw some people say that she is too kind. When you read later, you can find that this is not the case at all. She is a completely self-interested person, a businessman, and a predator, and all her actions have a purpose. She has a "kind" background, but is cruel and sober enough at the same time. When I saw the whole scene, it felt like a gloomy rain. I felt inexplicably sad and happy for the heroine.

After reading this, I just want to urge the author to update 180,000 words a day, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh--(Crawling in the dark) A non-traditional Mary Sue, the heroine is really handsome and I really like this kind of character where everyone is a villain. Everyone has their own plans and purposes, and every step is calculated. The original heroine seems to be the only good baby [shy][shy] But maybe, after all, everyone is a villain

It's great! It's great! It's great! It's hard to find a novel with some brains on Tomato!!! Finally it's not stupid anymore! Everyone, go read it! It's a bit like a Korean chaebol novel I read before. It's really good!

It's different from the shallow love in some heartthrob novels. I love this sense of pull. I like the author's writing style, style and taste. The heroine is a heartthrob. She has a very good character. She strives for what she wants. She has a very clear goal and is not pretentious. She has a very three-dimensional and full image of the heroine. She is more realistic and not love-minded. Interests come first. It is useless for anyone who gets in the way. She is also merciless when using people. I really love all the villains, but it's still being serialized. It's not enough to watch [crying]. And unlike other heartthrobs, I fell in love casually. The heroine's main focus is on the heart. If it's 4i, it will be more [thinking] Secondly, I feel sorry for our forest. Yu is so cute when he draws a crow, but when he wants to do something bad, you can annoy him. The president has no feelings. I feel that the flower of the high mountain in the heartthrob is not very attractive to me. I don't know why, maybe it is not enough. Finally, I share a song by JVKE "this is what heartbreak feels like" which is very suitable for this kind of novel.

Ahhhh, it's been a long time since I found a book that made me want to update it! ! The pull between the female protagonist and the three male protagonists, as well as the male protagonist's arrogant performance, the heroine's image of a beautiful bad woman who appears to be gentle but actually turns into a snake around her neck waiting for an opportunity when others unleash their malice on her, is all just for her own benefit. The sober heroine caught the male protagonists by biting the hook and climbing up... It made me scream non-stop (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!)) Author, please write quickly. The child is starving to death (soul out of body) If you don't watch it now, everyone will watch it! !

Those who see it will be happy! It's great to have this "villain" with all the brains! There is no simple love in the wealthy world. It is the entanglement of interests and the sober sinking that make it more interesting. Because the group portraits are marked in advance, everyone has their own proportion of the main part of the scene. From the third perspective, it really feels like watching a drama, with ups and downs! The early stage is like the heroine's hibernation when she was first reborn, with a low sense of presence, but it seems that the situation is observed through her eyes. Every important character is not black and white, and the character has the background formed by the environment in which she grew up, which looks interesting. (Of course, except for the illegitimate daughter who really doesn't have enough IQ, hahahaha) Although it seems to be a plot about competing for the position of the fiancée, the wonderful thing is that the text does not present a one-sided feeling of so-called female competition, but more like a curved competition for resources among women in a family society that defaults to climbing to the top. Perhaps love plays a more important role in the heart of the spoiled daughter, but Miss Tao and the heroine are competing for a small piece of the palace family cake. This is different from the drama of fighting each other for the love of a man. When it comes to each male protagonist, what follows closely is the family behind him and the efficiency of internal profit extraction. Another personal highlight is actually the plot related to the original heroine. When there is a plot about f4 falling in love with a poor student, the story of Mary Sue, the protagonist's inner os and subsequent words and deeds will break all fairy tales. In fact, all decisions are mixed with interests and normal people's emotions. Be happy, be happy. (Why is it serialized... A female eagle-like woman in front of the screen shed a crystal tear😎😭)

As a bookworm who has been reading novels for many years, it is my norm to comment critically on mindless novels. But for this novel, I really don't accept anyone's disobedience to the author. This book is so good that I couldn't sleep. I stayed up late to read it and looked forward to more updates. The author is very hungry.

