The Golden Hairpin Helps Me Cultivate Immortality

It's well written and suits my taste. I won't continue reading if it doesn't include porn within 30 chapters. But this book is very nice and can definitely be ranked in the first echelon. It only updates less often, once a day. Although each chapter is a big one, it's not enough to read. It gets boring around chapter 50

The author has finally figured it out. Other works are not that good, but this book has taken off directly to the first echelon. It can be considered a leader in 🍅, but it is too short with less than thirty chapters. It is not enough to read, and only one chapter added every day is too little. It became boring around chapter 50. It was written as a fairy tale, which went astray.

I'm afraid I haven't seen too much of the old man in the Siheyuan. I came to see the old man in the Red Mansion and collected all 36 [laughing]

The pacing, plot, and supporting characters are all perfect. It's hard to describe the protagonist. This protagonist doesn't look like a human, but like an immortal. Whether it was before the time travel in Chapter 1 or after the time travel without opening the golden finger, he looked like a seasoned person.

It's pretty good, and the writing is not bad either. I enter the Red Mansion through the path of spiritual practice instead of taking the path of fame and merit. I just feel that the progress is too fast and the hook is a bit too big. Using the method of immortality, it is indeed easy to collect the gold hairpins in the supplementary book. However, the emperor's suspicion and the situation in the court are difficult to deal with, and immortals and Buddhas should not interfere with the human dynasty. I hope the author can control it in the future.

Overall, the writing is good and well worth reading. I just hope the protagonist doesn't blush all the time. It would be better if this point is changed. Then I would like to make a suggestion. This book is very good so far, but the golden hairpin is limited. After three volumes, there will be nothing left to write about the world. If the follow-up is all original plots, obviously the number of people who read it will be reduced. The protagonist's golden finger is the talisman and those three volumes. Obviously, there is room for other books, other volumes, and other courtyards to get the golden finger at the beginning. My suggestion is that you can definitely get other books to create a relationship, travel to other worlds, conquer each world, build many temples, and while recruiting girls, you will become stronger little by little, and gather the incense of all worlds little by little. When the time comes, I will change the title and introduction of the book to the genre of Myriad Realms. No major changes are needed. Change the title of the book to a few words, and change it to All Worlds: The Golden Hairpin Helps Me Begin My Immortality or The Golden Hairpin in the Red Mansion Begins the Journey to Immortality, or something like that. Just add a label column and a world column to the introduction. Just write labels such as Many Women, All Realms, Immortality, Incense, and Enlightenment. The world column is the Red Mansion in the current world. List a few names for the world to be determined. When the Red Mansion is finished, it will be changed to the completed world Red Mansion. The current world is so-and-so. List a few names for the world to be determined. After the Red Mansion, it can be the world of Liaozhai, the world of the Three Kingdoms, the world of Qin Shi Jiutian, or other worlds. Each has its own advantages and disadvantages. The power system of Liaozhai World is a bit higher. There are a lot of magic, magic, treasures and resources, but there are not many girls. It can be more integrated with the world of gods and demons, such as Jigong, The Legend of White Snake and so on. The power system of the Three Kingdoms World is relatively low, and the resources should be set at the middle level compared to the Red Mansion. But in troubled times, there are more things that can be operated, and there are many well-known beauties. The most important thing is that the Three Kingdoms are more popular. Qin Shi Jiutian took an intermediate value, with many girls, a medium strength system, and the most important thing is that he can grab a weapon for each of his women, and his popularity is also good.

Currently it has 5-star reviews. It's pretty good-looking. The only drawback is that it's too accommodating to the prodigal son.

[Holds face] It was quite fun in the beginning. The part where I left the capital to see Lin Daiyu really stood out to me. What kind of fuss was there about stumbling on the protagonist and applying debuffs???

Not bad, but the core is not a novel about Red Mansions. The beauty of Red Mansions lies in the group portraits, with different personalities. However, this novel mainly focuses on the collection of protagonists. The personal characteristics of each girl are relatively vague, and there is almost no distinctive personality and delicate psychology. It has been identified as an ancient fairy tale under the guise of the Red Mansion.

@Thieflonely, please update the rules. Ready to reward you. Also, it is quite innovative to approach writing from this angle. Later, you can give some physical fitness pills to the army, and kill a Japanese pirate or a little prairie wolf dog to cheer up everyone. In addition to the love between children, we also need to add some ironclad character.