No, How Did My Captain Become a National Sports Player?

Overall, the quality is good, the logic is perfect, the pace is not sluggish, and it's a bit fun. Let me talk about some of the things I like first: 1. The national sports system in this article currently tends to be neutral and kind. Compared with the game system, it is more like a poverty alleviation office (?). If you can help, I will help. If you can't help, it is none of my business. Judging from some explicit foreshadowing, it is speculated that the National Games System and Teyvat should be on the same side, or should they be a cooperative relationship? It cannot be ruled out that there is a connection between the national transportation system and Teyvat itself. It feels like the national sports system in this book not only rewards resources, but also gets something through the participants, which may be related to Teyvat. Generally speaking, it is probably a mutually beneficial relationship with the selected civilization. You help me complete tasks, and I will reward you with resources. This setting is very comfortable, and it is a little more systematic than the ill-intentioned national luck system (I understand it personally, and I am not trying to troll, I have no objection to the national luck system in other articles) 2. The character training system of Genshin Impact is cleverly combined with the National Games game. Although there are some magic modifications, it is very fun, isn't it [Happy] 3. At present, the update is very stable. I hope the author can keep it until the completion. Please, everyone will do everything🙏🏻 4. There is nothing too OOC about the characters that have appeared so far (this is commendable...) Next, let's talk about the areas that I personally feel can be improved: I really like this article. I have no intention of belittling, dissing, or provoking controversy. I am not writing this to provide writing guidance. I just want to point out some shortcomings of this article in a friendly way. I hope the author will see it. The author does not have to listen to what I say completely. He can just do it at his own pace. Get to the point: (Because the author did not give any definite answer to the relationship between "Kano" and "Captain", let's call him the "protagonist" for the time being) 1. It is rather unclear whether the protagonist is the real person or a "pure actor", which is a very common problem in role-playing literature - because this is really difficult to deal with. If you are the real person, you cannot be OOC. You are the actor. When inheriting the interpersonal relationship of the person you are playing, if it is not written well, it will give people a sense of occupying the magpie's nest. How to deal with this depends on the author's imagination and cannot be expressed. 2. The character of the protagonist is currently a bit flat. Until Chapter 56, readers' impression of him is based on the character of "Captain", but it always feels like there is a veil between him and him. The problem probably lies in the protagonist's psychological activities. The protagonist's psychological activities feel like a narration to me, with very little personal subjectivity. Most of the time, he is analyzing the situation or stating facts. This may be foreshadowing, or it may be that the author is not good at writing about psychological activities (.) The second reason is that the protagonist's motivation for action is not obvious. He does whatever he is told. So far, he has always been passive and lacks subjective initiative. It gives me the feeling that he is confused? (It can also be said that I'll settle for what I've come and let me hallucinate some Kapi Bala [Kapi (Tano) Bala. Jpg]) 3. There is a lot of information about the protagonist at first glance, but very little in detail - after traveling through time, you are bound to the role-playing system to play the role of captain, be selected into the National Games game, work hard to increase the role-playing level, and complete game tasks at the same time. Why does the protagonist travel through time? What did you do before time travel? What is your personality after excluding the interference of acting? What is the purpose of improving the acting level (readers know that most of the reasons are self-protection, but readers know it, and the author will still be embarrassed if he doesn't write it out)? What is the protagonist's understanding of himself, the impact of his "acting as someone else" on himself, and his views on this? These are indispensable issues for perfecting character design, and I hope they will be mentioned later🙏🏻

Very good, very good-looking. At least the Forbidden Land story is over 80%. It's great that the characters are not broken. It doesn't feel like playing the captain, but more like the captain's heavy and upright soul accidentally drifted to another world and gradually regained his memory and strength.

It's good. As long as you get through the first chapter where all the National Games dungeons are super similar, the follow-up will be much better. The characters are not too OOC, and the setting is also very interesting. The protagonist is the captain of the team. Although it is a role-playing system, the role-playing component is not big. It is completely different from other people who just want to be like that person and look like that person. There is no such serious OOC inner drama as "I feel happy when I hear the role-playing level has been upgraded." It's true, it's indeed the captain's own team. Damn, another series about competing with the author for longevity

I really like the captain. I kept skipping the plot, but I listened to everything the captain said. I met the captain by chance after the plot, but I tried my best but couldn't resist the captain's personality charm [face covering] I met the captain by chance in the plot. His personality is as strong as a monster. He tried his best and couldn't resist [laughter]

It looks good and is not OOC. Some novels about the national destiny almost put the "I want to pretend to be B" face on the readers' faces, which is unnatural. This book is very good. You can also feel the charm of the captain. Finally, the protagonist is no longer just Long Aotian.