Objectively speaking, the heroine is not a traditional chaebol villain, but I quite like how Da Da is handled here. It is a little more soft, a little more humane, (is that okay to say). I am not blindly belittling the original heroine. The interaction between the two is actually very interesting. [Shy]

It's so beautiful. The heroine's top-notch intelligence coupled with her fairy-like appearance is superb. Each character's image is created superbly, including innocence, white and black, a cold flower, and the supporting characters are all vividly portrayed. [Send heart][Send heart]

Wow, all of them are really evil. There is no such thing as love at first sight or love again❤️❤️❤️. They are all complete egoists. They use and plan to get away with it. I really like this exciting plot, it's so exciting [crazy][crazy][crazy]

The writing is fluent, and it is not so much a villain setting for all the characters as it is a setting with brains for all the characters, which is really rare. The heroine is all about career and has no idea about love. Especially when Sui Chunsheng pretends to accept the heroine's life-saving grace, Sui Chunsheng knows how to use it, and Narino Mori guesses it and lets it go with purpose in order to take advantage of it. It is really a blast! ! ! The only bad thing for me is Xiongjing. I just bought a stock article before, and I bought the wrong stock, and there are shadows. It's a bit uncomfortable. Many people are ambiguous [crying] [crying] [crying] But just for me, this article is really good and worth reading.

That's enough. Who understands the character of my delicious heroine? I really want to see the plot of the queen announcing her fiancée. Woohoo, it's so good. Can the author update 10 chapters in one day? The child is going to starve to death [crying]

It's a very good book. The emotional scenes between the heroine and each of the male guests are very touching. The ending is OE. I haven't seen this kind of ending before. It leaves a lot of room for imagination. The extra is sweet and reassuring, but it really doesn't feel like enough [ Crazy] [Crazy] [Crazy] The main line, which is the career line, is very smooth and perfectly solved. The female protagonist of the emotional line is really fun to watch. [Shy] In short, after reading the whole book, the characterization of Ya Yin (the female protagonist) will definitely make me laugh. You have endless aftertaste [full] [full] I stayed up late and chased after it, I was really excited [top post] [top post] Let me see it ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah so good It looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good, it looks so good.

It's a super interesting and exciting book. It has a bit of an ancient puppet feel. If the heroine can't have three men, can she be tied to Narino Mori? [Crying] [Crying] I love this pair of cps. I will become the main palace of the tonic president.

I like it, the tension between the male and female protagonists makes me so happy! The character design of the heroine is also great. When Narino Mori and Sui Chunsheng were testing in the hospital whether she was her childhood savior, I was worried that it would be a cliché plot of mistaken identity like other novels. I was worried about this for a while, but fortunately I saw the back part, and it was not that cliché plot. I loved it! I thought it was well written and the plot suited my taste, so I was even happier! I've been in a bit of a cold period for novels recently, but this book successfully broke the ice! Like it very much! The heroine's character and wit will make me scream! It's been a long time since I've experienced the feeling of my heart beating because of a novel!

Hiss~ The yandere white-cut black painting hand, the innocent and irritable puppy, the cold and arrogant president I gave it a rub, why is it so to my liking [Adoration] All the villains are so sweet, and everyone has their own dark side. [Sending Hearts] And it was really a surprise when I saw the original heroine lie and use language traps to fight for her own interests! ! ! [Shy] Just talk about how a big dyeing vat can be spotless, and if you can solve your troubles and predicaments with vague words, who would refuse? The hostess setting makes me happy. Ah Wen is cold and dangerous, but he also has basic morality and some kindness. He is not a simple evil person [Sending Hearts] Crow feathers are colorful in the sun, not limited to one color I'm obsessed with [love] By the way, can the author make A Yin realize their feelings quickly? I really want to see Yin use their feelings for his own profit and make them laugh out loud [shy] Speaking of which, if A Yin knows about their relationship, he will probably be more flirtatious, fishy and more exciting in the love game, and he has already taken the initiative in this game because he has not yet become emotional. (The more I think about it, the more I like it. I also hope that the heroine will be beautiful alone. Just go fishing and flirt. How can a fisherman jump off the fishing boat and swim with the fish?)

Although the novel only has a few dozen chapters, the heroine is very interesting. She is calm and calm, and she has a plan every step of the way. She is very smart and knows how to use and express her intelligence. She is a little kind-hearted but not too much~ Looking forward to the following stories.

I have seen so many books similar to Campus Chaebol F4, but this one is the only one with a real heroine [cool][cool][heartfelt]. I think none of them are worthy of Ya Yin. Come on, author! ! ! This big heroine is so cool! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]