Master emerges + Daoist cultivation constitution + thrilling adventures + nemesis of the goody-two-shoes + free rein in the Celestial Realm
A born Daoist cultivation constitution, seen only once in ten thousand years.
One day, Zhuo Lin is discovered by the sole direct disciple of a mysterious big shot in the Celestial Realm and forcibly taken in as a disciple. He is taught all kinds of methods for cultivating the Dao and attaining immortality. Nine years later, his master leaves to travel the world, and Zhuo Lin regains his freedom. He goes down the mountain to undergo tribulations in the mortal world, only to discover that those so-called tribulations are actually for the demons and monsters who cross his path. All he has to do is enjoy settling scores and doing as he pleases.
How should I put it? The label is the Nemesis of the Virgin. I don't think it's the Nemesis yet, it's just a little smaller than the other Madonnas. From the introduction, isn't the male protagonist equivalent to being invincible? Then why is there so much ink in a fight? I just hit the enemy casually, not too hard, and I won't know how to deal with it until something goes wrong later. Don't tell me that there are laws or anything like that. There are warriors, and the weak will eat the strong. If the male protagonist is so strong, he shouldn't waste time on some ants, just take action. Also, if you really search for souls in the opening chapters, why are you afraid of staining your eyes? You can really delete this. Searching souls depends on what you want to know. There is no such thing as staining your eyes. If you say this, there will be no need to have soul searching in the future. The enemies in the back will definitely be more troublesome than these gangsters, so just say it is troublesome. (Haha, I personally think so. If there are book friends who think the same as the author, just ignore the following suggestions😄) The general direction of the article is good, but the details are not in place. For example, you only know how to use your spiritual sense when you find the wrong person. If you want to take the heroine away quickly, you have to hang out with someone else. Can you just beat the shit out of her or knock her out? It would be nice if the author paid more attention to the details. It's a little better than other similar stories, but it's still a little bit 🤦. The sister in it knows that others bully her. Later, when the brother comes back and has strength and a backer, he knows how to bully her back. This is not true of the Holy Mother. Give it five stars. It's not easy for the author. Come on, it will be good to improve the details.
The older brother beat someone up. He didn't tell his sister how to prevent revenge, and went to see his old friend by himself. What the author wrote is so unbelievable!!!!