The Ninth Sealed Artifact: My Fantasy Will Come True

After reading Chapter 70, there are no surprises. There is no embarrassment like showing off the national sentiments and righteousness of God, and there is no battle of wits in the middle school at the end of the tenth day. The rhythm is very good and it is not a brainless fast-paced novel. It's not bad in Tomato, I hope it won't be bad.

It's good-looking, the protagonist has a good brain, and first of all, and then this, secondly, we first divide it into three major points, and then divide each major point into seven small points, so: people will die if they don't eat, your grandma is a straight woman, the sun will rise from the east, your mother is Female, your father is a male. You should close your eyes before sleeping, put on shoes before going out, bring an umbrella when it rains outside, eat when you are hungry, believe that light will turn into Ultraman, run away if you can't beat him, beg for mercy if you can't escape, break up with him if you can't beg for mercy, and finally give up thinking. (The main thing is that I don't say [shy])

From the moment I opened this book, I felt that the author's foreshadowing ability was good. He set up a lot of suspense and set up the overall world story line very deeply. The advantages are obvious. The writing style is very close to the masterpiece. However, if the links are more detailed, for example, when setting up the shielded characters, I personally think there is still a certain degree of chaotic thinking. The ending of the world line is too abrupt. It is a big problem. The introduction and foreshadowing of the original world are written but not enough. I only know that it is a novel. There is a living world. When I saw the end, I thought there would be a period of exploration of self-ability. It might take some time to develop, straighten out the order of the world, and understand the story of the original world in the meantime, but it ended all at once. The story of the hermit was not introduced, and neither was the mother or father. Where did the hope left in the original world come from? There should be a group of great people working hard behind it, or a group of people who are causing harm to the world, right? Not introduced at all. If it can be written, it should be sublimated to another level, and the mission and belief of protecting the world can be conveyed to readers. I can only say that it is a good article so far, but it is not too good, because the subconscious is not fully used, or the author actually wants to express that the subconscious already has it but is not aware of it. It is not until the mystery is solved for the protagonist that the two channels of Ren and Du are opened? If this is the case, then the author's writing style is still lacking. In short, after reading a lot of doubts, from the reader's point of view, there are still some suspense that have not been clearly answered. I personally think that if it is expanded, the world view setting should be comparable to that of "Starting from the Red Moon". I hope that the author can see stronger writing skills in his subsequent works and bring more complete works to readers.

Very nice! ! Recommended by me who has been reading suspenseful and horror novels for many years! It even feels like the author is a master who opened a small account to write it. It's very worth reading:) It's just that there are less than 100 chapters and it's not enough to read (I secretly remind you to update more)

Really nice to look at. To be honest, I didn't like the two characters who talked a lot at first. But as the plot line progresses, each character has his own charm. I feel that the author's writing is really deep and made me spend some time thinking about it. The ending felt quite big and had nothing to do with what I imagined, but this unexpected ending made it more interesting. It seemed like the protagonist was the only one left in the end, which made me feel a little lost.

The structure of the article is clear and the writing style is also good. It is clear and smooth without being awkward. There are no obvious bugs when I look at it now. It is funny and easy to understand, and the suspense is well set up. So far, there is no female protagonist, no embarrassing dirty jokes, and it is very comfortable to read.

What caught my attention was the countless fathers in it. The fathers were all very well written. Family love is a proposition that will never disappear. My father never sticks to a certain character. Sometimes their love is just right, and sometimes it is as heavy as a thousand pounds. A certain moment in the book can always touch people's hearts. However, the characters in it are very emotional and loyal, and the narration from a God's perspective sometimes has a strong personal bias (this may be a matter of personal taste, some of which are a bit unacceptable). Overall it's good.

The plot is compact, the writing is not novice, and there is no obvious evil point at present. Maybe it was because the title and cover weren't attractive enough. At first glance, I thought it was a Tomato-level novel. After I clicked in and read the text, I realized that it was well written.