I have been following the update for a while before I thought of posting a comment. It is rare to see such an anti-conventional article that is not OOC at all. The layout is very comfortable to look at, and there is no vulgar description. The number of words is also very small. The quality is definitely the highest among conventional national sports articles, and the plot is also very interesting and logical. Unlike some articles where it would be embarrassing to brag about it, and there is no I often encounter situations where the writing is too young, black and white, the evil villain persecutes other characters, and the protagonist has unreasonable double standards (for example, in a battle royale article, the protagonist kills to protect himself, but his teammates kill to be inhumane), etc. The only thing is that it is not interesting enough [crying] (ps: I don't have the habit of spoiling in book reviews, so I won't give specific examples for evaluation)

It's a little better than other national destiny books, so it's considered a pass. I think it can be revealed that the protagonist is not from this planet, so that he can better play the role of captain. After all, the captain is not an aboriginal protagonist, nor is he an aborigine of this planet. It fits this perfectly and can improve the performance. There are also those national sports rewards that could be given less, after all, it feels unrealistic because there are too many. It's not fun afterward [eating melon]

I have never played Genshin Impact, and my knowledge of the game is limited to recommendations from friends around me and fan-made collaborations with various anime. However, this book is the best of all the Genshin Impact derivative books I have read so far. I like Genshin Impact's portrayal of these characters, each character with a distinct personality, and the shocking words in this book. The author's writing is really good. I will keep reading until the day the book is finished.

Good looking The characters are restored very realistically, just as I imagined them to be. I hope that the silent characters in the game will become alive with you.

This is the first book about a captain. There is no OOC in the character creation. It doesn't feel like acting, but more like... A captain in a parallel world.

This is the only book that I have read so far that describes foreigners so well. As for the captain, I can only say that the writing is very good, and I hope to maintain the current level. Don't be like other authors. Don't give up halfway.

Ahhhh~ The captain is so handsome, so handsome, so handsome~ This man is so damn charming (˵¯͒¯͒˵) It's so well written, Captain~ Captain, a thousand words can't express my inner feelings at this moment. Perhaps I can only express my admiration in one sentence - a gentleman is like Heng, shining brightly, with noble virtues and dazzling eyes. Captain, your character is like a star, shining brightly in the world. The mountains stand tall and the scenery stops.

There is no drama at all, it is very natural, the plot is natural, the characters are natural, and the dialogue is natural. It gives me a feeling that it is worthy of them! Or that's what they would say! Feeling. It's lighthearted and fun without losing the sense of story. It's great, isn't it? It made me want to go back and have a look. Update soon ma'am! !

Xianpin is really beautiful, you must read it. Personally, I don't think it's OOC. Also, many authors can't write Wendy's character well, but this book has been written, and it's perfect. (Note, this is just my personal opinion. Everyone's senses, ideas, and understanding are different. You may have a different opinion after reading it. Don't scold me for this, okay?) This involves a little bit of spoilers. At first it was said that it was a role, but in fact it was the captain himself. If you don't like role-playing, don't worry. This book has no cp, no heroine, and no ambiguous plots (nothing for men or women), so feel free to read it. However, if there are some plots that make you feel that the Fire Team's comrades are very annoying (they are real comrades, friendship-oriented) and you don't like their cp orientation, don't click on the comment area! Don't click on the comment section! This is my advice (yes, that's right, the person I'm trying to knock against in this friendship has been tricked). Someone knocked on their CP and even sent a CP picture. This is a very delicious book. I read it all in one go. Halfway through, I changed my phone (with a different account) because my phone ran out of battery, so the overall time is about 3 hours longer than what is shown on my current account. If you like Captain, don't miss it, it's so delicious😋 Finally, I am the captain's dog. Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 Why haven't you come back😭😭😭, oh no, such a delicious novel😭

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It can be regarded as a qualified national sports article, but all the extra points belong to the captain and the Vulcan.

