The birth of a master + the Holy Body of Taoism + the emergence of Shuangwen + the nemesis of the Virgin + the rampage in heaven
The innate holy body of cultivating Taoism is a rare thing to come across in ten thousand years.
One day, Zhuo Lin was discovered by the only direct disciple of a mysterious boss in heaven and was forcibly accepted as his disciple. He taught various methods of cultivating Taoism and becoming an immortal. Nine years later, the disciples of the big brother went out to travel, and Zhuo Lin was able to regain his freedom, so he went down the mountain to experience tribulations in the world of mortals. However, after going down the mountain, he discovered that the so-called tribulations were caused by the demons and monsters who met him, and he was only responsible for the grudges and grudges he wanted.
Reader comments
How should I put it? The label is the Nemesis of the Virgin. I don't think it's the Nemesis yet, it's just a little smaller than the other Madonnas. From the introduction, isn't the male protagonist equivalent to being invincible? Then why is there so much ink in a fight? I just hit the enemy casually, not too hard, and I won't know how to deal with it until something goes wrong later. Don't tell me that there are laws or anything like that. There are already warriors, and the weak will eat the strong. If the male protagonist is so strong, he shouldn't waste time on some ants, just take action. Also, if you really search for souls in the opening chapters, why are you afraid of smearing your eyes? You can really delete this. Searching for souls depends on what you want to know. There is no such thing as smearing your eyes. If you say this, there will be no need to have soul searching in the future. The enemies in the back will definitely be more troublesome than these gangsters, so just say it is troublesome. (Haha, I personally think so. If there are book friends who think the same as the author, just ignore the following suggestions [laughs])
The general direction of the article is good, but the details are not in place. For example, if you find the wrong person, you only know how to use your spiritual sense. If you want to take the heroine away quickly, you have to hang out with someone else. Can you just beat the shit out of her or knock her out? It would be nice if the author paid more attention to the details. It is a little better than other similar stories, but it is also a little bit [face covering]. The sister in it knows that others are bullying her. Later, when the brother comes back and has strength and a backer, he knows how to bully her back. This is not true of the Holy Mother.
Give it five stars. It's not easy for the author. Come on, it will be good to improve the details.
The older brother beat someone up. He didn't tell his sister how to prevent revenge, and went to see his old friend by himself. What the author wrote is so unbelievable! ! ! !
How should I put it? The label is the Nemesis of the Virgin. I don't think it's the Nemesis yet, it's just a little smaller than the other Madonnas. From the introduction, isn't the male protagonist equivalent to being invincible? Then why is there so much ink in a fight? I just hit the enemy casually, not too hard, and I won't know how to deal with it until something goes wrong later. Don't tell me that there are laws or anything like that. There are already warriors, and the weak will eat the strong. If the male protagonist is so strong, he shouldn't waste time on some ants, just take action. Also, if you really search for souls in the opening chapters, why are you afraid of smearing your eyes? You can really delete this. Searching for souls depends on what you want to know. There is no such thing as smearing your eyes. If you say this, there will be no need to have soul searching in the future. The enemies in the back will definitely be more troublesome than these gangsters, so just say it is troublesome. (Haha, I personally think so. If there are book friends who think the same as the author, just ignore the following suggestions [laughs]) The general direction of the article is good, but the details are not in place. For example, if you find the wrong person, you only know how to use your spiritual sense. If you want to take the heroine away quickly, you have to hang out with someone else. Can you just beat the shit out of her or knock her out? It would be nice if the author paid more attention to the details. It is a little better than other similar stories, but it is also a little bit [face covering]. The sister in it knows that others are bullying her. Later, when the brother comes back and has strength and a backer, he knows how to bully her back. This is not true of the Holy Mother. Give it five stars. It's not easy for the author. Come on, it will be good to improve the details.
The older brother beat someone up. He didn't tell his sister how to prevent revenge, and went to see his old friend by himself. What the author wrote is so unbelievable! ! ! !