So far, I think it's okay. I finished reading it in one go and looked through the author's comments. I feel like he is a very interesting person. Maybe it's because he's a newbie and has a new book. The ratings and number of followers are very low. I hope this book will get better and better.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a satisfying book. The plot is tense but the pace is slow, and the writing is sketchy with a bit of black humor. Unfortunately, the amount of content at this stage is still too small, and the plot has not developed significantly yet. I am quite anxious to wait for the update [shy]

It's good-looking, very good-looking, with no obvious poisonous points so far, the rhythm is tight, the plot is exciting, and the protagonist's IQ is online. College students don't have much words to praise. Anyway, this book is really well written [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It can be said to be a masterpiece. The non-toxic points of the plot are connected smoothly, and various details are closely connected. There is no big opening and closing, and a lot of holes are not filled. It is not written something that seems to be advanced. It is very logical. I don't understand why the score is so low. It is true that the ending is a lot sloppy for three reasons, but it is really a masterpiece. I highly recommend it!

It's so calmly advanced, and all the points of interest are complete. The writing rhythm of this book is perfect even now that I'm about to read the latest chapter, and I've finished about 200 chapters. It's hard to imagine that it has any shortcomings. Compared with many novels that have fascinated me in the past, this one is too new and powerful. How should I put it? It's not that it's novel, but that the writing style is advanced and orderly. Watching the progress gradually advance to the latest chapter, my heart is filled with despair. [Petrochemical] really cannot accept the experience of chasing books.

After reading it, the world view setting is grand (but it is too short and not expanded), and the plot is quite exciting. However, the artificial intelligence chapter is not scary enough. If the author has more money and continues to expand it into a longer chapter, there will definitely be success.

I haven't kept up with the progress yet, but I read dozens of chapters in one go. It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas before writing, at least there is an outline. The plot is relatively slow, but still attractive. The writing is also good. The new book needs support. I hope the author can stick to it.

It's a good read, the wits are enjoyable, and the plot is weird. It's a rare good book on Tomato. I don't know why the rating is low.

I have finished reading it. First of all, it is different from the introduction, but the overall impression is not bad. Secondly, the ending is a bit rushed. It could be lengthened a little, and maybe it would have a better reading effect. As for the writing technique, I feel that the foreshadowing and development of some details and clues can be more subtle and coherent (of course it is not bad in itself, it just can be better). Finally, I would like to give five-star reviews to some of the plots. I think that as a thriller and horror novel, it can make people's spine run wild while reading it during the day. This is excellent👍🏻.

I seem to have seen that "Dragon" is a work of similar style, youthful passion and bizarre imagination. It makes people relaxed and happy to watch, and I can't help but get involved. The author must write well, come on

Oh my god, how could I be so addicted to this book? [Crying] [Crying] I have been reading this book every day from 110,000 words to now, because I don't like the New World plot so much that I decided to skip it and read it again. I thought there was at least one million words of plot left, so why did it end? [Crying] [Crying] Overall, it's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the author's new book!

Wonderful plot and story, sophisticated writing techniques

It's good to read. Although I've only read about 20 chapters so far, the author's writing is very good and the writing style is very good.

Super pretty! ! ! ! Why does it only have a score of 7.1 If it's so beautiful! ! ! !

It's good to read, I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. Also, the rating of 7.5 Is low.

The material for this question is very good, and the chapter on the monkey's paw is very good.

The book has been in short supply for a long time. The characters and plot of this book are all online. I highly recommend it.

Very well written! Support a wave

This book is very good. The rating can really go up by at least one point. Maybe it's because of insufficient funds. In fact, I could have written more than ten more chapters to explain the previous things clearly, although it's not necessary.

The author's writing is very good, the setting is interesting, the plot is not toxic, and the characters' emotions are unique. I feel like it may become popular in the future, so the author must stick to it, come on!

The plot is novel and the SCP series contains characters that are well and delicately portrayed. It is worth watching.

Very nice! !! No nonsense, the world view is also very grand