Looks good, update soon! ! ! ! Author, do you know the suffocating feeling of watching something exciting in the middle of the night and being stuck in your neck and unable to sleep at all? ? ? ? ? ?！ ! ! Team leader! ! ! 😍😍😍, You are the Eastern Hemisphere😔, I am the Western Hemisphere😞, and together we are the whole earth🌐🌐😁. You are a warm person ☁️☁️☁️☀️ and I am a cold air person 🌙🌨️❄️❄️. When I meet you, I can't stop crying 💧💧🌧️. In addition to the cold front ❄️ is the warm front ☀️. I hope our relationship can become a quasi-stationary front 🌊🌊. Even if the yellow-red intersection angle becomes 90 degrees🛐🚺, I won't let go of your hand🤝🤝🤙👄👄. You are ❤️❤️ Tarim Basin ⛄👨👧👧👩👦👦💦, I am Pacific Water Vapor ♨️♨️♥️, I I have traveled a long distance💃🏻💃🏻👯 and tried my best to get close to you but I can never💇🏼💇🏼reach your heart💔💔. You are at the North Pole🌦️🌦️⛈️, I am at the South Pole🌦️🌦️. Nineteen thousand nine hundred and ninety-eight kilometers apart Do you understand the value of a heavy and upright soul? Therefore, the author is more troublesome, thank you (

I never mind giving high praise to a good book. Compared with the common mindless manipulations of downgrading impressions in the national destiny literature, this book can be said to be perfect. Faced with the unknown, the think tank did not panic, but did its best to collect useful information. At the beginning, the comparison between one's own players and other countries' players was just a normal person's small complaints, rather than mindless bragging about other countries. Players from various countries also have their own ideas and souls, and are not replaceable objects that are only for the benefit of the country and can be discarded at any time in other texts. There are not many flaws, and there are only a few flaws in the ointment, but it is understandable. After all, good books need to be settled, and the plot of rushing to update the book is not what the audience wants to see. All in all, in my opinion this book deserves five stars

The character design is very stable, very B-type, there are no OOC, diaosi's remarks, vests and other poisonous points, it is worth watching.

This is the best national destiny essay I have ever seen. It is different from other national destiny essays. It is not a template. It really has its own way of writing. It has a large layout and good writing style.

One of the few books that has not collapsed, and the journey of continuing the journey of the captain is also very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

It's good to read, I love reading it, Captain yyds, but I suddenly realized that the author had read the previous one, and then I was fooled. I hope I can finish writing this one. Wow, my Captain has become a landmark [crying][crying][crying]

Generally speaking, I rarely give reviews to books, but this book is really well written. From the perspective of national destiny, it is inspiring and unique. From the description of the captain and Mawika, it is very delicate and not OOC at all. It is really amazing! [Love][love][love]

This book is very beautiful\(//∇//)\ But when the acting level is reached, does it mean that you have truly become the captain? Speaking of acting, if the memory that belongs to the captain fills this person's mind and the original memory slowly fades, then is it the original captain who has restored his memory, or has the captain replaced this person? Okay, through the first plot, well, it turns out that the original captain has recovered his memory. How should I put it? This is a lot of information. I hope there will be more chapters. Two chapters every day is not enough! ! !

It's really great to read. This is the second book I've read through without skipping a beat. Each character's personality is on its own line. The captain's portrayal is really perfect. I'm looking forward to the next plot.

It's good to read. I haven't read many National Games novels, but this one is the best one I've ever read. Unlike other National Games fandoms, it's all about the protagonist. There are also a lot of content about other countries and the countries behind them. Personally, I think it's more comfortable to watch than other National Games fandoms. Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

Nice! Among the Genshin Kingdom Games stories I have read, they are of very high quality. The characters are basically not OOC, and are they a little bit team-friendly? It's okay I love it! Even two chapters a day are not enough. Please keep updating the author.

It looks good, so the author please update it quickly! ! ! I rely on your novel to relieve my longing for the captain [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Ahhhhhhhhhhh Captain, the characters are well written, I can feel Mavica's cheerfulness and the captain's calmness, the author will update soon

The writing is very good, really good. It doesn't have the strong flavor of traditional national sports writing. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air among them. Please write more, it's really not enough! ! ! ! ! ! !